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This is the current revision of this page, as edited by Sarahdanes (talk | contribs) at 21:51, 9 May 2021 (Commented to leave feedback on the onewheel article). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this version.

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Feedback for Onewheel article: (more in depth analysis of the article can be found in a sandbox on your user page)

- article is very well organized, neutral and well written

- article is simple, but still includes all relevant and needed content to thoroughly explain this topic

- IMPORTANT: find more reliable sources as much of the information in the article is from sources that seem biased

- the first sentence in the lead can also be edited to be less wordy and only include necessary info

- minor grammar errors should be corrected

- for my own article I will ensure that my sources are unbiased and reliable as well as this is very important Sarahdanes (talk) 21:51, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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