Template:Did you know nominations/Eve Stewart

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 11:30, 7 November 2013 (UTC)

Eve Stewart

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... ~~that set designer Eve Stewart has had collaborations with Mike Leigh and Tom Hooper?~~

Reviewed: Njai Dasima (1932 film)

Created by Taylor Trescott (talk). Self nominated at 20:23, 8 October 2013 (UTC).

I think we shouldn't be using this type of POVish hook. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 06:51, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

In what way is it POVish? Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 10:44, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

Tweaked hook a little. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 10:49, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

Article is new enough, long enough, well-referenced. I rewrote several instances of close paraphrasing; you really must rewrite the material in your own words to avoid copyvio on Wikipedia. The hook is ok, but it could be better. How about:
ALT1: ... that award-winning production designer Eve Stewart described her experience as art director on Mike Leigh's Naked as "a bit of a shock"? Yoninah (talk) 00:03, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

That's a very good hook. I've struck the original. Taylor Trescott - ^{my talk} + _{my edits} 00:07, 29 October 2013 (UTC)

Thanks. As DYK rules don't allow me to approve my own hook, I leave it to another reviewer to finish up this nomination. Yoninah (talk) 00:21, 29 October 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 review: format correct, short enough, hooky, fact and quote are in article and cited. The existing book cite for the quote had no google preview, I have added a 2nd citation to a web copy of the same for verifiability. Remainder of approval per Yoninah's review and copyedit. Good to go. Baldy Bill (sharpen the razor|see my reflection) 22:02, 6 November 2013 (UTC)