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16:02, 8 January 2021 (UTC)

NPOV tag

I've received your message about the NPOV tag. I'll answer it here on your talk page since this is were most routine communication takes place. I placed the tag on the article because I felt it didn't quite represent its subject in a neutral way. Two examples of this include: wise and prudent management ... and Chip Mong has attained prominence as a leader .... Part of the problem might be that the background section is sourced from the company's website. What you can do to remedy this issue is to rewrite the article in a strictly neutral and densely sourced fashion. This entails having a source for every claim you make and avoiding overly positive language. I would also recommend against linking the company's website in the main text. Best, Modussiccandi (talk) 10:04, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chip Mong moved to draftspace

Are you associated with this company, or are they paying you to write an article? Please see WP:COI and WP:UPE to learn how to address those concerns, I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. Once you address those concerns, and when you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:50, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Just saw your email. I usually don't respond via email unless there is some type of privacy issue, which isn't the case here. Of course I don't mind questions. First, here on your talk page you need to address the potential COI/UPE concerns. Use the links above to see how to handle that. Another editor (above) also found the article not to be neutral, and gave good suggestions. Remember that WP is an encyclopedia, not an advertising forum. Just state facts, don't embellish, get rid of phrases like "With a strong foundation....", and be wary of simply listing products/services, which act like a promotional brochure. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 11:27, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi [User talk:Onel5969|TT me],

I have summited my article for view and also stated the COI. However, at the bottom of article I saw a part called Categories containing 3 messages:

Pending AfC submissionsAfC
pending submissions by age/20 days ago
AfC submissions by date/04 May 2021

Is there any action I should complete toward these messages? Lorheng