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Reasons for my raising wikistress:

Some general observations on Wikipedia governance being broken and good editors trampled by the system
Wikipedia is a kawaii mistress :)


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Hello, professor. I added North Korea's pollution information to the main project reflecting your feedback. Please check my sandbox. Thank you. Once again, I'm sorry I missed the deadline.

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I have reverted [1] because it seems to have removed more than you intended. Please reinstate the edit. Phil Bridger (talk) 12:14, 17 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Phil Bridger, Thanks. No idea what went wrong with my previous edit (script failure?) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:38, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I've had similar issues when I have been editing at the same time as sections have been removed, as seems to have happened here. I think the MediaWiki software identifies section by numbers, but its edit conflict spotting capabilities don't see when the numbers have changed. I'm sure there must be a phabricator ticket open for this, but I'm afraid that I can't be arsed to check or raise one myself. Phil Bridger (talk) 21:19, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Week15: wiki project

Hello professor. My name is Chaehyoseung. Can I choose wiki topic this? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evolutionary_ethics thank you. --Chaehyoseung (talk) 12:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, Yes, this is a good topic. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor, I finish the wiki! Please check it. Thank you :) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A7%84%ED%99%94_%EC%9C%A4%EB%A6%AC --Chaehyoseung (talk) 11:52, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, Good, but please improve the quality of your prose. Another volunteer has complained that "이 문서는 자연스럽지 않게 번역되었으며, 기계 번역에 의해 작성되었을 수도 있습니다.". Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:00, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor, I've finished revising the article. Please check it. Thank You!--Chaehyoseung (talk) 18:21, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, I don't see any improvements except that you removed the template indicating the problem ([2]). That's not fixing the problem, that's hiding it. Please improve the prose, or if you think it is fine, please contact the volunteer who identified the problem ([3]) and get them to confirm the problem no longer exists. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:04, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

When I first told the professor that I had completed writing a wiki article, I already accepted feedback on the announcement and revised the article. However, the notice didn't go down even after a while, so I deleted only the notice and wrote it. But I didn't know this was the wrong way, I'm sorry. I'm sorry to bother you, but could you tell me how to find volunteers who left revised feedback on the article? --Chaehyoseung (talk) 15:25, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chaehyoseung, I see. You are right that you did attempt to address those issues, but your newer edits have been reverted by Korean volunteer ([4] 흫흫. I am not seeing why they did so. To resolve any misunderstanding, please leave a message at the talk page of the Korean volunteer who added the initial complaint, asking them if they think the article is fine now: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Ykhwong as well as at the talk page of the editor who undid your other edits here https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:%ED%9D%AB%ED%9D%AB . Hopefully we can learn something of interest from this incident. Good job so far! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished my assignment. / Minjeong Lee (Lxxmnmn)

Hello, Professor! Thank you for your kind advice.

‘The Act on the Protection of Children and youth against sex offenses’ is a Korean law, so there was no substitute information in English Wikipedia. Instead, I found information about this law in Korea Law Translation Center. Additionally, I have revised a few references on the Welcome to video case.

I added a newspaper article that talked about the social significance of this drama to the reference of the 《ko:언내추럴》.

Thank you for teaching me during spring semester. I hope you to enjoy this summer!

--Lxxmnmn (talk) 10:19, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lxxmnmn, Well done, and I am glad you created a userpage - now you can show it as part of your portfolio when applying for jobs and such! I am glad you enjoyed our class! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:36, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Third Article - SuBin Choi

Hello professor.

I have completed the third Wikipedia article for extra credit.

Translated the English document 'Anchored Instruction' into Korean.

English documents: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Anchored_Instruction

Third article translated: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A7%A5%EB%9D%BD%EC%A0%95%EC%B0%A9%EC%A0%81_%EC%88%98%EC%97%85

The topic was also added to the dashboard.

Please check!--Subin3754 (talk) 11:26, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Subin3754, Very good job, I think you will have enough credit points for a good grade now. I'll be grading the wiki work soon! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. professor : )--Subin3754 (talk) 13:19, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished my assignment. /HARI KIM

Hello, professor. I completed my second article! Please Check.

Click here.--> "Animal_welfare_and_rights_in_South_Korea"

Thank you.--HARI KIM (talk) 13:32, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HARI KIM, Well done, please publish your article (and add WP:CATEGORIES) to finish the assignment. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor Piotrus, I have published my second article. Please Check. Thank you. CLICK HERE --HARI KIM (talk) 15:20, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HARI KIM, Good, I'll review it tomorrow. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:12, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor! We added references - Kim Jina , Wang sihyun

Hello, professor. We added references to each article as you gave us feedback. The links are as follows: [ https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%82%98%EB%A5%B4%EC%8B%9C%EC%8B%9C%EC%A6%98 , https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pansori] Sihyun and I looked for references to add to the article, but there were not many things to refer to because the topic was a dictionary concept. We found it as much as possible and added it, so please check if it's okay. Thank you. --Kimjina00 (talk) 14:00, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kimjina00, Very good, it is much better now. But please note that per WP:V and WP:CITE policies of Wikipedia, unreferenced content may be removed, so the unreferenced parts will not fully count towards your grade. That said, I think you will get good grade anyway - but if you can find any more references and add it, it would be very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kim Yujin ) Wikipedia Assignment

Hi, professor. I'm Kim Yujin taking your class 'Collective Intelligence'. I finally did my Wikipedia assignment(translating 2 English articles to Korean). I'm so sorry for being late. Here are my articles' links. (Maker Culture / Stereotype Threat) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Iamyujinkim/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A58#%EB%AF%B8%EB%94%94%EC%96%B4 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Iamyujinkim/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A57 Please let me know if there is any problem. Thank you for your response in advance. Iamyujinkim (talk) 15:10, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Iamyujinkim, Don't worry about being late with the articles, the most important thing is whether they are finished now :) Your translations look good, please publish them and then add WP:CATEGORIES to finish the assignment. Please make sure to your topics to our dashboard. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:16, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dear, professor

I have completed all the assignments in this class including the weekly 10 edits. Please check it. If there is anything unfinished, I would appreciate it if you could let me know. --Nayokang (talk) 15:55, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nayokang, Very good, I'll be posting the grades shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:25, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Richard B. Hetnarski Wikipedia Page - Updated

I have added a number of citations and additional content based on your previous comments. Hopefully at some time you can review the page and indicate whether it would be appropriate for me to remove the "it lacks sufficient corresponding inline citations" maintenance template or indicate what additional information is required. Thanks in advance. Cayman42 (talk) 19:18, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cayman42, Thank you. To help facilitate your improvement of this article, I've converted the generic template into inline templates, indicating which parts of the article need citations. I also removed a WP:PEACOCKish adjective. Feel free to ask me for further clarifications. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:27, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Piotrus, Thank you very much. The inline templates are very helpful. I will either find references or delete the statements. I understand the removal of the adjective. Cayman42 (talk) 13:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pokemon articles

If only you wanted to also check, there's also crap Pokemon articles such as Chikorita, Giratina, Arceus, Absol and possibly also Entei and Lapras, just letting you know. Have a good day. 49.149.124.152 (talk) 22:33, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. May I suggest creating an account? Ping User:Natg 19. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:14, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my sandbox/ PARK CHAEJEONG

Hello, professor. I moved my article in the sandbox to the main space. Please check it out :) But I couldn't find a way to integrate the article I wrote about the existing article - beauty store. :( I don't think it's just inserting a link, but if you tell me how, I'll do it right away. Thank you! Pkccccj 05:13, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pkccccj, Your article is still in your sandbox. You need to copy and paste your content into the new article, ensuring that you don't delete any non-duplicated, relevant content. A copy paste either in visual editor or code (edit source) mode should work. Please try it! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:34, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Question

Can I translate the topic of "Antipositivism" into Korean as an assignment? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Antipositivism --Leehyunah (talk) 08:24, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyunah, Yes, you can. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

We upload final wiki project / Shinhee Kim, Minkyo Jeong

Hello professor, We added few more references and finally upload Wiki Page. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%88%ED%99%9C%EC%9A%A9 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Korean_Proverb In English page, We tried to find the data as the professor advised, but it seems there was a limit. We found references in each paragraph, but we couldn't fully add references to every sentence. Please check the page. Thank you for teaching us well during the semester! Shinhee Kim 09:57, 20 June 2021 (UTC) Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 09:59, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Shinhee Kim and Kyokyoyaaaaa: There are a number of fixes required for Korean Proverb. First, it starts with the Korean hangul term '속담'. That's not correct. It should start with the English term. If 속담 means 'Korean proverb' it does not even need to be mentioned in the article. See Chinese proverb article for an example of how to format the lead. Second, there are still unreferenced paragraphs in the article. Please make sure each paragraph is referenced. Third, Korean proverbs like "황정승(黃政丞)네 치마 하나 세 모녀가 돌려 입듯" need to be translated. Lastly, there is a block of Korean text at the bottom (starting with 『우리나라 속담의 특징과 내용-무형의 증인-』(강신항,정화출판사,1979). Please translate it or remove it. If it is intended as a further reading section, please format it properly - see MOS:FURTHER. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:58, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Piotrus:Hello Professor. We have revised the article to reflect all of your comments. Please check. Thank you. Kyokyoyaaaaa talk💬 12:22, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyokyoyaaaaa, Well done making improvements. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:18, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About wiki projects and others/Yerim Jang

Hello professor Piotr, first of all, happy birthday! I hope you had a great day. o(*^▽^*)┛ I completed the wiki project and weekly blogging.(Ko:반과학, Ko:빈곤의 여성화) If there is anything lacking, please let me know. And I will try to make the article with red links gradually during the vacation. Thank you for the interesting lecture. --Tichiel (talk) 11:52, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tichiel, Thank you for the wishes :) I have reviewed Ko:반과학 and Ko:빈곤의 여성화. They look good, well done! Good job completing the assignment, and I hope you learned useful skills! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:00, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Happy Birthday!

I finished some Extra Credit’s editors at Week16-Yang Ruixin

Hello, Professor.Happy Birthday! This is Yang Ruixin.
I did some Extra Credits in these two English articles:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xiamen_University#Faculties_and_research_institutes
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Wandering_Earth#Pre-Production
Please check them, Thank you!
And I have a problem:
Should I have to send all my Extra Credit editors' records this semester to your email before June 27th? ☺ SIA YANG replay here 12:22, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SIA YANG, Your extra credit edits are good, but please note this one was rejected as the cited source is not considered reliable - feel free to restore it but with a more reliable source. You don't have to email me a lost of your extra credit edits, but it is good if you add them to your list of articles in the dashboard. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:02, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

2nd Wikipedia Article Feedback - Jaewook Bae

Dear Professor,

I have almost done my 2nd article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84_%ED%8F%89%ED%99%94

Please check and feedback my article. Thank you.

Sincerely,--Plusbae00 (talk) 12:53, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plusbae00, Good work, please add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to the article. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:03, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Wikipedia Assignment - Yeseo Lim

Hello professor. I am Yeseo Lim. I just finished translating the first article from Wikipedia. https://ko.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Ivisy6952/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5&oldid=29552545 I did my best for this assignment. Please confirm!

Also, the second article I chose is Medical sociology. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Medical_sociology Please tell me if I can translate this article. Thank you! --Ivisy6952 (talk) 13:16, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Ivisy6952, Good, please publish your first article (and remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it). Your second topic is approved as well, please let me know ASAP when you finish it. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:06, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

2020082424_LeeHyunA_assignment

I completed the task of translating both articles into Korean. I attached two links below. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Leehyunah/sandbox#%EB%B0%98%EC%96%91%EC%84%B1%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Leehyunah/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 --Leehyunah (talk) 14:27, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyunah, User:Leehyunah/sandbox needs to be moved to the Korean Wikipedia, then I'll check it again. Your ko:사용자:Leehyunah/연습장 is a start but not finished - you need to add references (footnotes). Then you can publish it, but remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it. Please let me know when both articles are published on Koreran Wikipedia. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:09, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong

I translated the article here! Thank you:)--Soyeongs (talk) 21:27, 20 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Soyeongs, Please publish the article, removing the strange __ from the headings, and remember to add WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to it. Then ping me again and I'll review the live version. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:11, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check the main assignment. / Lee ye han

Hello, professor. I checked the feedback on the assignment. I modified the feedback you gave me in the article. And the first article, "정보격차" was completed at 7:54 p.m. on June 18 and completed the article by moving documents from the practice site, while the second article, "과소비(사치)" was completed at 9:39 p.m. on June 18. Please check the assignment again.

And I've just confirmed that I've been offered to combine my "과소비(사치)" article, but I don't know how to merge it with other articles. I'd appreciate it if you could review the assignment first! Thank you.--Lee ye han (talk) 01:04, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

First article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8

Second article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EC%86%8C%EB%B9%84_(%EC%82%AC%EC%B9%98)#%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%EC%84%B1%EC%9E%A5

@Lee ye han: To merge the articles, copy paste content from one to the other, ensuring then no useful content is removed (lost) in the merge, while removing any duplicate information. Please let me know when you complete the merge - good luck! If this is unclear, please also read ko:위키백과:문서 합치기. If you need help with code on Korean Wikipedia, please ask for it here: ko:위키백과:디스코드 대화방.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:14, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Finished the main project / jinsin chen

Hello, professor!

I'm jinsin chen(chen chen)

I finished my two main project assignments.

The first article is to expand the translation. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/2019%E5%86%A0%E7%8A%B6%E7%97%85%E6%AF%92%E7%97%85%E7%96%AB%E6%83%85%E5%AF%B9%E6%95%99%E8%82%B2%E7%9A%84%E5%BD%B1%E5%93%8D

The second is to create an article. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%96%B0%E9%97%BB%E5%AD%A6%E5%8F%B2

Please give me relevant feedback. Thank you for teaching for a semester~

Thank youJinsin chentalk 07:40, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jinsin chen, Well done completing the assignment, your translations look good and I hope they'll be read by many people! I hope you learned useful skills during this project. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:16, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my article /PARK CHAEJEONG

Hello, professor. Finally, I finished writing on a wiki page titled "Beauty Store and H&B Store" from the sandbox. Please check it :) Also, please let me know if there's anything left for me to do. Thank you! Pkccccj 07:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

What you need to do is to WP:MERGE this content to the article on beauty store. Creatign a new article on the same topic is not ideal. Please copy pastse this to beauty store, while preserving useful content such as the lead and categories. If this is unclear, please also read ko:위키백과:문서 합치기. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 08:18, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

2020082424 LeeHyunA

I modified two documents after receiving feedback from the professor. Please give me feedback.

The first article : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%98%EC%96%91%EC%84%B1%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 Second article : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B4%88%EC%95%88:%EC%9D%B4%EC%A4%91%EB%B6%80%EB%8B%B4 --Leehyunah (talk) 09:43, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Leehyunah: Well done, you are almost finished.
Regarding ko:반양성주의, you list several alternative names, but not 반실증주의 ? Why?
Regarding ko:초안:이중부담, it looks good except there are some paragraphs that are missing a reference. Please add the missing references so that all paragraphs are referenced and then you can publish the article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:06, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

ko:초안:이중부담 I added more footnotes reflecting the feedback. Is it done now? ko:반양성주의 I don't understand the feedback that the professor gave me: 'you list several alternative names, but not 반실증주의? Why?' Once again, I would appreciate it if you could explain it simply.--Leehyunah (talk) 10:09, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyunah, Well done improving the article. I asked if 반실증주의 should be added to (反it性主義, 反os性主義, 反os性主義, antiinaturalism)? Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:16, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus I think a mistake occurred while translating. I deleted that part. Are both of my writings(ko:초안:이중부담,ko:반양성주의) over?--Leehyunah (talk) 12:56, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Leehyunah, For our class, yes, as I think you already did enough for the A+ grade. I do encourage you to continue developing your skills, and make a wiki userpage for your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:19, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Optional assignment and additional blogs - Jaewook Bae

Dear professor,

I sent you a Hanyang LMS private message about my optional assignment and additional blogs.

And I added WP:CATEGORIES and interlanguage links to the article (applied your feedbacks).

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84_%ED%8F%89%ED%99%94

Please check! Thank you.

Sincerely, --Plusbae00 (talk) 10:32, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plusbae00, Thank you for the notification. Internal LMS messages are difficult to see, so it is best if you communicate with me here or through email (as I asked on the syllabus). I will reply to your LMS message when I find it. Well done with your ko:세계 평화 article, good job! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:08, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I understood. I'll send an email. Thank you.--Plusbae00 (talk) 06:16, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About the assignment / Lee ye han

Hello, professor. I read about the methods and precautions for merging Wikipedia through the link you left. When I read what I had to check before merging, I found out that the article I wrote "과소비" and the article "사치" that came with the merger proposal were not subject to the merger. There is a difference in concept from the topic the item is dealing with, so it should exist as a separate item. Because the titles of the two articles are similar, but the meanings of the articles are different.

Please check the assignment with the link I left today. Thank you!--Lee ye han (talk) 15:11, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han, Excellent argument, please leave it on the talk page of the relevant articles on Korean Wikipedia as your objection to the merger (since it is not me who you have to convince but the Korean volunteer(s) there). You should also ensure that your article has interlanguage links pointing to the English article that it was translated from (you may have to do so here: https://www.wikidata.org/wiki/Q3174091#sitelinks-wikipedia ). Ps. Also, your content from ko:위키백과:정보격차 needs to be at ko:정보격차 Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:20, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

First article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EA%B2%A9%EC%B0%A8

Second article: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EC%86%8C%EB%B9%84_(%EC%82%AC%EC%B9%98)#%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%EC%84%B1%EC%9E%A5

Please check my article2 /PARK CHAEJEONG

Hello, professor. First, I made a 'proposing a merger - in the existing Beauty Store article. I also copied and pasted at the 'Beauty Store and H&B Store' except for duplicated and unnecessary content from previous article. Is this the right way to do it..? I'm sorry if I didn't quite understand:( I think it was insufficient even though I referred to the guidelines... Pkccccj 14:17, 21 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Pkccccj: I am afraid that you need to do the merger yourself. What you have done seems to be to add a merge proposal, asking the community to discuss whether the merge should happen. Your initial assignment was to expand the beauty store article, so there is no need to create a stand-alone and separate article on Beauty Store and H&B Store. You should copy and paste your content to the beauty store article. Please refer to the English and Korean guides on how to do so, but really, it is just a matter of copying and pasting your content to the target article, and ensuring nothing is lost or duplicated when you are done. Please let me know which part is unclear/difficult and I'll try to help further if you need more assistance. Copy paste is a useful skill to master on Wikipedia, just as in other contexts. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong

Hello Professor! I did my work here!! Please check it thank you☺️ --Soyeongs (talk) 06:24, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Soyeongs, Well done, I think you can publish your article by moving it from ko:초안:상업화 to ko:상업화. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:31, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

[Collective Intelligence, my final articles, Young-Joo Park, 2018064020] Hello Professor! I finished my articles~!

(Young-Joo Park, 2018064020)

Dear Professor Piotr


Hello Professor! I'm Young-Joo Park in Collective Intelligence course I was able to complete the article with your help of the past. So It's my final articles


1. 깃허브(github)

2. 줌(zoom)


I'm sorry to my fault for account blocking problem, so I think it's so little lacking. But Now is the time to submit.

thank you for your help and lecture~!!

I hope to meet someday~!!!


From Young-Joo Park

Capoco1234 (talk) 06:34, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Capoco1234, Very good, I'll review them soon. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:15, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong

I moved it! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%83%81%EC%97%85%ED%99%94 --Soyeongs (talk) 06:37, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Soyeongs, Very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:17, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my article3 /PARK CHAEJEONG

Professor, I tried to merge with the existing article - beauty store, so Can you check if I revise it - beauty store and H&B store correctly? Again, I am sorry to bother you :(:( Pkccccj 07:52, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pkccccj, I am afraid you still need to keep trying. Right now you merged some content of beauty store to the beauty store and H&B store article. That's not correct - you should merge your (new) content to the existing (old) article. Also, your merge did not preserve elements such as pictures or categories. Please try again. You may want to experiment in the sandbox first. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:20, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, Piotrus. Then should I add the contents of my sandbox by expanding it from the existing beauty store article...? Also, I removed duplicate contents in the process of copying and pasting, but does the professor mean that all existing contents should be preserved? Pkccccj 13:54, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pkccccj, I think you can keep all the existing content at the Beauty store, and adapt them as the WP:LEAD section of your new article. Then you can copy-paste your new content below the existing content. Make sure not to remove the categories. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:15, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my main project / Hyeonyoung Lee

@Piotrus: Hello, professor. I added North Korea's pollution information to the main project reflecting your feedback. Please check my sandbox. Thank you. Once again, I'm sorry I missed the deadline.--Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 10:13, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Very good, please publish your article now. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 13:21, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nagroda Sztuki im. Marii Anto i Elsy von Freytag-Loringhoven.

Nie jestem w stanie się ustosunkować, ponieważ za blisko znam osoby wymienione w dyskusji, żeby być neutralnym --SalomonSalmon (talk) 11:57, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'd like to ask you about my grades.

@Piotrus: Hello, professor. I'd like to ask you about my grades. I want to improve my grades by receiving additional credit. Can I get additional credit if I complete the blog posting that I couldn't do before? Also, is the 'translation' mentioned in the notice from Korean to English? Is it a translation from English to Korean? I would appreciate it if you could reply. Have a good evening.--Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 15:09, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Make up blog posts will be counted but with the late penalty. And yes, the translation is similar to our main wiki assignment, chose one or more topics from the English wiki and translate them to Korean.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:08, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki article editing( baek ji woo)

I added a definition of a companion animal. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pet_culture_in_South_Korea#companion_animal--Jiwoo2020 (talk) 15:10, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Jiwoo2020, Very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:07, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Translation Topic Confirmation for Additional Credit_Chaeeun Park

Can i choice this topic? 1) Japanese popular culture 2) Women's history 3) Women in South Korea 4) Targeted advertising

Please check my topic Thank you Chae eun Park (talk) 15:41, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yes., those are acceptable. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:07, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Translation Topic Inquiry : SeungJae Leee

I'm going to translate Wikipedia's article to get additional points. Is it okay to choose these topics?

1. Americanization 2. Charismatic authority 3. Sociological imagination 4. Development theory--SeungJae Leee (talk) 21:35, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SeungJae Leee, Yes, those are ok, you can start anytime. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 03:58, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia article _ Eunsun Choi

Professor, I uploaded my article in here https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:This_is_silverline/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#%EA%B0%90%EC%8B%9C_%EC%9E%90%EB%B3%B8%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 Please check!

And I tried to finish all assignment but I'm not sure. Could you tell me whether I missed something to do for assignment or not? --This is silverline (talk) 00:12, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This is silverline, This is a good start, although it would be better if you followed the deadlines and showed me this a month ago - we are running out of time to finish the project (but there is still time to do so). To finish the article, please make sure that all content (paragraphs) is referenced. Your article also contains no blue links (hyperlinks, see WP:BTW). Once those issues are fixed, you can publish it (move it to the main namespace, see WP:MOVE). After the move, please add WP:CATEGORIES and interlangusage links to the article. Then the translation of your first article is finished. Please remember that the project requires the translation of two articles to be completed. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:57, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Selecting topics for additional credits

@Piotrus: Hello, professor? Can I also translate 'Sexuality in South Korea', 'Environmental, social and corporate governance' to earn additional points? I would appreciate it if you could reply. Thank you. Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talk) 00:18, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hyeonyoung Lee 21, Yes, those are acceptable topics. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:58, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Selecting topic for extra credits / Lee ye han

Hello, professor. To get extra points, I chose 'Deviance (sociology)' as the topic of the article to be translated. And I finished writing the article. Please check it. Thank you!--Lee ye han (talk) 06:10, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han, Good, please publish your article, adding categories and interlanguage links. Please ensure you translate all referenced content (right now your version has only 8 references but English, almost 20). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:32, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Lee_ye_han/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5#%EA%B5%AC%EC%A1%B0%EC%A0%81_%EA%B8%B0%EB%8A%A5%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98

Publishing main project

@Piotrus: Hello, professor? I published my main project, Pollution in Korea . Thanks for your help. I'm sorry, but I have a question. Is yesterday's my grade included in the issue of the main project? Since the main project was publishued after the results came out, can the score go up? Thank you:-) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hyeonyoung Lee 21 (talkcontribs) 15:04, June 23, 2021 (UTC)

The yesterday's grade is not final, and your extra edits, like finishing your project and/or doing extra credits, can improve it further over the next few days (until the June 27th). And please remember to WP:SIGN your posts, it is a good habit on Wikipedia (hopefully new software will make it automatic in the near future). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:28, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor/ Yun So Yeong

Hello Professor!! I translated another article. It is my article. I hope it will be okay:) Thank you!!--Soyeongs (talk) 07:11, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Soyeongs, Very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:31, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've published additional article. / Lee ye han

I revised the feedback I received and posted the article! Please check it! (All references have been inserted except for errors during references.)--Lee ye han (talk) 07:16, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han, Good, but you should integrate (merge) your article, currently at ko:일탈(사회학). with ko:일탈. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:36, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%BC%ED%83%88(%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99)

Hello, Professor! I have a question about grades and additional scores. - Jina Kim.

Hello, professor! I checked the posted grades. I finished translating my blog and main wiki assignments, even though it was later than the deadline, and I wonder if my grades had a big impact because I couldn't finish my wiki weekly editing assignments. You said, I have to edit wiki more than 280 times to get all my weekly editing scores, but can I translate the article with two main themes instead? I chose 'Povety(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poverty)' and 'ideology(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ideology)' as the theme of the wiki assignment to replace. If so, by when should I complete it? --Kimjina00 (talk) 08:30, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kimjina00, Yes, that'll work. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:30, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia assignments_Seong Yeonseo

Piotrus Hello professor! I corrected all broken references and posted them. I will attach the link. Please check. I think I've completed the first topic, right?

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B4%88%EC%95%88:%EC%9E%90%EB%B0%9C%EC%A0%81_%EB%AC%B4%EC%9E%90%EB%85%80#%ED%99%98%EA%B2%BD

I want to choose this as my second topic. I will attach the link, so please check it and allow it. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_construction_of_technologyYeonseo4020 (talk) 08:36, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yeonseo4020, Good, topic approved. Regarding your other article, please move it from the draft into the mainspace (remember to add categories and interlanguage links) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:33, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus Hello, professor! I reflected all the feedback on the first topic. I think it's really completed. I will attach the link. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9E%90%EB%B0%9C%EC%A0%81_%EB%AC%B4%EC%9E%90%EB%85%80#%EC%99%B8%EB%B6%80%EB%A7%81%ED%81%AC

Also, I translated the second topic and posted it. I will attach the link, so please check it out! https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B8%B0%EC%88%A0%EC%9D%98_%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B5%AC%EC%84%B1

Is it okay to do one more topic for extra credit? Please let me know what I have to do for extra credit. I'm sorry for being late. Yeonseo4020 (talk) 05:48, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yeonseo4020, It seems there is some technical problem with your article - please ask this Korean volunteer for advice as they are the one who have identified the problem: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Sangjinhwa . For ko:기술의 사회 구성, please add WP:CATEGORIES and interlaguage links to finish this assignment. I will update your score with the points for 기술의 사회 구성 soon. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:10, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Piotrus Hello, professor I reflected all the feedback. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B8%B0%EC%88%A0%EC%9D%98_%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B5%AC%EC%84%B1

And I completed and submitted Project 4 for Extra Credit. Please check it out!

Also, I translated two more Wikipedia. It's originally a link to articles. The third topic is 'Privacy consults with social networking services'. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Privacy_concerns_with_social_networking_services The fourth topic is 'Mass mobileization'. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mass_mobilization

And this is the link I translated and posted. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%86%8C%EC%85%9C_%EB%84%A4%ED%8A%B8%EC%9B%8C%ED%82%B9_%EC%84%9C%EB%B9%84%EC%8A%A4%EC%97%90_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C_%EA%B0%9C%EC%9D%B8%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4_%EB%B3%B4%ED%98%B8%EB%AC%B8%EC%A0%9C https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%EA%B7%9C%EB%AA%A8_%EB%8F%99%EC%9B%90

Please check my additional assignments and revise the score. I hope my efforts will be reflected in the score increase. Thank you.Yeonseo4020 (talk) 21:36, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yeonseo4020, Good job, I will be updating your score shortly. Please note that one of your new translations, ko:초안:소셜 네트워킹 서비스에 대한 개인정보 보호 문제, has been moved to draft space by a Korean volunteer 양념파닭 (you can talk to them here https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:%EC%96%91%EB%85%90%ED%8C%8C%EB%8B%AD). I encourage you to ask them how you can fix any issues and publish this article for additional points. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:06, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus I reposted the article. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%86%8C%EC%85%9C_%EB%84%A4%ED%8A%B8%EC%9B%8C%ED%82%B9_%EC%84%9C%EB%B9%84%EC%8A%A4%EC%99%80_%EA%B0%9C%EC%9D%B8%EC%A0%95%EB%B3%B4%EB%B3%B4%ED%98%B8_%EB%AC%B8%EC%A0%9CYeonseo4020 (talk) 07:27, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About the additional assignment

Professor, I would like to translate one more Wikipedia main article to improve my grades. This is the topic : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Transgender https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8A%B8%EB%9E%9C%EC%8A%A4%EC%A0%A0%EB%8D%94. I will finish as soon as possible. --Nayokang (talk) 11:05, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nayokang, Good choice, topic approved! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:32, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyuna_Assignment

ko:초안:이중부담 , ko:반양성주의 I finished translating both articles by reflecting all the feedback the professor gave me. Is there anything else I need to modify?--Leehyunah (talk) 13:17, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyunah, Please publish ko:초안:이중부담 (it should be at ko:이중부담). You may want to do some extra edits (a small translation, for example, of any topic of your choice) for A/A+ grade. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:16, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About my grade and extra credit

Good evening, professor. I sent a mail about my grade and project for extra credit. Please check my e-mail! Thank you for your response in advance. Have a good dayIamyujinkim (talk) 13:38, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Iamyujinkim, Done. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:17, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I want to translate more articles.

Hello, professor? I would like to translate one more article for extra credit.

The article is this https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Social_stratification

Can I choose this article? Also, I sent you an email. Please check it. --Younjihaa (talk) 14:03, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Younjihaa, Yes, social stratification is a good topic, I'll reserve it for you. You can start anytime. Good luck! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:18, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Please check my extra assignment

Professor, I have finished translating the article for additional points. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8A%B8%EB%9E%9C%EC%8A%A4%EC%A0%A0%EB%8D%94 If it's this much, can I get 12.5 credit points? Please let me know if you think this is not enough. --Nayokang (talk) 14:23, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nayokang, Well done, yes, I'll update your grade with your new score soon. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:33, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Complete three translations of Wikipedia articles.

Professor, I have translated three Wikipedia articles out of the four topics I have chosen. Please give me feedback. Thank you.

1. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99%EC%A0%81_%EC%83%81%EC%83%81%EB%A0%A5 (Sociological imagination)

2. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B9%B4%EB%A6%AC%EC%8A%A4%EB%A7%88%EC%A0%81_%EA%B6%8C%EC%9C%84 (Charismatic authority)

3. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B0%9C%EB%B0%9C_%EC%9D%B4%EB%A1%A0#%EC%84%B1%EC%9E%A5_%EB%AA%A8%EB%8D%B8%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%A0%ED%98%95_%EB%8B%A8%EA%B3%84 (Development theory) --SeungJae Leee (talk) 17:33, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SeungJae Leee, Good! To finish, for ko:사회학적 상상력, please translate the lead (introduction) at the top. I'll update your grade with your new score shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:36, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your feedback. I also translated the explanation above in the article 'Social Imagination'. And I finished translating 'Americanization'. I would appreciate it if you could give me feedback on the document as well.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD%ED%99%94 (Americanization)--SeungJae Leee (talk) 07:00, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

SeungJae Leee, Very good! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:12, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About the modification of wiki articles

Dear professor!

Hello!I am Luan Qianyue
I revised my article again. Please give me suggestions for the next step! Thank you very much! Have a nice day!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Four_Generations_Under_One_RoofLqy328 (talk) 15:29, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lqy328, Good, the format is now correct. I also find the topic quite interesting! There are still several issues to fix, mainly English grammar/vocabulary. Please use a service like Grammarly to proofread your work carefully.
Other minor things to add: 1) Japanese title (to the sentence saying it was published in Japan). It would be good to expand on what "strong reactions" were caused in Japan too. 2) Add a Chinese name for the "Shanghai Literature Magazine". 3) The original story was written in Chinese? This needs to be said clearly. 4) "the relevant organizations returned the goods" - I don't understand this. What organization? What goods? 5) "the last 13 paragraphs", "was restored in 100 paragraphs" - I think you mean chapters, not paragraphs. Such errors are very confusing. 6) " This is the first time the book has been published in full form since its publication". This is confusing. What language and country was this edition in?
Finally, the 'Influence of Fiction' section is rather short. For such an important works, there should be other scholars and literary experts who had something to say about it? I see dozens of English language articles discussing this at [5]. You should summarize the most important ones.
PS. To improve your grade, I also recommend you do extra credit assignment and translate several articles from English to Chinese. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:53, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

extra credit/ Please check my result / Han seung gu

Hello professor! I have done the extra credit activity. Check please.

I have edited 5 wikipedia article. Here is the my dashboard Link and article. (Please understand that the article is the latest term, so it's not enough.) Dashboard: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2021)/students/articles/Han%20seung%20gu https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%89%B4_%EB%85%B8%EB%A9%80_(%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%EC%B2%B4_%EB%B6%88%EA%B0%80%EB%8A%A5_%ED%86%A0%ED%81%B0 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%97%90%ED%94%BC%EB%8D%B0%EB%AF%B9 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8E%A8%ED%85%8C%ED%81%AC https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%83%88_%EC%A4%91%EC%95%99%ED%99%94_%EA%B8%88%EC%9C%B5

And, I have done the blog posting. it's a link to blog posting I wrote. https://socwiki2021.blogspot.com/search?q=Han+seung+gu

Thank you. (And How do I know my score after extra credit activity?) --Han seung gu (talk) 17:36, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Han seung gu, Well done. Your grade should improve nicely with the make up/extra work you have done. I'll be updating your score shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:02, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This Month in Education: June 2021

This Month in Education

Volume 10 • Issue 6 • June 2021


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In This Issue

About the additional article. / Lee ye han

Hello, professor. Good morning!

Looking at the article "일탈" asking for integration, there is nothing to move because it is all included in the article “일탈(사회학)" I wrote.

I think we can delete all the contents of the ‘일탈’ article and leave a link to Handover, but I think it's not polite to just delete it, so I left an integrated opinion on the discussion page.

I think my additional article is complete.

And I have a question! Can my translated article get enough additional credit to improve grades? Please reply. Thank you!--Lee ye han (talk) 01:45, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han, Very good, it's always nice to start a discussion. I think your grade should be very good now, I'll check and update it shortly if necessary. I also encourage you to create a WP:USERPAGE to advertise your work as part of your digital portfolio. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:06, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%BC%ED%83%88(%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99)


@Piotrus: I would appreciate it if you could check it right away and update grade! I learned a lot during the semester. Thank you!--Lee ye han (talk) 07:29, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Lee ye han I believe your grade is updated and quite good. However, your article was declined to be published on Korean Wikipedia by a Korean volunteer ChongDae [6]. I'd encourage you to talk to them at their talk page https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:ChongDae and ask for explanation/advice on how to ensure your work is made public again, your efforts are not wasted. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 05:49, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia Main Project: Youngsil

Hello, professor! I'm sending you a message after completing the main project of Wikipedia. I edited 'Sartre's Ideas' and 'The History of Women's Human Rights' in Korean Wikipedia.

During the semester, I uploaded 16 blogs, and Wikipedia edited everything except Week 11:) Please make sure weekly assignments blog and Wikipedia editing were reflected in my grades! Also, is it okay to publish the main project of Wikipedia? Have a nice day today.--Youngsil (talk) 08:12, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Youngsil, Very good, your main projects look nice - please publish them to receive the final score. Once you do so your grade should be A+! :) Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:01, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Wikipedia Assignment - Yeseo Lim

I have translated both articles! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%98%EB%A3%8C_%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%ED%95%99 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B2%BD%EC%A0%9C%ED%95%99_%EB%B0%9C%EC%A0%84

I also left my comment on other's page. https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Heeyrin

Please update my score, including the Wikipedia assignment score, on the portal. Alternatively, you can send my score to my e-mail at ivisy6952@naver.com

If my score is not enough, may I translate the article 'Right to Internet access' further? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Right_to_Internet_access --Ivisy6952 (talk) 10:16, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Ivisy6952: Well done, I'll be updating your score soon. Your grade has improved, and if you do a bit more extra credit work like the translation of the article you link above, I am sure it can be A+! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:18, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I've finished my assignment for extra points! / Chaeeun Park

Hello professor! I have finished my assignment for additional credit. I've translated three, so please check them out.

Have a nice day:)

1) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%BC%EB%B3%B8%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EC%A4%91%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94

2) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%97%AC%EC%84%B1%EC%82%AC

3) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%83%80%EA%B2%9F_%EA%B4%91%EA%B3%A0 Chae eun Park (talk) 12:33, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Chae eun Park, Good. I note however that one of your articles has been tagged with the notice that "이 문서는 자연스럽지 않게 번역되었으며, 기계 번역에 의해 작성되었을 수도 있습니다. 자연스럽지 않은 문장을 한국어 어법에 맞게 고쳐 주세요. " Please improve the quality of your prose to receive the full score for your extra credit activity. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:29, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Dokuwiki Deletion Page ?

Hallo,

I'm very new to Wikipedia and this is my first interaction on it because you proposed to delete the page DokuWiki I really don't understand what need to be done and why you proposed it for deletion. All the explanation links are sending me to a lot of text with a lot of verbal that I really don't understand and are not clear.

Do I just need to delete the tag ?


Thanks Nico— Preceding unsigned comment added by Gerardnico (talkcontribs) 22:28, June 24, 2021 (UTC)

I replied at your talk page. Please try to WP:SIGN your posts in the future. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:32, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor! I have completed the additional score assignment. - KIM JINA

Hello professor, I translated the article instead of editing wiki week. The link is as follows: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B9%88%EA%B3%A4 https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%B4%EB%85%90

please check it! Thank you.--Kimjina00 (talk) 15:43, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kimjina00, Well done, Ill upgrade your grade shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:35, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor i finished my main wiki project and extra wiki translation for extra point / Ji nu Nam

i finished my main wiki project https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8C%80_%ED%9A%A8%EC%9C%A8%EC%84%B1 and i did 10 extra wiki for extra points https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/Hanyang_University/Collective_Intelligence_and_Wikipedia_(2021)/students/articles/Nam%20ji%20nu

1.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B0%B8%EC%97%AC_%EA%B4%80%EC%B0%B0 2.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A7%84%EC%A3%BC%ED%98%84_(%EC%9D%B8%EB%8F%84%EC%96%91) 3.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8F%99%EC%84%9C%EC%96%91_%EC%9D%B4%EB%B6%84%EB%B2%95 4.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%B5%EC%A0%95%EC%84%B1%EC%9C%BC%EB%A1%9C%EC%84%9C%EC%9D%98_%EC%A0%95%EC%9D%98 5.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%84%EA%B8%89_%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C 6.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94_%EC%BD%94%EB%93%9C 7.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%ED%95%A9%ED%95%99 8.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%8F%AC%EC%9C%84_%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC 9.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C%EC%A0%81_%EC%82%B4%EC%9D%B8 10.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%EC%8B%AC_%EA%B7%B9%EB%8B%A8%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98

pleas check them out and Is there a way to know the changed score after getting additional points? Nam ji nu (talk) 14:52, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nam ji nu, Well done. I will be updating your grade shortly and you should see it in our LMS later today. Please note that the following articles of you have been declined for publication by Korean volunteers and moved to the draft stage. You can ask them for explanation and fix any problems they mention for additional points: ko:초안:진주현 (인도양), ko:초안:공정성으로서의 정의, ko:초안:진주현 (인도양)​(by volunteer Sangjinhwa, talk to them here https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90%ED%86%A0%EB%A1%A0:Sangjinhwa). Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:52, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished additional Wiki edit & my Wiki project.

This is my workings URL. In fact, professor said Wiki topic "Low Birth in South Korea" is already allocated, but I had edited that before you send me a e-mail :(. So, I finished editing my 2 Wiki projects,and additional 4+1 editing.

Thank you.

신장 분쟁 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%8B%A0%EC%9E%A5_%EB%B6%84%EC%9F%81 과두제의 철칙 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%BC%EB%91%90%EC%A0%9C%EC%9D%98_%EC%B2%A0%EC%B9%99

대한민국의 저출산 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%A0%80%EC%B6%9C%EC%82%B0 중국의 시대 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%8B%9C%EB%8C%80 중국의 대중감시 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EC%A4%91%EA%B0%90%EC%8B%9C 중국의 선전 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%A0%EC%A0%84 문화자본 = https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94%EC%9E%90%EB%B3%B8

JiSooGeun (talk) 15:28, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

JiSooGeun, Good job with the extra credit activity. You worked very hard and I'll update your grade to reflect this shortly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:18, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

2020082424 LeeHyunA

I translated one more wiki for extra points. Please update my grade by reflecting the additional score. en:Tripartite classification of authority -> ko:권위의 3가지 분류 And I sent you a question via e-mail, so please check it and reply!--Leehyunah (talk) 00:23, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Leehyunah, Very good. Please publish your drafts as well. I encourage you to add your articles created as a list to your userpage to make a digital portfolio. Well done! Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:25, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finish the main project

Hello, professor. i'm Hyeonsu.

I finished the main project. here are links. Please check and tell me if there's anything to correct.

I wonder my grade after completing the main project.

+ I couldn't find an image of a free license suitable for the '배드 파더스(bad fathers)'

배드 파더스: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B0%B0%EB%93%9C_%ED%8C%8C%EB%8D%94%EC%8A%A4

대한민국의 성 불평등: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%B1_%EB%B6%88%ED%8F%89%EB%93%B1 --Crocus131 (talk) 16:31, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Crocus131, Well done publishing your other article. To get a free licensed image, you may need to contact the organization in question and ask them for one, following the Commons:Commons:메일_양식 instructions. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:22, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Check my extra assignment! Gaeun Um

Hello, professor! I'm Gaeun Um.

First of all, thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to earn additional points.

For my extra credits, I uploaded project 4 assignment in LMS.

And I translated two more articles from Wikipedia. "Tripartite classification of authority" and "Reform of the United Nations". https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tripartite_classification_of_authority / https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Reform_of_the_United_Nations Link to two articles in order.

These links are attached with translated links in order. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/권한의_삼자분류 / https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/유엔의_개혁 I also added the title of the article on my dashboard.

Please check my additional assignments. And please revise the score. If I need more points, I'll do another assignment, so please let me know! Thank you always. Professor :)--Garongronga (talk) 16:52, 24 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Garongronga, Good job with ko:유엔의 개혁 - please add WP:CATEGORIES to it as well. Unfortunately, the other project you chose has already been translated by another student (ko:권위의 3가지 분류), which is why it's best to ask me for permission before starting a topic from our list. Please WP:MERGE your article with the other one following the instructions at ko:위키백과:문서 합치기. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:28, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Piotrus, I couldn't check it because I was in a hurry. I'm sorry. Then can I translate this article additionally?https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maker_culture And I want to know the current score. If possible, please check it. Thank you.--Garongronga (talk) 07:36, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

About my grade and extra translation (Everyday Life and Social Structure)

Hello, professor. I'm Han Jiseung

I finished the main wiki project and also shared it on DYK. here are links : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/중국의_검열 . Please check it.

I wonder what my grade is after completing the main project. and If it is possible, I would like to translate more article : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pension_policy_in_South_Korea

Thank you.Hanjiseung (talk) 01:12, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hanjiseung, Yes, I am aware you finished the 중국의 검열 article (on June 4th), it is already included in your score. Since the wiki project for translating from English to Korean is for two articles, it is very good that you selected a second topic, please complete it ASAP and let me know when you have done so and I'll update your grade accordingly. Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 07:33, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I finished first article - Woo Giyeon

I am done with my first translation. I am really sorry for being late. Please check it! Here is the link : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Woo-Giyeon/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 And can I choose this article for my second translation? Here is the link : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_globalization I will be waiting for your response! --Woo-Giyeon (talk) 07:15, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]