Talk:Third Battle of Winchester/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:18, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:18, 27 June 2021 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Do not use fixed sizes for images. Replace 250px or whatever with upright=1.0 and adjust up or down as necessary so that the images do not dominate the page. Also no periods in captions unless using two or more full sentences. I've done one for you already.
  • All images at upright=1.5 except portraits at upright=0.5, dropped periods TwoScars (talk) 21:33, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
• Images appropriately licensed.
• Have there been any efforts to preserve the battlefield before I dive into the battle proper?
  • The American Battlefield Trust says that it has saved more than 473 acres of the battlefield. TwoScars (talk) 20:47, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
• Link ranks on first use and provide an abbreviation to be used in the rest of the article. Suggest using standard US Army abbreviations as I don't think that I've seen Br. Gen. used anywhere else.
  • Fixed in captions to LTG, MG, and BG TwoScars (talk) 21:33, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
• Use full name and rank only on first use, afterwards just use last name
• Link unit sizes on first use.
• Sheridan kept his army between Early's army Close proximity alert for "army", suggest using "troops" or other synonym for one of these
• Link picket,
• along rail line of the out-of-service awkward
• Eventually, Lee was also present, what does this mean?
• Down to 11:40 am. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:48, 16 July 2021 (UTC)