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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Hog Farm (talk | contribs) at 18:37, 8 August 2021 (GA Review: review). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 04:46, 8 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this soon. Hog Farm Talk 04:46, 8 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Salt ponds on which Mallard II is used must be kept at a higher water level than they otherwise would be, owing to her draft." - do we know the draft measurement?
  • Do any of the sources state what the dredger's dimensions were?
  • "using her clamshell bucket to remove material from a "borrow pit"; this material is then deposited atop the levee" - link borrow pit and remove the quotation marks, as it is a set-meaning term
  • "and prevent water from "flooding San Jose and other urban areas below the high-tide level"" - possibly an excessive use of a direct quote here for something that probably doesn't need to be a direct quote. Is there a way to rephrase this?
  • Image licensing is accurate
  • Sources are all reliable and are formatted well enough

A short article, but one that is well-written and doesn't seem to be missing much (looked to see if there were sources to be added, and nothing obvious stood out as missing). Good work; this shouldn't need much more work before it's good to promote. Hog Farm Talk 18:37, 8 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]