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COVID-19 cases in the United States
We should use absolute numbers. Percentage numbers with so many zeros make no sense.
- Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate.•Shawnqual• 📚 • 💭 00:20, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
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In the May to June 2021 section, please change "The rising numbers were believed to be attributed to the Delta variant" to either "The rising numbers were attributed to the Delta variant" or "The rising numbers were believed to be attributable to the Delta variant." As it stands, it is grammatically incorrect. 2001:BB6:4713:4858:5886:5A75:73F8:B0F2 (talk) 17:28, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
- Done. Tintinkien (talk) 09:32, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
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The sentence structure here isn't very good:
There have been increasing amounts of anti-vaccine rhetoric credited to the continuing culture war between the supporters and opponents of Donald Trump, while vaccination rates have been higher among self-identified Democrats and in counties that voted for Biden in 2020.
"while" should be used between contrasting things, like "it's been lower among Trump supporters, while Biden supporters have gotten more vaccinations." Also, the start of the sentence is a little wordy. Therefore, please change that sentence to:
Increasing amounts of anti-vaccine rhetoric have been credited to the continuing culture war between the supporters and opponents of Donald Trump. Vaccination rates have been higher among self-identified Democrats and in counties that voted for Biden in 2020.
Thank you. 64.203.186.91 (talk) 19:25, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- Not done: According to the page's protection level you should be able to edit the page yourself. If you seem to be unable to, please reopen the request with further details. @64.203.186.91: The text you wish to alter is being transcluded from the article COVID-19 vaccination in the United States via the {{Excerpt}} template. Said page is unprotected and so you may edit it freely. Happy editing! ––Sirdog9002 (talk) 19:55, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've made the change. I'm surprised a page like that is unprotected! 64.203.186.91 (talk) 20:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 19 August 2021
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This sentence has a comma splice:
High levels of vaccine hesitancy in parts of the country have hampered vaccination efforts amidst the rise of the Delta variant,[30] this led to a fifth rise in infections, leading to daily cases surpassing 120,000 by August; the vast majority of new cases were among unvaccinated people.[27][31]
Just before [30], please replace the comma with a period, and capitalize the "this" that follows it. 64.203.186.98 (talk) 19:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)
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Please change
However, the number of available test kits remained limited, which meant the true number of people infected had to be estimated.
to
However, the number of available test kits remained limited.
The source for this sentence, [1], doesn't mention estimation. I've read the article and am not just relying on a no-results Control F search. 64.203.186.98 (talk) 15:16, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Semi-protected edit request on 30 August 2021
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Please remove
However, Trump continued to promote the use of hydroxychloroquine for COVID-19 by late July.[155]
and add
However, Trump continued to promote the use of hydroxychloroquine for COVID-19 through late July.[155]
"by late July" makes it sound like he'd started doing something "by" that time, but the point of the sentence is that he was still doing it then. "through" shows that he was continuing to do it without saying whether or not he kept going after late July. 64.203.186.84 (talk) 17:04, 30 August 2021 (UTC)
Header Change
In the header: "and there were reported incidents of xenophobia and racism against Asian Americans" While this statement may have a citation, it's importance and magnitude is insignificant next to other highlights given in the header. COVID-19 has caused innumerable impacts on a wide variety of races and countries, why should this be particularly included in the header? Disproportionate death rates among minorities is a noteworthy highlight, but a viral headline from early on in the pandemic should not make the header.
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