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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 02:29, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not retired, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

  • Commas around "after Madison's death in 1849"
  • "writing two memoirs and attempting to get them published." → "writing and attempting to publish two memoirs."
  • Mention what happened in 2003 to make them not the standard

Biography

  • "Anna's sister was Dolley Madison," → "Cutts's aunt was First Lady Dolley Madison"
  • "wrote to the Madisons"
  • "getting signatures" → "acquiring signatures"
  • "life in general" → "general life"
  • "devastated at" → "devastated by"
  • No commas around "Dolley" in the phrase "when her sister Dolley died in 1838"
  • Link Fourth of July

Memoirs

  • Who is "she" in "she had instructed that her private letters be burned"?
  • No commas around "Annie" in "Cutts and her sister Annie"
  • No quotes around "confiscated" per MOS:QUOTEPOV
  • "between the two works" to specify that it isn't the relationship between the two women
  • "thirty-two or fifty seven" → "32 or 57" per MOS:NUMERAL
  • "skipping 1801 to 1809" → "omitting the period between 1801 and 1809"
  • "sixty-one or ninety five" → "61 or 95" per MOS:NUMERAL
  • "[the Madison's]" → "[the Madisons']"
  • Again, what happened in 2003 to preclude this as the standard of Dolley's life?
  • "Cutts' original memoirs" → "Cutts's original memoirs" per MOS:'S (yes I think it's dumb, but it's MOS)

References

  • Good

General comments

  • Image used is public domain and obviously relevant
  • No stability concerns in the revision history
  • Copyvio score looks good

Putting on hold to allow the nominator to address comments. Feel free to ping me with questions, and let me know when you're finished! — GhostRiver 16:29, 1 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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