User talk:Uketbriana/Wolbachia

Good start! I think additional information about vertical transmission and the disruption of sex ratios would be helpful. Many you could introduce a few different butterfly species and go into depth about how Wolbachia affects them whether it's similar or different? I would also include information about the advantages and disadvantages for each species in this relationship. I think that the use of hyperlinks is good for additional information! I would reword this sentence "Eurema hecabe, the common grass yellow butterfly, those infected, contribute to a complex anomaly[2]." as I think it would help with a clearer meaning. I think that the information in this phrase is important for understanding the bigger picture, but I think that rewording it may lead to a clearer takeaway.

C10ism (talk) 15:41, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Leah for providing this important information. I will be sure to incorporate some of these topics in my paper. Uketbriana (talk) 14:38, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Good start here - I think your text will fit into either the Method of... or Effects of...sexual differentiation in hosts section in the original article. ProfJRL (talk) 14:53, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]