Talk:Rosenkrieg/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 01:12, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

• Hello Iaof2017, I'll be taking up the review for this nomination and will present it to you shortly. I hope you find my feedback helpful. Tayi Arajakate _Talk 01:12, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Assessment

1. Comprehension:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (prose)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined
(b) (MoS)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined

2. Verifiability:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (references)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined
(b) (citations to reliable sources)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined
(c) (original research)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined
(d) (copyvio and plagiarism)	No copyright violation or plagiarism found.	Pass

3. Comprehensiveness:

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (major aspects)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined
(b) (focused)	The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined

4. Neutrality:

Notes	Result
The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined

5. Stability:

Notes	Result
The reviewer has left no comments here	Undetermined

6. Illustration: The article is adequately illustrated.
Pass

Criteria	Notes	Result
(a) (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales)	The image is appropriately tagged.	Pass
(b) (appropriate use with suitable captions)	N/A	Pass

• I would like to grab this one for another review if that's ok with everyone involved. @BlueMoonset:, I'm not sure how to proceed. Cheers, MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 19 June 2022 (UTC)

  MarioSoulTruthFan, just start a new section below. I've put up a "New reviewer" section header for you; post your review in that section. Thanks for taking this one on. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:41, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

  No problems thank you for the help. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:08, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

New reviewer

Infobox

• Needs alt
• Don't wikilink outside the english wikipedia; Selmon and Jumpa

 Done

Lead

• Re-write the whole section
• "Rosenkrieg" (German: [roːzɛnˈkriːg]; transl. "War of roses") is a song by Swiss rapper Loredana and Kosovo-Albanian rapper Mozzik. It was released on 28 May 2021 independently as the lead single from their debut collaborative studio album No Rich Parents (2021). The song was written by Loredana, Mozzik, Saru, Selmon, Takt and Vito, and produced by Loredana, Mozzik and Jumpa. The lyrics of the Albanian and German-language song attempt to elaborate their separation and seek to find answers to the questions of why it had come so far.
• "Rosenkrieg" was well-received by music critics, some of whom praised its music and lyrics. The single was a commercial success in German-speaking Europe, reaching number one in Germany, as well as the top five in Austria and Switzerland. The accompanying music video was directed by Fati.Tv and Haris Dubica, being released along with the song. It features scenes during Loredana and Mozzik's time together as a couple and re-enacted shots from their separation and reunion. + wikilink when appropriate

 Done

Background and composition

• Prior to the release of "Rosenkrieg", → there is a need for a timeline here because their separation was in 2019
• both attempt to elaborate the separation of their relationship and seek to find answers to the questions why it had come so far → both attempt to elaborate their separation and seek to find answers to the questions of why it had come so far.
• Loredana, Mozzik, Saru, Selmon, Takt and Vito wrote the song, with the production handled by Loredana and Mozzik alongside German producer Jumpa. → "Rosenkrieg" was written by Loredana, Mozzik, Saru, Selmon, Takt and Vito, while the production was handled by Loredana, Mozzik and Jumpa.
• "Rosenkrieg" was independently released as the lead single from Loredana and Mozzik's first collaborative studio album No Rich Parents (2021) under exclusive license to Groove Attack in various countries on 28 May 2021. → On 28 May 2021, "Rosenkrieg" was released independently as the first single via digital download and streaming services [where? various countries, only in Europe-speaking Germany, Albania?]. [source] It is taken from Loredana and Mozzik's debut collaborative studio album No Rich Parents (2021). [source]

 Done

Reception and promotion

• During Loredana's Red Bull Symphonic concert in November 2021, the single was presented in an orchestral version, which was labelled by Martin Seebacher, as a "banger → after the music video, but in the same paragraph as the latter
• "Rosenkrieg" attained commercial success in Albania and German-speaking Europe. → "Rosenkrieg" attained commercial success in German-speaking Europe.
• In Albania, it debuted at number 20 on the Albanian Top 100 on 5 June 2021, before rising to its peak of number 13 on the chart the following week → remove, see below
• Fati.Tv → Fati.tv
• Nancho of the Fati Media Group → Nancho by Fati.tv
• Remove source 15 as it doesn't add relevant information
• It features scenes of Loredana and Mozzik during their time together as a couple, including reenacted scenes from their separation and comeback. → It features scenes of Loredana and Mozzik during their time together as a couple, as well as reenacted shots from their separation and reunion.
• from their separation and comeback. → mention the birth of their daughter, as well per source

 Done

Track listing

• Remove since it was only released digitally, as long as it is mentioned in the prose there is not a problem.

 Done

Charts

• Unsure regarding the reliability of The Top List, on top of that is not on Wikipedia:Record charts.
• Germany Digital → I would only use it if it didn't enter the official german chart, which is not the case. Remove it

 Done

Release history

• Same as Track listing, see above

 Done

See also

• Fine

References

• Why is the title of source 11 in italic?
• You don't need source 16 is a redirect
• Source check: 3-5, 7-9, 13-16, 21

 Done

Overall

• Add a personnel section with producers, engineers and others
• Don't address any issues until the article is on hold. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 10:24, 20 June 2022 (UTC)

Hey MarioSoulTruthFan thank you for the review, I've responded to all of your comments. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:23, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

I have indicated above what has yet to be done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:38, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

Sorry MarioSoulTruthFan for the delay, I've been extremely busy lately. I fixed the remaining issues. Regarding source 11, I guess its because of the citation parameter (cite AV). Iaof2017 (talk) 10:38, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

No problem. I made some small changes, see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Thanks everything fine. :) Iaof2017 (talk) 17:50, 2 July 2022 (UTC)