User talk:Kidsonthemoon

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Arsha Aghdasi (June 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by HenryTemplo was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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HenryTemplo (talk) 09:50, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. I deleted Extra parts from article to avoid peacock terms and resubmit AFC request again. Kidsonthemoon (talk) 09:43, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@HenryTemplo Kidsonthemoon (talk) 09:44, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Brilliant job, now, you need to demonstrate notability. Unfortunately, I cannot accurately judge the sources, as many of them are in Persian(?), so I can't judge the notability via the sources. Regardless, have a great day and happy editing! HenryTemplo (talk) 09:50, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@HenryTemploThanks a gain. I was added some English sources such as a video from CNN. I also added his IMDB profile with more than 50 films and his verified Instagram page. Kidsonthemoon (talk) 13:28, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Please note that IMDb is not a reliable source (see WP:IMDB), and neither are self published sources, like Instagram pages. However, the CNN video is probably reliable. Happy editing! HenryTemplo (talk) 13:37, 21 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Kidsonthemoon! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! HenryTemplo (talk) 09:50, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Arsha Aghdasi (June 22)

Your recent article submission has been rejected. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by TipsyElephant was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: This page was previously deleted at Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Arsha Aghdasi for not being notable. Even if the person has gained notability since then the draft violates what Wikipedia is WP:NOT for a number of reasons. For instance, the draft is clearly WP:PROMOTIONAL and includes extensive lists related to the person that violates WP:LINKFARM. Some of the prose has citation WP:OVERKILL while the lists have next to no sourcing. TipsyElephant (talk) 15:01, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

TipsyElephant (talk) 15:01, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Milad Nouri (Iranian television presenter) has been accepted

Milad Nouri (Iranian television presenter), which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

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Missvain (talk) 14:58, 7 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Missvain Thank you for reviewing this article. I think “Milad Nouri (Developer)” is a better title for this article because his main occupation is the developer. Could you please move this article to “Milad Nouri (Developer)”? Kidsonthemoon (talk) 21:37, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kidsonthemoon - "Developer" is too generic. How about software developer? Or...?? Missvain (talk) 22:12, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Missvain I think "(Programmer)" is better because it's shorter than "(Software Developer)". but if you think "Software Developer" is better, it's ok. Kidsonthemoon (talk) 22:42, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Missvain

I think "(Programmer)" is better because it's shorter than "(Software Developer)". but if you think "Software Developer" is better, it's ok.Kidsonthemoon (talk) 22:14, 10 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]