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Reviewer: Vacant0 (talk · contribs) 20:50, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I'll check this one. --Vacant0 (talk) 20:50, 21 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

General

  • Infobox: remove the "narrator" parameter since it's unused
  • Cast: "Lynch has said that she hopes her character brings a new layer..." → "Lynch hoped that her character would bring a new layer..."
  • Box office: one {{specify}} tag is present.
  • I'd recommend shrinking the Cast section.
  • Rest of the prose seems to be well-written.

Images

  • Add alt texts.
  • I'd recommend switching the image for Kalsoy to either this one or this one. These ones are far better looking and newer in comparison with the one that is present in the article. These ones are also properly tagged.
  • Rest of the images are alright.

Sources

  • Besides the infobox, Elliot Graham nor Tom Cross seem to be present in the text.
  • I've checked around 50 refs to verify the content. Refs 169 and 170 do not verify the first sentence in the "Theatrical release and postponements" section.
  • Sentences with excessive citations are present. In one case, four sources from one website are used to source one block of paragraphs.
  • Ref 11, 16, 17 should be removed, they redirect to YouTube.
  • Ref 145 should be removed, it redirects to Instagram.
  • Daily Express sources should be removed.
  • Ref 77, 178 redirect to a dead URL.
  • Archive rest of the sources.
  • Copyvio detector detects 41.2% possible violation regarding two Daily Express sources, which have to be removed.