Talk:The Last Time (Taylor Swift song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sebbirrrr (talk · contribs) 21:16, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Picking this up for a review!

Remove the short description, start date and duration templates as they're all redundant
Don't think "of Snow Patrol" is necessary

It's the official credit printed on the CD's notes. Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"taken from Swift's" → "taken from the former's" to avoid repetition as the next sentence begins with Swift
"lattermost" → "latter"

"latter" is used for two objects so "lattermost" is preferable imo. Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

"Aiming to experiment with..." → this sentence is quite long, maybe try to split it?
For consistency, you should either have Nashville or Nashville, Tennessee here and in the body
"the refrain" → "the chorus"

I'm not sure; I adhered to WP:NOTBROKEN that we do not fix redirect links in certain cases. Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

See above for Nashville
""The Last Time" is track number 10..." → not sure if this is necessary as it seems quite irrelevant
Isn't November 11 the release date? Ref 10 just lists several singles while ref 11 gives an exact date
Neither source states that Big Machine released it as a single
The ref doesn't state that they performed the song on The X-Factor
Are there more live performances of the song?

Rename it to "Critical reception and commercial performance" and insert the commercial performance paragraph as it's quite short

There are three paragraphs in the Critical reception section now, so I don't see it as a great idea. Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

There's a lot of repetition of "[reviewer] of [publication]" and "[reviewer] from [publication]" please fix it
"and vocals:" → "and vocals, stating:"
Link Taste of Country to Townsquare Media#Web publications and services

For Clayton-Lea's review, I think you should specify that both this song and "Everything Has Changed" were deemed "desperate attempts"

See above
"After Red was released" → "Upon Red's release"
"After its UK single release" → WP:OR as it's not explicitly given by the source
"for the week of November 10–16, 2013." → "for the week of November 10, 2013."
No need to mention the peak positions in Ireland and Scotland, saying they charted in the top 20 is good enough

The div col templates aren't needed as less than 20 people contributed to the song

I added it manually to re-use the Canadian chart for the original version as well. If we use {{single chart}} then we will have two duplicate refs, which I don't favor. Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source check: 8, 9, 10, 11, 13, 14, 15, 23, 28, 32
AllMusic should be tagged as the publisher for ref 4
Ref 7 is missing access-date
Ref 9 is dead
Why are refs 14 and 15 tagged with url-access=limited?
Tag ref 23 with via=Newspapers.com
Ref 26 is missing the date
Link Billboard for ref 31
Link Alexis Petridis for ref 32
I'll AGF for the Perone source
The ProQuest sources look kind of awkward with the id and via parameters, maybe keep one and remove the other?

On hold for seven days until all issues are fixed! Sebbirrrr (talk) 22:20, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I have responded to some of your comments above and will proceed within the next days! Ippantekina (talk) 02:19, 20 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]