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Previously mobilization
«Previously, mobilization in Russia was announced only twice: at the beginning of World War I, and following the German invasion of the Soviet Union during World War II» — incorrect, the country called «Russia» (full name «Russian Federation») appeared in 1991, before there was Soviet Union, now not existing, included Ukraine, by the way. Владимир Казаринов (talk) 04:55, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- Doesn't matter what it used to be called and which territories it had included. Russia is still deemed the successor of the USSR, including in both Russian and English Wikipedias. If you disagree with that, you can direct further discussion to the respective articles. 46.166.88.108 (talk) 05:52, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- Partly agree, but from this enlarged point of view we should observe what might called «historical Russia», going from Soviet Union then deeper to Russian Empire, an then to Tsardom of Russia and so so on and count all acts of civil mobilizations. Or mention just one act in 1941; «Previously, mobilization in Russia was announced only twice» still not correct enough. Also actually previous mobilization in USSR took place long after WW-II in Soviet–Afghan War (mentioned in Russian Wikipedia). So, let's think of appropriate wording. Владимир Казаринов (talk) 07:47, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- The claim is obviously false. There were similar partial mobilisations during the Russo-Japanese War. And then there's the very similar Winter War, in which the Red Army deployed (and lost) a huge force. The talk of the Great Patriotic War is an attempt to spin this as an existential defensive war when there are more accurate precedents. Andrew🐉(talk) 10:06, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
The Russian Federation was not the Soviet Union, and is only one of its successors. The Russian Federation is not the Russian Empire. All of those mobilizations affected both Russia and Ukraine, for example. Let’s try to keep some perspective. —Michael Z. 14:30, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
- Your edits were fine, but I'd still note the Russian Federation is the only de jure successor of the USSR, hence it was handed over the USSR's seat in the UN Security Council after the Soviet Union got officially disbanded.Knižnik (talk) 15:20, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
Minor POV in lead section
"...the Russian retreat in Kharkiv Oblast and calls from pro-war nationalists appear to have swayed Putin into mobilization." (first sentence of last paragraph of lead)
Likely POV, cited article (based on a quick Ctrl+F) doesn't even use the term sway. Can someone change to be more neutral? Fun Is Optional (talk) 08:26, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
Ukrainian mobilization article
We already have an article for the Russian mobilization and the DPR and LPR mobilization. I wonder if we could also make an article for Ukraine's? Super Ψ Dro 16:19, 22 September 2022 (UTC)
- +1. Gathering some references from other articles:
- Initial Ukrainian mobilization occurred in stages, including March 17, May 6,[1] and July 22, 2014.[2] Ukrainian territorial defence battalions established during this time,[3] and rolled into the Armed Forces after November 10.[4] Special Tasks Patrol Police created April 15.
- The Territorial Defence Forces (Ukraine) were activated January 1, 2022. Reserves called up on February 22, 2022.[5] martial law and general mobilization enacted February 24.[6][7] —Michael Z. 14:57, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
- There is now one, Mobilization in Ukraine. Super Ψ Dro 17:47, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
Number of planned to mobilize
Look, medias like "Novaya Gazeta" and "Meduza" show what might be called "liberal" point of view, anti-government in other words, what they have right to do of cause. But they really far from balanced, objective position, speaking simply they do mostly liberal propaganda. The article gives this source and this is how it starts (translating):
"The classified seventh point of the decree on mobilization allows the Defense Ministry to conscript one million people. This was reported to "Novaya Gazeta. Europe" was told by a source in the presidential administration".
Further in the article same thing: some unnamed "source", "interviewer". Really, an anonym source in presidential administration? So this article links an article of "Novaya Gazeta" and it links an anonym, whom existence itself is doubtful.
I can easily find "sources" with even bigger numbers.
A suggestion: official numbers and neutral-minded estimates based on something solid.
Владимир Казаринов (talk) 05:23, 26 September 2022 (UTC)
- A week gone, no reply, then I correct. Владимир Казаринов (talk) 04:48, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Sources are not required to be unbiased. Kleinpecan (talk) 07:04, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Meduza represents simply open-minded journalism; it was founded by journalists from the conformist Lenta.ru who couldn't bear the state-sanctioned self-censorship any more. No-one is perfectly neutral either way.Knižnik (talk) 07:44, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- I know what is "Meduza", they could be considered as reliable source in common, but in this certain case this is what they put (quoting English version, Russian is similar):
- "Russian authorities plan to conscript 1.2 million people for their “partial mobilization,” Meduza has learned from a source close to one of the country’s federal ministries" — another unknown source.
- So, both, "Novaya Gazeta" and "Meduza" link some unknown, anonym, doubtfully excising "sources"; if we want Wikipedia to be about objectivity, this should be deleted. Владимир Казаринов (talk) 07:06, 10 October 2022 (UTC)
- It's not a matter of a source only, it's also about a certain article in the source. I'm not saying "Novaya Gazeta" is not a reliable source, it is, but this certain article, linking "a source in the presidential administration" is a nonsense. So could not be used as a link in this article.
- "When dealing with a potentially biased source, editors should consider whether the source meets the normal requirements for reliable sources, such as editorial control, a reputation for fact-checking, and the level of independence from the topic the source is covering" — not in this case. Владимир Казаринов (talk) 13:20, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Meduza represents simply open-minded journalism; it was founded by journalists from the conformist Lenta.ru who couldn't bear the state-sanctioned self-censorship any more. No-one is perfectly neutral either way.Knižnik (talk) 07:44, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Sources are not required to be unbiased. Kleinpecan (talk) 07:04, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
Requested move 29 September 2022
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The result of the move request was: page moved to 2022 Russian mobilization by Czello. (closed by non-admin page mover) GeoffreyT2000 (talk) 16:07, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
2022 Russian conscription → 2022 Russian military mobilization – I’ve not taken much time to think about it, but the title seems egregiously wrong, so here’s a hasty move request. Please chime in with suggestions for improvement.
Conscription in Russia is routinely ordered every year. This article is not about that subject or its specific details for this year, which was ordered in late August.[8] It is about an outstanding military mobilization, the first since WWII. Its author calls it a “partial mobilization,” but there is evidence that he was lying about its scope, so committing to “partial” in the title may be premature. —Michael Z. 17:42, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support for 2022 Russian mobilization. The article's previous title has been changed without discussion. In the international media, the name “mobilization” is common, and not “conscription” PLATEL (talk) 18:07, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Move to 2022 Russian mobilization per WP:COMMONNAME and WP:CONCISE. Rreagan007 (talk) 18:30, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support 2022 Russian mobilization. Super Ψ Dro 18:57, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support per Wikipedia:COMMONNAME the term "mobilization" was appropriate, page did not need to be moved, move it back to 2022 Russian mobilization where it was yesterday ("military" is already implied by mobilization, only if it was a non-military mobilization would you need to include an extra qualifier to make it clearer). -- 109.79.169.156 (talk) 20:13, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- As nominator, thanks for the comments, and support 2022 Russian mobilization. Sorry I didn’t check the article history. —Michael Z. 21:07, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: I only just saw the Move button on pages yesterday and I thought conscription was more appropriate than mobilisation as Putin is merely attempting to give the appearance of Russia on a war footing and frighten Ukraine and our allies. Most sources cover the conscription of troops more than anything else but I would agree with colleagues that mobilisation is the formal name of the order. My apologies for the hasty move. IntrepidContributor (talk) 22:27, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- No sweat. I’m glad to see we’re not in conflict. —Michael Z. 22:31, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support for 2022 Russin mobilization. As someone who has co-authored an academic article on conscription, this is not standard conscription. This is partial mobilization to meet military requirements across multiple fields, sometimes a prelude to full mobilization, i.e., the mass militarization of a population, in the modern era part of industralized total war. Basically, it's one step from hell.Johncdraper (talk) 08:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Support for 2022 Russian mobilization. Gaardemouk (talk) 09:24, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
Rightful skepticism of so called "partial mobilization" is not scare quotes
The phrase "partial mobilization" is in several cases a quote attributed directly to Vladimir Putin and should have quote marks for that reason alone. The use of quotes around the so called "partial mobilization" is entirely deliberate and necessary for an encyclopedia to make extra efforts to keep a WP:NPOV neutral point of view and not merely accept loaded terminology from state propaganda at face value. See also the Russian version of this mobilization article and the use of quotemarks there.
MOS:SCAREQUOTES warns that "emphasis may turn an innocuous word into a loaded expression, so such occurrences should also be considered carefully" but in this case the terminology is already fully loaded. The references provided also show that there the mobilization is not clearly defined, the laws passed do not appear to make any such distinction, and in practice it has not been limited strictly to people with previous military experience the way media statements claimed it would be. To use an analogy this so called partial mobilization is a "poop sandwich" and a "partial poop sandwich" is effectively the same thing and fooling no one. Attempting to exclude quote marks in this article would be an over correction. Alternatively you could avoid the phrase, and simply remove the "partial" qualifier and call a spade a spade. -- 109.79.169.156 (talk) 21:50, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Yes they are scare quotes. Scare quotes are quotes used to cast doubt onto a statement, which is exactly what putting quotation marks around the word "partial" does in this context. It is not fit for an encyclopedia to use such formatting, and the manual of style forbids such use. Their use on the Russian Wikipedia is irrelevant, as it is not the English Wikipedia, and therefore has different policies and styles. If the article should cast doubt on the mobilization being partial, rather than a general mobilization, it should not use scare quotes to do so, and should have sources backing up the claims that it is in fact a general mobilization (and articles about them mobilizing more people than announced would not really be sufficient to write that it is in fact a general mobilization). Serafart (talk) (contributions) 23:03, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
- Quotation marks should be used when quoting Putin or other parties, including the designation partial mobilization. The article should probably not say partial mobilization in its own voice. May as well avoid scare quotes like “partial” mobilization altogether. —Michael Z. 01:01, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
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