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Definition. Measurement. Methods

I am thinking about adding a definition to "women's empowerment" since it doesn't have one yet. I will also attempt to add to the measurement section regarding critiques and elaborating the GMI. I will also be adding to the methods section soon. I think some reorganizing might be due. let me know.

Rbuell (talk) 08:13, 8 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hey! I restructured the contents, so let me know what you think about the new organization. I also included a new section: ongoing projects, so any feedback would be appreciated! I don't think I'll do anything to the measurement section, but I'll definitely keep my eye out for what's going on! I have reworded the "Role of Education" section, but feel free to make your own changes to it as well. Let's keep each other company! Jenny1004jeon (talk) 05:36, 25 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

This article requires a lot of work. I just removed an unsourced statement: «without women's empowerment, women wouldn't feel equally important to the process of development as men». Men writing about what women supposedly feel is hardly helpful. Nemo 05:40, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lots of work needed

There is a lot of work needed on this article, to turn it into an encyclopaedic format rather than the personal essay it currently reads as. It is currently not within Wikipedia's guidelines of neutrality and a lot of the article seems only vaguely related to Women's Empowerment specifically, and is more about societal sexism in general. I do not have time to rewrite the whole article but if anyone keen does, it would definitely be worth doing!

Cardamom tea (talk) 13:42, 28 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, Cardamom tea. I've started working on the tonal issues on the page. Gender Roamer (talk) 23:45, 27 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Gender Roamer! Much appreciated. 81.106.30.110 (talk) 16:03, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You're Cardamom tea? You're welcome. Now I have more rephrasing to do. Gender Roamer (talk) 23:48, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
All right. I gave the page thorough editing. As of this post, it looks like this. I also removed the essay warning, but the tone still sounds a bit like being preached to. Maybe that's just part of the tone that comes with the subject. So if someone wants to add that tag again, I'll accept it, but I don't know how to completely fix that side to the topic. I think, though, that my editing of the page improved it a lot. Gender Roamer (talk) 02:53, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Edits from a class (?) coming? I'll stick with the page to keep tonal issues at bay. Gender Roamer (talk) 21:42, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, a class: Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/UC Berkeley/Global Poverty and Practice (Spring 2021). Gender Roamer (talk) 21:44, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, seems to have lots of edits by a random class... not sure they improve it much... Cardamom tea (talk) 15:10, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Gender and Technoculture 320-01

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Wiki Education assignment: Gender and Technoculture 320-02

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Wiki Education assignment: SSC199 TY4

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