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Cold pad batch

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• ... that cold pad batch is a sustainable dyeing method that uses less water and energy? Source: https://www.google.co.in/books/edition/Sustainable_Apparel/rloiBQAAQBAJhl=en&gbpv=1&dq=cold+pad+batch&pg=PA147&printsec=frontcover
  • ALT1... that cold pad batch is a cost-effective and environmentally friendly dyeing method that uses less water and energy than exhaust dyeing methods? Source: https://www.google.co.in/books/edition/Sustainable_Apparel/rloiBQAAQBAJhl=en&gbpv=1&dq=cold+pad+batch&pg=PA147&printsec=frontcover
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Created by RAJIVVASUDEV (talk). Self-nominated at 08:25, 20 December 2022 (UTC).

• This nom ticks all the boxes. Article created less than a week ago. Long enough, in-line citations to scientific sources, no copyvio or inappropriate paraphrasing detected. Interesting hook. QPQ has been done. This is good to go. Topshelver (talk) 14:26, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
• @RAJIVVASUDEV and Topshelver: Couple things about the hook. First, less water and energy than what? Seems like a bit of a vague comparison. Second, while the fact is certainly neat, I'm not sure it's very hooky – like, it's fairly interesting, but I'm not sure I read that and think "oh, that's enticing, I want to know more". theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 07:26, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

  @theleekycauldron Appreciate your point. Updated ALT1. Kindly see if it works. Thanks RV (talk) 08:13, 30 December 2022 (UTC)

  @RV: That works for my first point, it provides good context, but I'm still not sure it's very hooky. I'll say that narratively, a good hook uses the encyclopedic format to tell part of a story – enough to get the reader interested in finishing the story by clicking through. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 10:22, 30 December 2022 (UTC)