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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Phil2600 (talk | contribs) at 23:51, 13 February 2023 (Requested Edits). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Remove tag

Did some work on this page. I believe the tag can come down now. What do you think?Jiminycricket55 (talk) 12:13, 3 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Needs Improvement tag went up again

Hi wiki editors, I am anxious to get this article up to the standards of a decent wikipedia article. Please advise what can be done to allay the fears that someone "close to the source" made a large number of edits, and that "original research" was done- since just about every statement has a decent source. Please help me to make this the best article it can be. As for the notability standard, judging by the number of articles that exist about this company and the special role it plays in the development of the Chinese economy, I do believe it is wiki-worthy.Jiminycricket55 (talk) 06:57, 12 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Improving this article

Since I have not heard from the editor who placed the tag about ideas for improving this wiki so that the tag can be removed, I will make the changes to the best of my ability. I am going to focus on the "investment philosophy" section.Jiminycricket55 (talk) 10:07, 20 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Requested Edits

My name is Phil and I work for The Foote Group, a PR agency for Hillhouse. In compliance with WP:COI, I'd like to request several changes on Hillhouse's behalf for an impartial editor to consider. Please see below the requested edits. Let me know if you have any concerns.

Requested Edits

1. Requested edit: Add the following to the end of the History section: "In 2022, Hillhouse started its first real estate-focused fund with a total investment of more than $2 billion. The fund was called the Hillhouse Real Asset Opportunities Fund (RAOF).[1]"
Explanation: This would add a large recent fund as a significant part of the firm's history.
Response: Done.


2. Requested Edit: In the History section delete: "GaoTeng Global Asset Management, a partnership between Tencent Holdings and Hillhouse, launched GaoTeng Asian Income Fund in November 2018, to focus on investing in government and corporate bonds."
Explanation: WP:UNDUE. I haven't found any quality citations regarding this other than press releases and blurbs.
Response:


3. Requested edit: Trim ("In 2021, it invested in the Chinese sportswear company Xtep.[18]") and add Xtep to the subsequent sentence instead ("In 2021, among Hillhouse Capital Management's investments were JD Health International, Miniso Group Holding, Xtep...")
Explanation: There's no reason to call out Xtep in a separate sentence and it reads awkward the way it is now
Response: Sources needed or the unsourced info may be deleted. Hzh (talk) 16:23, 25 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]


References

  1. ^ Cole, Michael (August 21, 2022). "CPPIB Boost Hillhouse Real Estate Fund to Final Close- Mingtiandi". Mingtiandi. Retrieved December 6, 2022.


Thank you for taking the time to review and respond to the requested changes. Best regards. Phil2600 (talk) 18:24, 14 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

A few more requested changes

Hi. I'd like to request a few additional changes to the page for consideration by an impartial editor. These are all minor edits to add where companies are based or clarify their size/origins. Additions are indicated in bold:

  • "As of 2020, Hillhouse was an investor in companies such as the Southeast Asia company Airwallex"
  • "In 2022, it invested in Indonesia-based J&T Express, a delivery company"
  • "Domestic Appliance business of Philips" -> “global domestic appliances business from Dutch conglomerate Philips”
  • "one of the largest women's Chinese footwear companyies in the world, Belle International Holdings Ltd"

Thank you in advance for whoever takes the time to consider the edits. Pinging @Hzh: who responded to some of my prior requests above. Best regards. Phil2600 (talk) 23:51, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]