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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

alexcrocker12354

Link to draft you're reviewing
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
conservation biology

Evaluate the drafted changes

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I don't think I saw anything in the sandbox. As for the article itself, it has a lot of good information in it. The lead section is concise, but I think it could be added to in order to reflect the contents of the rest of the article. I noticed that the first sentence in the origins section is a long run-on sentence, and could probably be broken up into two or more sentences. I also think that the references could be updated, and in turn the content could be updated to reflect the updated references.