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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by SpookyFrog (talk | contribs) at 02:35, 24 May 2023 (Research limitations: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Wiki Education assignment: Behavioral Ecology 2022

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 30 August 2022 and 9 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Thebullfrogwhisperer (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Anishal311, Yunfeng Ge, Darreciel.

— Assignment last updated by CalJS (talk) 01:35, 14 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Change in leading section and restructure of development and life cycle section

I added some more sentences in the leading section to make it more comprehensive. The development and life cycle contains too much information under the same heading, which can be overwhelming for the readers. Thus, I restructured it by creating two subheadings - Physical development and life cycle. I also italicized all species scientific names in the article.

Peer Review and revision

I think you did a really good job and I like how you have the precise summarization of the active peptides, which means much more than merely the ecological aspect. I added some more information to lengthen the page a little bit. Darreciel (talk) 04:32, 20 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Sentences I added:

An interesting characteristic of this frog is it has no webbing on the hands and feet. Researchers suggest that the unique toes might be due to both habitats and its predation behavior. A common predator of this frog's tadpole is dragon fly larva. It can produce posionous secretion for predator defense. Yunfeng Ge (talk) 03:20, 18 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Anisha's comments

I thought that this page was really well done. The information was clearly well researched and I enjoyed the detailed information about the peptide defense and mating. The peptide defense system was super unique to this frog so I though it was a great addition. I edited the for grammar and brevity. I took some information out on the exact semantics of the research study and exact data values to make the explanation more concise and easily readable to an average reader. I also edited the mating section for better grammar and to avoid run on sentences. Anishal311 (talk) 02:16, 24 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Research limitations

The research limitations section does not have appropriate tone. I also question if this section is relevant enough to include in the article. SpookyFrog (talk) 02:35, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]