User talk:AddieGrace/Neurodiversity

Hello!

Hi AddieGrace, I just saw your edit regarding the double empathy problem in Neurodiversity and then I found this draft. Are you aware that there is already a whole article Double empathy problem that you could contribute to? Looking forward to your contributions to Wikipedia!--TempusTacet (talk) 05:19, 4 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Peer-review

When reviewing the article, I immediately get a message indicating that the article needs additional citations and may contain unsourced perditions, speculative material, or accounts of events that might not occur.

The lead section appear to have excessive citations. It would be better to summarize the lead section from a few different sources as opposed to 12 different sources.

The content doesn't appear to be neutral based on the notification from Wikipedia. It would help to identify the content that appears to be bias and remove it.

The structure of the article does not appear to be in a sensible order. It would be better to remove the 'Within disability rights movement' and 'Social Media' sections or provide a brief summarization with links for more detailed information to another Wikipedia page.

After reviewing your contribution in your sandbox, I think that this would be a good correction based on your references. LaDonna205 (talk) 02:34, 12 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I have added suggested edits to your article on the peer review page! Aebner01 (talk) 15:32, 12 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]