User:Laura Khal/Sibyl Colefax/Alano1212 Peer Review

Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content

Guiding questions:

Is the content added relevant to the topic?
Is the content added up-to-date?
Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?

Tone and Balance

Guiding questions:

Is the content added neutral?
Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

Sources and References

Guiding questions:

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
Does the content accurately reflect what the cited sources say? (You'll need to refer to the sources to check this.)
Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
Are the sources current?
Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
Are there better sources available, such as peer-reviewed articles in place of news coverage or random websites? (You may need to do some digging to answer this.)
Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

Guiding questions:

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

Images and Media

Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media

Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
Are images well-captioned?
Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?

For New Articles Only

If the draft you're reviewing is for a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions

Guiding questions:

Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

A good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved.

Peer review of "Homemaking"
Peer review of this article about a famous painting

Additional Resources

Check out the Editing Wikipedia PDF for general editing tips and suggestions.

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Çeci est le travail de Ggiroux, Audrey Boucher, Maya Asselin et Aina JR

Link to draft you're reviewing
Sibyl Colefax — Wikipédia (wikipedia.org)
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Utilisateur:Ggiroux/Sibyl Colefax — Wikipédia (wikipedia.org)

Evaluate the drafted changes

Premierement, il faut améliorer le mise en page et ajouté quelques images pour rendre l'article plus beau et plus interressant. Choisissez des images fiable et n'oubliez pas vous devez bien voir si vous avez le droit de copier une image ou pas et mettre sa source. Evidement que l'article n'est pas complete mais vous pouvez divisez votre partie de la biographie en plusieurs minis parties.

Toute les informations ditent dans votre texte est relativement vrai, correcte et compréhensible.

En résumé, si j'ai bien compri votre texte parle que Sibyl Haisley naît à Wimbledon et se marie en 1901 avec Sir Arthur Colefax. Après des difficultés financières liées au krach de 1929, elle devient une célèbre décoratrice d'intérieur, fondant la société Sibyl Colefax Ltd. En 1944, elle vend son entreprise à Nancy Tree (plus tard Nancy Lancaster), qui la renomme «Sibyl Colefax & John Fowler Ltd», et cette entreprise s'est depuis développée en une compagnie internationale offrant une gamme de tissus et papiers peints de luxe. Lady Colefax décède en 1950 à Westminster.

Les trois sources que vous avez mis au début de l'article sont effectivement fiable. Mais essayé d'en mettre le plus de sources pour que votre article soit solide. Essayer de parler aussi sur lees prix qu'elle a remporté ou autre...

Faite attention a l'orthographe. Il y a quelque faute de syntaxe. Bien lire le texte et corriger tout le texte

Essayé de développer votre article le plus que vous pouvez. Bon Travail, ne lachez surtout pas!!