User talk:Choisieon
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Peer Review: hyeonsung Do
Hello! I'm hyeonsung Do, taking a media trend class!
First of all, I really enjoyed the article! It's a difficult topic, but I think you translated it neatly.
But I think there are some parts that need to be modified.
- I think the translation of the dictatorship is wrong. 채제 (X) -> 체제 (O)
- I think you need to explain not only the main characters but also the characters in the writing. I don't know who it is, so I can't understand it.
3. English is mixed in the Korean translation part. In the 'Kim Il Sung' part, English is left untranslated.
If you revise all the contents, it will be a perfect translation. Cheer up! HyeonsungDo (talk) 11:25, 5 November 2023 (UTC)