Talk:North Carolina Highway 124

North Carolina Highway 124 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 9, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: 420Traveler (talk · contribs) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Review

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Review coming soon. -420Traveler (talk) 16:57, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Upgraded to C Class! -420Traveler (talk) 17:00, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

I would add last sentence in first paragraph up further. Example: "Entirely within Edgecombe County, it travels east from NC 42 near Bridgersville......"
Describe US 258 as "U.S. Route 258 (US 258)"
I'd say northeast of Bridgersville because that's how it looks on a topo map, but I may be wrong.
"until 1963 or 1964" would "until sometime between 1963 and 1964" sound better?
In infobox, I would put circa 1933 since it was between 1931 and 1933.

Route description

Once again with Bridgersville.
Also, will need a topo map reference for Bridgersville since Google doesn't show it.
"NC 124 begins by" Remove the word "begins".
"It intersects" change the "it"s to something else.
"At the intersection, NC 124 turns to the northeast. It continues for 3 miles (4.8 km) through a rural area to its eastern terminus at NC 42 and NC 43 near Cobbs Crossroads." I would remove "At the intersection" and combine two sentences.
"3 miles" change to "three miles"
Put references in order.
Add link to Annual average daily traffic.
For Google reference, make the map pop up as satellite map.

History

Put references in order.
"6 miles" change to "six miles" for all under 10.
Add current state map as a reference after last sentence.

@Ncchild: Here is round 1, let me know if you have questions. -420Traveler (talk) 13:13, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@420Traveler I think I have completed everything. Let me know if you see anything else! Ncchild (talk) 19:32, 7 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Ncchild: Looks good, just a couple things: "near Old Sparta" add what direction it is from it. And add that in the lede too;

"Travelled six miles" add in approximately or roughly. Then I'll pass it. -420Traveler (talk) 15:53, 8 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@420Traveler: Both should be done! Thank you once again for reviewing! Ncchild (talk) 02:16, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]