User:Abbievaughn/Evaluate an Article
Evaluate an article
Complete your article evaluation below. Here are the key aspects to consider: Lead sectionA good lead section defines the topic and provides a concise overview. A reader who just wants to identify the topic can read the first sentence. A reader who wants a very brief overview of the most important things about it can read the first paragraph. A reader who wants a quick overview can read the whole lead section.
ContentA good Wikipedia article should cover all the important aspects of a topic, without putting too much weight on one part while neglecting another.
Tone and BalanceWikipedia articles should be written from a neutral point of view; if there are substantial differences of interpretation or controversies among published, reliable sources, those views should be described as fairly as possible.
Sources and ReferencesA Wikipedia article should be based on the best sources available for the topic at hand. When possible, this means academic and peer-reviewed publications or scholarly books.
Organization and writing qualityThe writing should be clear and professional, the content should be organized sensibly into sections.
Images and Media
Talk page discussionThe article's talk page — and any discussions among other Wikipedia editors that have been taking place there — can be a useful window into the state of an article, and might help you focus on important aspects that you didn't think of.
Overall impressions
Examples of good feedbackA good article evaluation can take a number of forms. The most essential things are to clearly identify the biggest shortcomings, and provide specific guidance on how the article can be improved. |
Which article are you evaluating?
[edit]Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
[edit](Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)
I chose this article as it is the article my group and I will be editing throughout the semester. I think learning about each individual bacteria is important to understand how the organisms work and function in the world around us. From a first glance the article seems very informational having an overview in the beginning and a few sub categories to go into more specifics of the bacteria.
Evaluate the article
[edit](Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)
There is a lot of information gaps throughout the article. The article lists the metabolic processes but does not go into detail about any of them or how they benefit the organism. The cell structure category is also very short with some gaps in the specificity and details of a cell's structure. I think the environmental roles could be expanded upon as they state methanococcus maripaludis to be apart of many roles but only give one example. There is not a heavy compelling or bias tone as it is a research article that seems to be just stating facts about the function and structure of the bacteria. All of the citations used are for definitions and explaining further a metabolic pathway. The links work and provide more information on the specific pathway or structure component but they are all wikipedia articles which does not give variety or completely reliable references. There is not much conversation going on about this article on the talk page. There is only one comment and it is about the links and the specificity of the metabolic pathways. Overall an informational article with a great outline but I think it will be good to add more and work on the article's details.