User:Pandabackpack152/Mountaintop removal mining/Saltwaternaturalenv Peer Review
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General info
[edit]- Whose work are you reviewing?
Pandabackpack152
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- User:Pandabackpack152/Mountaintop removal mining
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
- Mountaintop removal mining
Evaluate the drafted changes
[edit]Content:
- I would paste the article and make notes of what you want to change/take out of the article and paste your work into the sections where you want to add your new content
- Your writing is good and flows well together and is easy to follow
- The information fits and correlates well with the original article
- Your draft is organized very nice
- Theres not a lot more that needs changes
Citations:
- Your citations are great and well formatted and I love you added quotes from your sources
Reference List:
- The citations and the same cited in writing which is good
- There is a reference page sections which is well organized and formatted well
Sources:
- Sentences line accurately with what the source reflects on
- The information added is good and so are the sources
Environmental Politics:
- The health impacts sections correlates well to environmental politics