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This is the current revision of this page, as edited by Piperbeatty8 (talk | contribs) at 16:44, 8 November 2024 (Created page with '{{dashboard.wikiedu.org peer review/guide}} ==General info== ;Whose work are you reviewing? Her1117 ;Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Her1117/Soil mesofauna ;Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Soil mesofauna == Evaluate the drafted changes == Everything about this article is phenomenal. The lead is incredibly informative and the information throughout the rest of the articles has great tone and fluidity. There are many...'). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this version.

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General info

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Whose work are you reviewing?

Her1117

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Her1117/Soil mesofauna
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Soil mesofauna

Evaluate the drafted changes

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Everything about this article is phenomenal. The lead is incredibly informative and the information throughout the rest of the articles has great tone and fluidity. There are many sources to provide creditability to your information and everything is properly cited. The information is all neutral and does not have any evidence of a bias, and is neatly organized. My only critic is that with some sentences, you added a citation in the middle of the sentence. While I may be false, I believe the correct way is to add all the sources used at the end of the sentence. Other than that, you seem to be in a great place with content.