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Please remember this is a Tomahawk page, not a Mike Patton page, so any irrelevant links will be reverted quite quickly. Also bear in mind that Wikipedia has a policy on External Links, and that most of the ones added to the page recently don't really comply. See WP:EL hellboy 00:34, 20 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

structure

I really think the article as of today could use restructuring. I'd suggest moving all of the first paragraph except the first sentence to the beginning of the history section, since it's really just the beginning of their history anyways.

Also, does the bit about the drunken scuffle really belong at all, especially where it is located? I could see it as part of a trivia/antics section if this were a really large page. Its inclusion seems very arbitrary here though, and I bet he was just kidding.

Any objections to my making these changes?--Lf1033 03:37, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]