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Deadline 3: Yujin Jang

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yujin0203 Good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: SHU YING

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I've finished the Deadline 5 , translating the second article in my sandbox. [1]

Please check. Syouziiye (talk) 06:59, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Syouziiye Very good. Please merge it with the existing one at 德國經濟 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书
See 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 for advice on how to merge page
Then we will see if the Chinese reviewers have any comments
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:12, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor,according to your guidance, I uploaded this article. Please check it Syouziiye (talk) 13:04, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Syouziiye Your article remains in your sandbox. To finish the assignment, you need to publish it (merge it into the article in the public mainspace). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:42, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK，it was published now,please check it here. Syouziiye (talk) 06:49, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Syouziiye Good, now please observe it to see if the Chinese reviewers raise any issues that should be fixed. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:16, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK,I'll watch out for that. By the way for another translated article,now it is also succesfully published. Please check it here. Syouziiye (talk) 05:09, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Syouziiye Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Chinese. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:12, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I added them at the bottom,please check it Syouziiye (talk) 05:43, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Syouziiye Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:53, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: LAOXINYI

Dear professor： I'm taking course is "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" .

This is my sandbox link：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Laoxinyi

I have completed the draft and published it on the homepage：https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Luzhou_City

Please confirm. Thank you! Laoxinyi (talk) 03:09, 10 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Laoxinyi Good progress. Your article needs a banner, a climate section with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:22, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello, Professor. I have revised the article according to your suggestions. Please check it! thanks! Laoxinyi (talk) 06:52, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Laoxinyi Good job with the banner - now please work on the other issues I mentioned above Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:19, 17 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello professor, other questions have been modified, please confirm! Thank you.Laoxinyi (talk) 08:40, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Laoxinyi Good. Now try to populate the 'Do' section - for example with information about local festivals Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:03, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: YoonDaEun & Jeong seolah

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

Me and my group members @Jeong seolah

We've completed Deadline 5.

My topic is Yecheon

Please check our final draft, thank you. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 04:54, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please fix the following:
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • All entries under see should be converted into listings, right now only the first two are done correctly
  • Please take a look at feedback you got at and carry out the suggestions you find there: Talk:Yecheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor.
We fixed feedbacks by you and other peoples. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ydaeun0306 Very good. Can you find some more content to add to the listings under the see section? Are there any other museums or landmarks, manmade or natural, tourists could visit in the area? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:16, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor.
We added to the listings under the see section! Thank you! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 05:40, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please add GPS entries (listings) to the main local bus and train stations, so that they show on the map (in the 'Get in' section). You are almost done :) Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:09, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor.
We added listing the main local bus station and train stations! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:48, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Ydaeun0306 Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ARTICLE EXPANSION TASK--FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, I have chosen to expand the article on Cangzhou as my task. This is my second time editing and I have expanded and added it according to your requirements. Can you help me look it up? It would be even better if you could point out the issues that need to be changed. Thank you very much, looking forward to your reply. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:58, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Here are my suggestions:
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
You need more listings. The middle one (Cangzhou zhan) is unfinished - what is it?
For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful
Please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
Entries in Go next should have blue links to them. What is "Hometown America.Transportation method: Self-driving tour (about 4.5 hours)"? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:38, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello professor, thank you for your guidance last time. I have modified and supplemented according to the guidance. If you can, please help me check the newly revised article again. I want to do better. Thank you very much for your time.Attached article link again. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jzhdylb Good. You still need to convert mention of Cangzhou Iron Lion (新滄州鐵獅子) into a listing with GPS coordinates. Festival and Expo should have GPS coordinate as well.
And you should be able to add more listings to see. Are there no other monuments or attractions in this area? Is this really so boring? This city is 7 million. Compare to how many listings your colleagues added to a much smaller Korean city at Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage for example. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:20, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello Professor, thank you for the reference article you provided me last time. I've changed and added a lot along the lines of this and each template comes with GPS coordinates. If there are other areas that need improvement, please point them out for me. Thank you very much. Link. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jzhdylb Good progress. Please add GPS for the Cangzhou Passenger Terminal.
Then please ask for the review as I noted above:
Please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks again. I completed the revision and review request as required above, thank you for your time.link is. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jzhdylb Very good, and good job participating in the talk page discussion and review. I wonder if you could suggest some better banner photos? Most of the current one is just a sky. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Professor, this is an interesting suggestion. This picture is the ‘Cangzhou Iron Lion’, the landmark building of the city introduced in this article, but it looks a bit lonely due to the shooting angle. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a more suitable one among the images currently available on Wikimedia Commons. I hope to apply for copyright by contacting users who own Cangzhou beautiful photos, but due to IP reasons, this may take time, please understand. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jzhdylb I understand. Good luck with obtaining better pictures. See commons:Commons:Email templates for some useful tools Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks！I'll learn how to use it. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:54, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：LYU YANGCHENG

Dear professor, this is my understanding https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglaiof small data and big data, homework, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:49, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Your banner needs to be formatted the correct ratio. Please upload a new image based on the current one using this tool: https://croptool.toolforge.org/ then use it as a banner instead of the current one
Please add a GPS coordinate for the Penglai train station
Please recenter the map - right now most of the listings are hidden on the edge. We probably don't need to show the location of the outlying restaurant or the airport
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Then please ask for review pf your article by experienced volunteers and follow their recommendations after you receive them in a few days (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:26, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Penglai Dear teacher, please take a look, thank you Hanyangdaxue (talk) 05:35, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangdaxue Good progress. Please add some more listings, and information about festivals, if any are in the area, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:55, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 QIAN ZIYI

Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I finished translating my article in the sandbox, and modified it, please check.This is my link. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please take a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 05:03, 22 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Buryab0ne Regarding your translation, it reads well. Please fix the following issues:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
  • Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Regarding Pu'er – Travel guide at Wikivoyage the following should be fixed:
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:25, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I modified it, please check.This is my link.
Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you！ Buryab0ne (talk) 05:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Buryab0ne
Regarding your wikivoyage article, the see section is full of generic content that reads like it was generated by AI. Please convert information there into proper listings, with GPS coordinates, descriptions, url links to the websites of the museums and such. Compare this section to the much better section on do (although it is still missing any info on festivals). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:05, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Regarding your Wikipedia article, the references are still in pretty poor shape. Several of them are to Wikipedia article, which is not allowed (see Wikipedia:CIRCULAR). There is still a lot of errors and metadata that is missing - the only thing you fixed is adding English title translations. Please reread my comments above - much more is needed to fix your work. Stop by my office hours if you need more help Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:08, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor. I'm Kang eun yeong. I've finished writing articles for English to Korean translation and additional scores. I attach the link, so please check it. Thank you! Eng->Kr, extra credit points Kang eunyeong (talk) 00:33, 21 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kang eunyeong Good. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean
If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:30, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! I edited it. Please check it.
https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%BC%80%EB%B9%88%EC%97%90_%EB%8C%80%ED%95%98%EC%97%AC Kang eunyeong (talk) 04:20, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Kang eunyeong Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:10, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5-CUI ZAN

Dear professor, I am taking Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis. This is my understanding of small data and big data assignment. Please check it. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 16:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan Good job. Please add a listing with GPS address for the main local bus station (in get in) so that it appears on the map.
In the 'do' section please add information on local festivals. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 02:46, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have already added the festivals and bus stations（get in）. Could you please check them again? Thank you!
1 Cuicuizan (talk) 05:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cuicuizan I see. Please check that section again - why is "Zibo Railway Station " discussed under bus section? It should be under railway (train). And check if the link works, this one seems to be not for the train station but for some commercial ticket service at tickets.airportsupersaver.com which also seems to not work.
Please add URL (links to websites) for festivals and entities like museums and others that usually have their own web pages. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have revised the section on major bus stations, specifically Zibo Railway Station, based on your request. Regarding this part, the bus station is located near the railway station, which is why it is named Zibo Railway Station. Typically, people traveling by train will first take a bus to this bus station.
Additionally, I have added the URL for the museum, the URL for the festival, and the Wikidata URL. Please review these changes at your convenience. Thank you for your time and assistance! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Cuicuizan Very good progress Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
For the last step, please ask for review following the instructions from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review and then follow recommendations from the review, if any, Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 - GUANYUE & LIUZIYE

Dear professor,

I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" with @Poeyal.

This is our understanding of small data and big data assignment.

Please check it. Thank you！ Uuueol (talk) 07:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Uuueol Good. The following fixes are needed:
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:17, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have added the festivals section as requested and already asked for reviews. I also have made changes based on the suggestions provided. Please check it！Thank you so much！ Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Uuueol Very good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:15, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5-LI LINLIN

Dear Professor,

I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course. My topic assignment is Burqin, you can check the link. And I also made an extra credit, Qianjiang. I will continue to enrich this article.

Thank you for checking.

Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 04:45, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. The following fixes are needed in Burqin:
The picture is not formatted correctly. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio as explained at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Banner_Expedition#How_do_I_help? , then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please see the feedback at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Burqin and carry out the fixes required there
Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
Please add GPS info for 'River Promenade' and 'Market'. Try to add some more entries to the 'see' section.
For your other article, Qianjiang:
Please add get around, do and buy sections. Well done with the extra credit project. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:37, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Professor.
About the article burqin:
I have modified the banner with tools and expanded on the interesting aspects of the local area.
All relevant words in the article have been modified based on other users' interfaces on the talk page.
For 'River Promenade' and 'Market', GPS info has been added and info updated.
Please check it here.
For article Qianjiang, sections on get around, do and buy have also been added.
Please check it here.
I also ask for additional review for both articles, Please check here.
Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 00:57, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Leeinm Good, but please double check my comments above. For example, both articles still need to have more info in the introduction about their most interesting aspects. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:09, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Professor.
I add the comments for both articles. Please check here and here.
Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 00:38, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article revision Ma chenxiao

Hello professor, this is my sandbox draft. I have modified and streamlined the article after the administrator's prompts. Please check it out.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:19, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good progress. The following fixes are needed:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Currently, Game content, Background setting and Development have no references.
  • The review section should summarize the reviews; but they seem to be just translations . We cannot copy and translate someone's review, we have to summarize it, or quote briefly. Please rewrite this to summarize what the reviewers said. For example of how this should be done, see The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Wikipedia or Genshin Impact - Wikipedia
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:51, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I made some minor changes. Please check it. If there are any errors, please point them out. Thank you.User :Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 05:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Mcx8202229 Please read my comments again, I don't see significant changes. The references are still missing for the Game content and Development sections, and reviews still read like direct translations without quotations . We cannot just copy parts of the review and translate them. You have to summarize what the reviewer said, or attribute them with clear quotations like this: "Reviewer ABC writing for website XYZ said 'I like this because blah blah'." Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:16, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I understand, professor, and now I have made some changes User :Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 12:05, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Mcx8202229 Very good. I've marked two parts in the 'Game content' section where footnotes are needed. I think you are almost done - after you add the references, I asked for you can publish your article by moving it to the mainspace (see Help:How to move a page). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:18, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS. Is there an official webpage for the game? It should be added in the bottom, in a section called External links. Consider for example S.T.A.L.K.E.R. 2: Heart of Chornobyl (look at the bottom of that article). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello professor, I have completed the article and published it Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 03:53, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Mcx8202229 Very good. You can ask for extra feedback and review here: WT:VG. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Mcx8202229 I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia article about the game has an interesting but unreferenced section about account trading (Treasure Chamber). Can you find reliable sources to verify the content there and add it to your article here? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6：JIA YUAN

Dear Professor,

I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on GUO YING's article, Abortion in Poland.

Deadline 5 has also been revised. Translation of the article "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism，Indocentrism And add content to Indocentrism ”Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis”The Wikipedian guide: shangraoJiayyyyy (talk) 06:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good. Please ask User:糯米花 if their concerns over 亚洲中心主义 have been resolved.
For Shangrao , please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Also:
  • please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
  • For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
  • Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
  • Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:54, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
As for Asiacentrism, users were asked about it, but no response was received. About shangrao to be modified to address your questions. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jiayyyyy Good - advice given during office hours, let me know if you have more questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：BAILINHAN

Hello professor, I continued to edit Wikitravel, re-corrected the GPS and added introductions to attractions and GPS, and also edited other content, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 05:19, 26 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good. The following fixes are needed:
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:59, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor, I wrote the climate introduction again. Is this appropriate? Bai0926 (talk) 05:26, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Bai0926 The climate section seems good now. Please try to work on the next item I listed above (fixing the see and do sections). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:14, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor, I added content based on Ansan's do, but since Taierzhuang does not have a separate festival, no festival was added. Please check it Bai0926 (talk) 13:45, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：XIONG CHAOLI

Hello,I am xiong chaoli.I am from Media Trends and Globalization. My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Korean translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.

XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 05:09, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@XIONG CHAOLI I see. Try asking for help here: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9C%84%ED%82%A4%EB%B0%B1%EA%B3%BC:%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90_%EB%AA%A8%EC%9E%84 and let me know if it is solved Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:10, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have already solved it, here is the link to the translated article. Please check it. Thank you XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 05:29, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@XIONG CHAOLI Good, now we can wait and see if there are any comments by other reviewers. Good job so far! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:16, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：SHENZIHE

Dear professor： I'm taking course is "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" . This is my sandbox link：https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SHENZIHE/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 and https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SHENZIHE/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%922 The content has now been submitted for review.

Please confirm. Thank you! SHENZIHE (talk) 03:01, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SHENZIHE Good, but please fix the poor translation problems as indicated by the reviewers at Chinese Wikipedia (@Heihaheihaha @Kanshui0943 @姆汗費焰). Have you read https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:%E7%BF%BB%E8%AF%91%E8%85%94 as requested? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:12, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：SHENZIHE

Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”. Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。Jincheng SHENZIHE (talk) 03:02, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SHENZIHE Good progress but fixes are needed:
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • please add GPS for Lingchuan Red Maple
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 05:21, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：CHEN HEBING

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.

in "Media Trends and Globalization" class. I've finished the final translation from English to Chinese.

This is my work CHEN HEBING (talk) 04:19, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING Good, now let's wait and see if the Chinese reviewers have any feedback Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:22, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Deadline 7：Hyoenmin Song

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. I've finished the second article. This is my second article.

Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 07:18, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good progress. Please merge your content from your sandbox to ko:인종의 용광로, following the instructions at ko:위키백과:문서 합치기 Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:22, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor! I am a student of Media Trends and Globalization. I have completed the assigned Wikipedia He Delai and also completed the additional Wikipedia Draft:Chen Yingsheng , Chen Dewang , Chen Zhiqi , Ni Chiang-huai , Huang Ching-cheng , Chen Xiayu , Chen Qingfen , Zhang Qihua (painter) , Lin Jinhong . Can I get extra credit?Can I publish User:Yangpeifu/sandbox2? Yangpeifu (talk) 09:38, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yangpeifu Well done, you can get a lot of extra credit. You can publish your template as well (if you don't know how, stop by my office and I'll show you). Please proofread your articles with Grammarly or a similar tool - I've just read Draft:Chen Yingsheng and I see a number of errors (I fixed a few but more remain). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:26, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 HAN JIAYI

Hello Professor! I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.I have completed two translation assignments, English to Korean and English to Chinese, please check it:

English to Korean:https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B2%A0%EC%9D%B4%EB%A3%A8%ED%8A%B8%EC%9D%98_%EB%9F%AC%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84_%EC%A0%90%EB%A0%B9

English to Chinese:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%BF%84%E7%BD%97%E6%96%AF%E5%8D%A0%E9%A2%86%E8%B4%9D%E9%B2%81%E7%89%B9

Hnlyyyy (talk) 11:43, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hnlyyyy Good. Now we will see if the Korean and Chinese reviewers have any comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:28, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：XIONG CHAOLI

Hello, professor,I am xiong chaoli. I am from Media Trends and Globalization. My topic is the North Korean military parade, and I've finished editing the English-to-Chinese translation of this article on the sandbox.Here is the link.Please check it, thank you ! XIONG CHAOLI (talk) 15:20, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@XIONG CHAOLI Good progress.
You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:29, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7---FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, I have recently edited three Wikipedia articles, a total of 30 times. Please check it out, thank you.1.2.3 Jzhdylb (talk) 06:48, 30 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Very good! You have learned a lot about editing wiki! Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:31, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly Edit：BAILINHAN

Professor, I created a new article and edited it 40 times, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 14:23, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Your article seems to be gone, because the reviewers concluded it is just a copy and paste from another website. We cannot copy (steal) content from other websites. Please note that if you copy too much content from other websites, your account will be blocked and you may have trouble completing my courses. Please read the guide at Wikipedia:Copyright violations Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:18, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article Release--HAN YUANYUAN

Hello professor, I have posted my article, please check it. Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:06, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good, now we can wait for the Chines reviewers to comment. Please check it every few days to see if there are any comments. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:19, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: Yoon sarang & Lee jisu

Dear professor.

We are taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

We have completed the modification up to feedback from Deadline 5.

Our topic is Gwangju(Gyeonggi).

Please check the final draft. Xisuux (talk) 04:12, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xisuux Good. Can you add, to the do section, a list of local festivals (with links to their pages)? See how it is done for example in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:21, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Modify the theme-- Huang Qihao Hong Jiaran

Hello, dear professor, my team member hong jiaran and I are in the two courses of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. After discussion, we want to modify our Chinese-English and English-Chinese translations as well as wikivoyage. The topic, although time is very tight, but we will complete it as soon as possible without delaying the final time. This is the original title after we changed it, Chinese to English, English to Chinese,wikivoyage Hkiho (talk) 11:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho It is good that you have chosen the topics. zh:静寄山庄 seems like a good choice to translate, but remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.
Baaghi (1990 film) is fine to translate to Chinese, but it is rather short, and since you chose your topics late, you missed some required deadline reducing your final points. As such, I suggest you also translate another article for extra credit. How about With Fire and Sword (film)?
Regarding Laixi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage here are things to improve:
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • Understand section should have a climate subsection with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded
  • See and do sections should have listings (with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
  • Get in section should have listings for the main local bus and train stations
  • Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
  • Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
  • If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration
  • Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:31, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK professor, I will work with my teammates to add all the articles to the dashboard Hkiho (talk) 12:31, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Dear professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have completed the Chinese-English translation and two English-Chinese translations, as well as the editing of Wikivoyage. Please check.User:Hkiho/sandbox
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hkiho/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Redyeoni/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92
https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Laixi Hkiho (talk) 04:11, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hkiho Good progress. In your Jingji Villa I've added [citation needed] to all parts that need footnotes.
Regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that).
Regarding Laixi, please see my feedback above. Understand section still needs content (text) - compare to Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have already posted the three articles and Wikivoyage, but the Chinese encyclopedia needs time to wait for the administrator to upload, and we cannot move the pages ourselves on the Chinese site. Hkiho (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hkiho Please see the feedback you got at Talk:Laixi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the requested fixes
Your other articles linked above, on zh wiki, (I count two?) have been published - good job.
In the Jingji Villa, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional edited articles-HUANG LINGXUAN

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class.

I edited and translated two additional articles. One Chinese translation into English, one English translation into Chinese. Please check. Thank you very much. Hhhlx (talk) 02:59, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hhhlx Good, this can certainly count for extra credit. Please note the question at Talk:Liu Lantao Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 03:35, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Chih-chu Chen qixue Yiwei Guangzhou uprisingPlease check, thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Limengchen2777 Good progress. Feedback provided in office hours, let me know if you have more questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Lü Thiat-chiuPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 06:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Zhang Boju Hou Zhenya Huang HuaqingPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 10:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Limengchen2777 Very good, those will be awarded many extra points. I noticed a small error in one of your articles and explained it on your talk page. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:14, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

I have completed the modification up to feedback from Deadline 5:

- Expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

- Add some festivals that could be discussed under the do section.

- Add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates.

- Add some entry to the drink section.

Please check the final draft. Thanks. Dbinni (talk) 11:15, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni I am afraid your edits have been declined, but I see you received explanation and you read it (User talk:Dbinni – Travel guide at Wikivoyage). Please ping me again when you restore your edits with the improved content.
Also, please check Climate section, which reads "Ansan's climate is very similar to...". It's ok to copy content but you have to modify it to be relevant. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:40, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7: Jeongeun Park

Dear Professor:

I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link.

Extra: I translated Early Roman Empire (로마 시대 초기) of Greece in the Roman era into Korean. Here is the link.

Thank you for checking.Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 16:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parkjeongeun0430 Very good; now we can wait and see if Korean reviewers have any comments.
Here's a suggestion on how to make your articles even better:
  • If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool to link it: 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:42, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Fang Lina Please check, thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Very good idea. Can you add some content about awards she received, and use as references articles which discuss her as a person, not just her work? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: BAI LINHAN

Dear Professor, I have posted a comment on the discussion page, please check Bai0926 (talk) 05:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Make sure to link it from the discussion forum for reviews if you haven't yet Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor I re-added the discussion, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 06:00, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Bai0926 Good. Please check every few days to see if you got feedback Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: LYU YANGCHENG

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Dear professor, do you think this is okay? Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue As we discussed in class, regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that). Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 08:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Operational inspection

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%B5%84%E6%BA%90%E8%B0%83%E5%8A%A8

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%B3%A2%E5%85%B0%E5%A0%95%E8%83%8E

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yangjiang Guoying1 (talk) 07:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Guoying1 Feedback provided in class - let me know if you have any other questions Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：XU YAN

Dear professor, this is my revised Chinese-English translation of the article "The Long Night". Do you think this is okay? Xuan6699 (talk) 21:10, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 Good progress, but we still need to fix more content. I fixed headings for you, but you need to add references to the plot synopsis and 'differences from the original novel' (each paragraph needs a reference, right now the latter section only has a reference for the first paragraph).
The sentence "iQiyi's self-produced suspense short series "The Long Night" has attracted the attention of many overseas media, including The Guardian, The Economist, South China Morning Post, Content Commerce Insider, SupChina, Radii, SixthTone" should be expanded with a short summary of what those sources said, and at the very least, each of those mentions should be linked through its own reference (footnote). Here, for example, is a reference for the Sixth Tone: Short Show ‘The Long Night’ Offers Quality Over Quantity
Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:08, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week 14---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have edited this Wikipedia article 30 times this week. Could you please help me review it? Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Very good. The only thing you can do better is to add more links for terms like Emperor Wu (which one?), and similar. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 : HUANG YANHAN & MA CHENXIAO

Dear Professor,

We are taking the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class. We have completed the modifications based on the feedback from Deadline 5:

-Expanded the first sentence by adding 2-3 sentences describing the most interesting aspects of Sanmenxia, highlighting why people would want to visit and what makes it special.

-Added a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate to accompany the climate graph, using examples from similar articles like Ansan and Beijing for reference.

-Included listings with GPS coordinates for the main railway station.

@Mcx8202229, let me know if you have any additional thoughts or suggestions! HYH031277777 (talk) 15:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Very good.
Can you create a map with districts, like for File:District_of_Ansan.jpg, with colors matching the ones used in your article (in the listing of districts, which I moved to the 'Orientation' section)? Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2
Dear Professor,
Thank you very much for your suggestions. I didn't make such a diagram, but I marked the areas in the map. I wonder if it could be used as the same effect. Please take a look. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@HYH031277777 Very nice, it's an advanced way of editing that will be awarded extra points. However, I wonder: two places (gray one and blue five) seem to have pins outside the area. Do they belong to a different city? If so, please move them to the right articles. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Hanyangprofessor2 We have corrected some of the wrong locations and removed some of the attractions that do not belong to the city of Sanmenxia. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LIN AIJIA AND QU HONGYU

Hello professor This is the article we translated, but it seems that I can only send it by link网址：https://w.wiki/CLz5]] Linlin406 (talk) 16:14, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Linlin406 The article has two major problems:
  • you need references for most content (See Wikipedia:Verifiability). Only referenced content can be published.
  • the translation quality is very bad and not complete ("It is made of iron, and is made of iron." or "complicated and varied in 栱."). Please proofread it carefully. Poor translations cannot be published.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:15, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 - LIN AIJIA AND QU HONGYU

Dear Professor: We are@Linlin406 taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link Please check, thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 16:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pineappleq
Good progress.
You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.
Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:17, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：HUANG YANHAN

Hello professor,

I am a student of Media Trends and Globalization.

I have posted my article, please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 17:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 This is a good start, but many fixes are needed:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
  • For example, first and last paragraph of Tang Yin are not sufficiently referenced
  • Please add a reference for the term "Four Talents of Gusu," being used; I could not locate it. I have added examples for the use of other terms you mention in the lead.
  • Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
  • Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
PS. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in English to the ones you can see in Chinese Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：Jo HyeonSeong & Jeong Aram

Dear Professor We are taking Media Trends and Globalization class. We have reflected your feedback to our wikivoyage page and added more spots and information for dangjin. Please check it. Thank you. @Jeong Ahram Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 00:55, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jo HyeonSeong Very good, but I can't find the Solmoi holy site mentioned in the listings - the name appears just in the lead?
For the understand section, add a short (2-3 sentences) subsection about 'history'.
For the festivals, please add URL (links) to their homepages. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 01:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I revised the professor's feedback on Sollmae Village(Not solmoi holy site. It was my mistake). In addition, I attached a link to the festival and attached a short history part. Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 02:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeong Ahram Very good. Can you also check the "Sinri holy site" - that's another term used in the opening that I cannot locate in the article. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:24, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I checked and corrected it. More specifically, I changed from Sinri holy site to site of bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in dangjin sin-ri. Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 00:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5:ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I finished Deadline5 and uploaded the article, please check it.Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 04:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Good. Please note that this topic was accidentally translated by another student in our class for extra credit a bit earlier. Can you combine two existing articles into one? See the notice on the top of your translation project Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Professor, I have confirmed and registered with you before confirming the article, so how can I merge the two articles into one? I don't know how to operate. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:14, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadlin ：CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor I revised the article and added the missing parts in the original article. They are notes 6 7 8 13 20 22 23 Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 04:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Good progress. Please note that several other parts of your article need citations (references/footnotes). I've marked them in your text with [citation needed]. Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:36, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I made additional comments on 2 3 6 23 25 36 38 39 40 Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 08:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor:

We're taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed articles.

KOR -> ENG : Here is the link.

ENG -> KOR : Here is the link.

Thank you for checking. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram
Very good. Some issues to fix in your English translation:
  • if a topic exists in Korean but not English, please link it using this tool:틀:임시링크 - 위키백과. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
  • Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Korean, please use both the Korean and English titles. Use Korean title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
  • See your reference one for correctly formatted footnote
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：BAILINHAN

Professor, I have commented on other students' Wikivoyage, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 06:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOU。I have added the changes you have suggested。Thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 06:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good start. Here are the issues to fix:
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . I see you have a climate section elsewhere - you should move it to the understand as a subsection and rewrite to it looks similar to those in the linked articles.
  • Please remember that you can only add your own work to Wikipedia -that includes images. Please show me on your computer how you made the File:Baotou Climate Map.jpg image - otherwise it will be removed as copied from another website (plagiarized)
  • Get around section is totally wrong. That section should discuss how to travel in Batou (what are the local public transportations and like). The content you currently have there should be moved to see/do as listings
  • Your do section is also wrong; it reads like generic useless AI generated text. Please replace it with proper listings about specific attractions that can be taken part in (ex. festivals)
  • Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 06:55, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.I added a few images to make the Wikivoyage article more beautiful. Please review the final draft.Yuzhou Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613
Good, but we cannot copy random images from Baidu (or similar) and claim that "This file is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International license". It is very unlikely any of the files are licensed in such a way, and that means we are stealing them - they will therefore be deleted shortly. You can only use files already on Wikimedia Commons or upload images you took yourself or from websites where the authors have clearly indicated they are using free license.
Some things to fix/improve:
  • Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：CHEN HEBING

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.

in "Media Trends and Globalization" class. My team member LIU JUNYU @LJY2455 also completed the translation from Chinese to English

This is the completed translation

In "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis " class, the editing of Suqian is completed. Thank you for checking. CHEN HEBING (talk) 07:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I Regarding your article in English, as you can see, it was declined because the sourcing is insufficient. I already outlined this and other issues in my feedback to you from last month (November 4th: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_4#Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU). I can only assume you forgot to read it then, since I do not see that anything I wrote then has been fixed.
Regarding Suqian, the following fixes are needed:
  • Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
  • Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
  • Please see the feedback you got on the talk page, and carry out changes required by the reviewers
  • In the do section, add a subsection about local festivals
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline：ZHANG QI

Hello,professor.I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.


Deadline3:Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed the task of referencing once, please check.The referenced link is here.


Deadline3:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

My partner LIU ZIFU and I completed the Wikivoyage task last month. After your feedback, we have added Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport and Chengdu Tianfu International Airport. I think there are still areas for improvement in our work, so I will continue to improve our assignments this week and report back to you at any time. Looking forward to your feedback.


Deadline4&5 :Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed the translation work for Wikipedia, 100% done. Please check(1)


Deadline4:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed the task evaluation for other classmates.I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. By modifying the content of our group, I have gained some experience, which I have used to complete the peer review. Please check.


Deadline5:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. Please check.


Deadline6 :Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed this task and provided suggestions for HUANG YANHAN's article in his translation task. Please [[Talk:Four Scholars in Wuzhong#Suggestions:ZHANG QI[edit source]|review]].


Deadline8 :Media Trends and Globalization & Deadline7 :Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed all tasks, please check1 check2


When I was completing my translation task, the person who posted the photos was officially banned by Wikipedia, so two of the photos could not be accurately synchronized to my translation task. Please forgive me. And when I was doing the translation task, I used templates to reference both of the following templates in my article, and corrected any links that did not display correctly using templates like this.[[:zh: en| zh]]

May I obtain additional scores by completing these two templates.

Thanks. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good. For references, if the source is not in English, the title should be in the original language (here, Chinese), and the English translation of the title is added to the 'translated title' parameter. Stop by my office hours if you want me to show you how to do it.
For Longquanyi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, the following fixes are needed:
Regarding Battle of Weixian:
  • Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. There are numerous paragraphs in your article that have no references. Please add references to them.
  • Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here 07:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
OK, I will reply to you again after I have completed all the additional information. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:11, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7:HONG HAOTIAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Aqin , Qiu Jinlian ,Zhou Hongchou .Please check, thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6 : Parksungeun

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

This is my final draft Jecheon for main project.

Please review it additionally, thank you! Parksungeun (talk) 13:31, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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