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Deadline 3: Yujin Jang

Dear Professor I have completed deadline 3 of "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" from the professor.

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks.Yujin0203 (talk) 07:00, 4 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yujin0203 Good progress _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:59, 6 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: YoonDaEun & Jeong seolah

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

Me and my group members @Jeong seolah

We've completed Deadline 5.

My topic is Yecheon

Please check our final draft, thank you. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 04:54, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please fix the following:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
All entries under see should be converted into listings, right now only the first two are done correctly
Please take a look at feedback you got at and carry out the suggestions you find there: Talk:Yecheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:33, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor.

We fixed feedbacks by you and other peoples. Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:56, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Very good. Can you find some more content to add to the listings under the see section? Are there any other museums or landmarks, manmade or natural, tourists could visit in the area? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:16, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor.

We added to the listings under the see section! Thank you! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 05:40, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Good. Please add GPS entries (listings) to the main local bus and train stations, so that they show on the map (in the 'Get in' section). You are almost done :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor.

We added listing the main local bus station and train stations! Ydaeun0306 (talk) 06:48, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ydaeun0306 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:59, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ARTICLE EXPANSION TASK--FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, I have chosen to expand the article on Cangzhou as my task. This is my second time editing and I have expanded and added it according to your requirements. Can you help me look it up? It would be even better if you could point out the issues that need to be changed. Thank you very much, looking forward to your reply. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:58, 16 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Here are my suggestions:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

You need more listings. The middle one (Cangzhou zhan) is unfinished - what is it?

For festivals, can you add location, time and homepage information? A Chinese name would also be useful

Please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

Entries in Go next should have blue links to them. What is "Hometown America.Transportation method: Self-driving tour (about 4.5 hours)"? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:38, 18 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, thank you for your guidance last time. I have modified and supplemented according to the guidance. If you can, please help me check the newly revised article again. I want to do better. Thank you very much for your time.Attached article link again. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:56, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good. You still need to convert mention of Cangzhou Iron Lion (新滄州鐵獅子) into a listing with GPS coordinates. Festival and Expo should have GPS coordinate as well.

And you should be able to add more listings to see. Are there no other monuments or attractions in this area? Is this really so boring? This city is 7 million. Compare to how many listings your colleagues added to a much smaller Korean city at Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:20, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Professor, thank you for the reference article you provided me last time. I've changed and added a lot along the lines of this and each template comes with GPS coordinates. If there are other areas that need improvement, please point them out for me. Thank you very much. Link. Jzhdylb (talk) 15:54, 28 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Good progress. Please add GPS for the Cangzhou Passenger Terminal.

Then please ask for the review as I noted above:

Please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:05, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. I completed the revision and review request as required above, thank you for your time.link is. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:33, 29 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Very good, and good job participating in the talk page discussion and review. I wonder if you could suggest some better banner photos? Most of the current one is just a sky. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Professor, this is an interesting suggestion. This picture is the ‘Cangzhou Iron Lion’, the landmark building of the city introduced in this article, but it looks a bit lonely due to the shooting angle. Unfortunately, I couldn't find a more suitable one among the images currently available on Wikimedia Commons. I hope to apply for copyright by contacting users who own Cangzhou beautiful photos, but due to IP reasons, this may take time, please understand. Jzhdylb (talk) 14:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb I understand. Good luck with obtaining better pictures. See commons:Commons:Email templates for some useful tools _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks！I'll learn how to use it. Jzhdylb (talk) 11:54, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5 QIAN ZIYI

Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I finished translating my article in the sandbox, and modified it, please check.This is my link. Buryab0ne (talk) 05:00, 19 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please take a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 05:03, 22 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Buryab0ne Regarding your translation, it reads well. Please fix the following issues:

Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

Regarding Pu'er – Travel guide at Wikivoyage the following should be fixed:

please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate, with a graph. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
see feedback you got at Talk:Pu'er – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and use it to improve the article
fill in the get around section
add more listings to the see section
for the do section, add listings for festivals

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:25, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor,"Media Trends and Globalization": I modified it, please check.This is my link.

Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you！ Buryab0ne (talk) 05:34, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Buryab0ne

Regarding your wikivoyage article, the see section is full of generic content that reads like it was generated by AI. Please convert information there into proper listings, with GPS coordinates, descriptions, url links to the websites of the museums and such. Compare this section to the much better section on do (although it is still missing any info on festivals). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding your Wikipedia article, the references are still in pretty poor shape. Several of them are to Wikipedia article, which is not allowed (see Wikipedia:CIRCULAR). There is still a lot of errors and metadata that is missing - the only thing you fixed is adding English title translations. Please reread my comments above - much more is needed to fix your work. Stop by my office hours if you need more help _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:08, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, this is my understanding of small data and big data homework.I modified it.This is my link. Please have a look, thank you Buryab0ne (talk) 06:32, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Buryab0ne Good progress. To finish this assignment, please fix the following:

Please try to find and add or propose a new banner (see our instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage ) .
Please find and add more see locations, currently there is just one - this is way to little. Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage has over 30. I am sure you can find a dozen or so interesting things to recommend to tourists in Pu'er - monuments, landmarks, etc.
Pu'er Tea Culture Exhibition Area entry should be converted into a listing, with GPS coordinates and an url.
For the last step, please ask for review following the instructions from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review and then follow recommendations from the review, if any,

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:18, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5-CUI ZAN

Dear professor, I am taking Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis. This is my understanding of small data and big data assignment. Please check it. Thank you！ Cuicuizan (talk) 16:16, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan Good job. Please add a listing with GPS address for the main local bus station (in get in) so that it appears on the map.

In the 'do' section please add information on local festivals. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have already added the festivals and bus stations（get in）. Could you please check them again? Thank you!

1 Cuicuizan (talk) 05:39, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan I see. Please check that section again - why is "Zibo Railway Station " discussed under bus section? It should be under railway (train). And check if the link works, this one seems to be not for the train station but for some commercial ticket service at tickets.airportsupersaver.com which also seems to not work.

Please add URL (links to websites) for festivals and entities like museums and others that usually have their own web pages. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:13, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have revised the section on major bus stations, specifically Zibo Railway Station, based on your request. Regarding this part, the bus station is located near the railway station, which is why it is named Zibo Railway Station. Typically, people traveling by train will first take a bus to this bus station.

Additionally, I have added the URL for the museum, the URL for the festival, and the Wikidata URL. Please review these changes at your convenience. Thank you for your time and assistance! Cuicuizan (talk) 17:49, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Cuicuizan Very good progress _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:09, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

For the last step, please ask for review following the instructions from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review and then follow recommendations from the review, if any, _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5 - GUANYUE & LIUZIYE

Dear professor,

I am taking two courses "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small and Big Data through Wiki" with @Poeyal.

This is our understanding of small data and big data assignment.

Please check it. Thank you！ Uuueol (talk) 07:44, 24 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Uuueol Good. The following fixes are needed:

Your article needs a climate section with a chart
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).
If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:17, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have added the festivals section as requested and already asked for reviews. I also have made changes based on the suggestions provided. Please check it！Thank you so much！ Uuueol (talk) 17:53, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Uuueol Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:15, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5-LI LINLIN

Dear Professor,

I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course. My topic assignment is Burqin, you can check the link. And I also made an extra credit, Qianjiang. I will continue to enrich this article.

Thank you for checking.

Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 04:45, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. The following fixes are needed in Burqin:

The picture is not formatted correctly. Please reupload it with proper aspect ratio as explained at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Banner_Expedition#How_do_I_help? , then upload another version for the banner using the tool here: https://croptool.toolforge.org/

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?

Please see the feedback at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Talk:Burqin and carry out the fixes required there

Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

Please add GPS info for 'River Promenade' and 'Market'. Try to add some more entries to the 'see' section.

For your other article, Qianjiang:

Please add get around, do and buy sections. Well done with the extra credit project. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor.

About the article burqin:

I have modified the banner with tools and expanded on the interesting aspects of the local area.

All relevant words in the article have been modified based on other users' interfaces on the talk page.

For 'River Promenade' and 'Market', GPS info has been added and info updated.

Please check it here.

For article Qianjiang, sections on get around, do and buy have also been added.

Please check it here.

I also ask for additional review for both articles, Please check here.

Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 00:57, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good, but please double check my comments above. For example, both articles still need to have more info in the introduction about their most interesting aspects. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:09, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor.

I add the comments for both articles. Please check here and here.

Hope u have a nice day~ Leeinm (talk) 00:38, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. Please see comments at Talk:Qianjiang you received a while ago and consider adjusting your article to reflect the points made there. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:51, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Article revision Ma chenxiao

Hello professor, this is my sandbox draft. I have modified and streamlined the article after the administrator's prompts. Please check it out.User:Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 06:19, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Good progress. The following fixes are needed:

Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. Currently, Game content, Background setting and Development have no references.
The review section should summarize the reviews; but they seem to be just translations . We cannot copy and translate someone's review, we have to summarize it, or quote briefly. Please rewrite this to summarize what the reviewers said. For example of how this should be done, see The Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim - Wikipedia or Genshin Impact - Wikipedia

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:51, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I made some minor changes. Please check it. If there are any errors, please point them out. Thank you.User :Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 05:42, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Please read my comments again, I don't see significant changes. The references are still missing for the Game content and Development sections, and reviews still read like direct translations without quotations . We cannot just copy parts of the review and translate them. You have to summarize what the reviewer said, or attribute them with clear quotations like this: "Reviewer ABC writing for website XYZ said 'I like this because blah blah'." _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:16, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I understand, professor, and now I have made some changes User :Mcx8202229/sandbox Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 12:05, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Very good. I've marked two parts in the 'Game content' section where footnotes are needed. I think you are almost done - after you add the references, I asked for you can publish your article by moving it to the mainspace (see Help:How to move a page). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Is there an official webpage for the game? It should be added in the bottom, in a section called External links. Consider for example S.T.A.L.K.E.R. 2: Heart of Chornobyl (look at the bottom of that article). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, I have completed the article and published it Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 03:53, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 Very good. You can ask for extra feedback and review here: WT:VG. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Mcx8202229 I noticed that the Chinese Wikipedia article about the game has an interesting but unreferenced section about account trading (Treasure Chamber). Can you find reliable sources to verify the content there and add it to your article here? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:03, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, as far as I know, because a large number of players are using other account trading platforms, the trading platform in the game is almost not used. Now it seems that even the official has forgotten this setting, and I have not found any relevant news on the website, so I have abandoned this part and have not translated it. Mcx8202229 🇨🇳❤️ (talk) 08:40, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6：JIA YUAN

Dear Professor,

I took two courses, "Media Trends and Globalization" and "Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis." I have completed Deadline 6. I wrote feedback on GUO YING's article, Abortion in Poland.

Deadline 5 has also been revised. Translation of the article "Media Trends and Globalization": Asiacentrism，Indocentrism And add content to Indocentrism ”Understanding Small Data and Big Data through Wikis”The Wikipedian guide: shangrao Jiayyyyy (talk) 06:46, 25 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good. Please ask User:糯米花 if their concerns over 亚洲中心主义 have been resolved.

For Shangrao , please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

Also:

please write up a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate (you have a climate graph already, good, but it should have a text section. See articles on Ansan or Beijing or such for examples)
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please ask for additional review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 27 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

As for Asiacentrism, users were asked about it, but no response was received. About shangrao to be modified to address your questions. Jiayyyyy (talk) 05:10, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jiayyyyy Good - advice given during office hours, let me know if you have more questions _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Modify the theme-- Huang Qihao Hong Jiaran

Hello, dear professor, my team member hong jiaran and I are in the two courses of Media Trends and Globalization and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. After discussion, we want to modify our Chinese-English and English-Chinese translations as well as wikivoyage. The topic, although time is very tight, but we will complete it as soon as possible without delaying the final time. This is the original title after we changed it, Chinese to English, English to Chinese,wikivoyage Hkiho (talk) 11:33, 2 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho It is good that you have chosen the topics. zh:静寄山庄 seems like a good choice to translate, but remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

When translating, please make sure to add blue links to related articles on English Wikipedia. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. Again, if you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.

Baaghi (1990 film) is fine to translate to Chinese, but it is rather short, and since you chose your topics late, you missed some required deadline reducing your final points. As such, I suggest you also translate another article for extra credit. How about With Fire and Sword (film)?

Regarding Laixi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage here are things to improve:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a climate subsection with a chart, and your listings need to be expanded
See and do sections should have listings (with GPS coordinates and other content (description, address, websites).
Get in section should have listings for the main local bus and train stations
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
If you forgot how to do some of that, see our assignments instructions at User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or come to my office for a demonstration
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review).

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:31, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK professor, I will work with my teammates to add all the articles to the dashboard Hkiho (talk) 12:31, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have completed the Chinese-English translation and two English-Chinese translations, as well as the editing of Wikivoyage. Please check.User:Hkiho/sandbox

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hkiho/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Redyeoni/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Laixi Hkiho (talk) 04:11, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Good progress. In your Jingji Villa I've added [citation needed] to all parts that need footnotes.

Regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that).

Regarding Laixi, please see my feedback above. Understand section still needs content (text) - compare to Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:32, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, my teammates@Redyeoni and I have already posted the three articles and Wikivoyage, but the Chinese encyclopedia needs time to wait for the administrator to upload, and we cannot move the pages ourselves on the Chinese site. Hkiho (talk) 03:58, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hkiho Please see the feedback you got at Talk:Laixi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the requested fixes

Your other articles linked above, on zh wiki, (I count two?) have been published - good job.

In the Jingji Villa, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:10, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, my teammates and I have completed your request. Redyeoni (talk) 08:25, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 LI MENGCHEN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Chih-chu Chen qixue Yiwei Guangzhou uprisingPlease check, thank you. Limengchen2777 (talk) 04:14, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Limengchen2777 Good progress. Feedback provided in office hours, let me know if you have more questions _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Lü Thiat-chiuPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 06:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created.Zhang Boju Hou Zhenya Huang HuaqingPlease review it. Thank you! Limengchen2777 (talk) 10:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Limengchen2777 Very good, those will be awarded many extra points. I noticed a small error in one of your articles and explained it on your talk page. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor,

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

I have completed the modification up to feedback from Deadline 5:

- Expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.

- Add some festivals that could be discussed under the do section.

- Add listings for the main bus and train/subway stations, with GPS coordinates.

- Add some entry to the drink section.

Please check the final draft. Thanks. Dbinni (talk) 11:15, 3 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni I am afraid your edits have been declined, but I see you received explanation and you read it (User talk:Dbinni – Travel guide at Wikivoyage). Please ping me again when you restore your edits with the improved content.

Also, please check Climate section, which reads "Ansan's climate is very similar to...". It's ok to copy content but you have to modify it to be relevant. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7: Jeongeun Park

Dear Professor:

I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link.

Extra: I translated Early Roman Empire (로마 시대 초기) of Greece in the Roman era into Korean. Here is the link.

Thank you for checking.Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 16:25, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parkjeongeun0430 Very good; now we can wait and see if Korean reviewers have any comments.

Here's a suggestion on how to make your articles even better:

If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Korean Wikipedia, please use this tool to link it: 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Fang Lina Please check, thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 04:31, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Very good idea. Can you add some content about awards she received, and use as references articles which discuss her as a person, not just her work? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor, this is another extra credit project I completed. Please review Yang Qi-dong .Thank you. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 15:31, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Very good. The only thing you can improve now is to add more specific categories. I've added one that was obvious and missing. Look at your other articles and similar ones, and at categories on zh wiki, and think what categories you can add to your articles? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:53, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, I have revised the article based on the issues you raised. Please review it. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Good, but I see you created two articles on the same topic: Fang Lina and Lina Fang . Please combine them into a single article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: BAI LINHAN

Dear Professor, I have posted a comment on the discussion page, please check Bai0926 (talk) 05:49, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Make sure to link it from the discussion forum for reviews if you haven't yet _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor I re-added the discussion, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 06:00, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good. Please check every few days to see if you got feedback _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:18, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5: LYU YANGCHENG

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanyangdaxue/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Dear professor, do you think this is okay? Hanyangdaxue (talk) 06:39, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue As we discussed in class, regarding your translations to Chinese, once all content is translated, you can publish them by moving them (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sir, I have finished. Thanks Hanyangdaxue (talk) 07:33, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangdaxue Ok. Looking at your draft talk page, I think @自由雨日 may have some concerns. Please ask them if they think you need to fix your article before getting it published. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:55, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Operational inspection

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E8%B5%84%E6%BA%90%E8%B0%83%E5%8A%A8

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E6%B3%A2%E5%85%B0%E5%A0%95%E8%83%8E

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yangjiang Guoying1 (talk) 07:00, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Guoying1 Feedback provided in class - let me know if you have any other questions _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:51, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：XU YAN

Dear professor, this is my revised Chinese-English translation of the article "The Long Night". Do you think this is okay? Xuan6699 (talk) 21:10, 7 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 Good progress, but we still need to fix more content. I fixed headings for you, but you need to add references to the plot synopsis and 'differences from the original novel' (each paragraph needs a reference, right now the latter section only has a reference for the first paragraph).

The sentence "iQiyi's self-produced suspense short series "The Long Night" has attracted the attention of many overseas media, including The Guardian, The Economist, South China Morning Post, Content Commerce Insider, SupChina, Radii, SixthTone" should be expanded with a short summary of what those sources said, and at the very least, each of those mentions should be linked through its own reference (footnote). Here, for example, is a reference for the Sixth Tone: Short Show ‘The Long Night’ Offers Quality Over Quantity

Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:08, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week 14---FAN XINRU

Hello professor, I have edited this Wikipedia article 30 times this week. Could you please help me review it? Thank you very much. Jzhdylb (talk) 06:20, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Very good. The only thing you can do better is to add more links for terms like Emperor Wu (which one?), and similar. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:10, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 : HUANG YANHAN & MA CHENXIAO

Dear Professor,

We are taking the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis class. We have completed the modifications based on the feedback from Deadline 5:

-Expanded the first sentence by adding 2-3 sentences describing the most interesting aspects of Sanmenxia, highlighting why people would want to visit and what makes it special.

-Added a short (2-3 sentences) explanation of the local climate to accompany the climate graph, using examples from similar articles like Ansan and Beijing for reference.

-Included listings with GPS coordinates for the main railway station.

@Mcx8202229, let me know if you have any additional thoughts or suggestions! HYH031277777 (talk) 15:27, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Very good.

Can you create a map with districts, like for File:District_of_Ansan.jpg, with colors matching the ones used in your article (in the listing of districts, which I moved to the 'Orientation' section)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2

Dear Professor,

Thank you very much for your suggestions. I didn't make such a diagram, but I marked the areas in the map. I wonder if it could be used as the same effect. Please take a look. HYH031277777 (talk) 14:13, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Very nice, it's an advanced way of editing that will be awarded extra points. However, I wonder: two places (gray one and blue five) seem to have pins outside the area. Do they belong to a different city? If so, please move them to the right articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:20, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2 We have corrected some of the wrong locations and removed some of the attractions that do not belong to the city of Sanmenxia. HYH031277777 (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good. Rather then removing, for extra credit it is better to move them to the correct article (cut and paste rather then delete). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:54, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LIN AIJIA AND QU HONGYU

Hello professor This is the article we translated, but it seems that I can only send it by link网址：https://w.wiki/CLz5]] Linlin406 (talk) 16:14, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Linlin406 The article has two major problems:

you need references for most content (See Wikipedia:Verifiability). Only referenced content can be published.
the translation quality is very bad and not complete ("It is made of iron, and is made of iron." or "complicated and varied in 栱."). Please proofread it carefully. Poor translations cannot be published.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:15, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello professor, this is our revised article.

网址：https://w.wiki/CLz5 Linlin406 (talk) 04:42, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

网址：https://w.wiki/CPzq Linlin406 (talk) 04:44, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

[1]https://w.wiki/CLz5 Linlin406 (talk) 04:46, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Linlin406 You have changed content, but you still need to add references - see my first comment above.

Unreferenced content cannot be published on Wikipedia and cannot be accepted for our project. Please add footnotes to all relevant content verifying the information stated. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6 - LIN AIJIA AND QU HONGYU

Dear Professor: We are@Linlin406 taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed the second article. Here is the link Please check, thank you. Pineappleq (talk) 16:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Pineappleq

Good progress.

You can publish your article by moving the draft to the mainspace (see zh:Help:页面重命名 on how to do this); then we will see what the Chinese reviewers will say.

Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:17, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：HUANG YANHAN

Hello professor,

I am a student of Media Trends and Globalization.

I have posted my article, please check it. HYH031277777 (talk) 17:42, 8 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 This is a good start, but many fixes are needed:

Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
For example, first and last paragraph of Tang Yin are not sufficiently referenced
Please add a reference for the term "Four Talents of Gusu," being used; I could not locate it. I have added examples for the use of other terms you mention in the lead.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese (ex. 李鹏《六四日记》), please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
Also, if a topic exists in Chinese but not English, please link it using this tool: Template:Interlanguage link. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in English to the ones you can see in Chinese _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:43, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2

I have made the modifications based on your requirements. Below are the updates I have completed:

Improved citations for all sections.
Added English titles to Chinese references.
Linked topics without English pages to relevant Chinese Wikipedia pages.
Added appropriate categories to the page.

Please let me know if there are additional areas where I could further refine the article. HYH031277777 (talk) 16:57, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Good, but I still see some paragraphs with no citations, please check again (near the end of 'Wen Zhengming' section). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyangprofessor2Okay, Professor, I've added this part. HYH031277777 (talk) 06:50, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@HYH031277777 Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:19, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7 ：Jo HyeonSeong & Jeong Aram

Dear Professor We are taking Media Trends and Globalization class. We have reflected your feedback to our wikivoyage page and added more spots and information for dangjin. Please check it. Thank you. @Jeong Ahram Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 00:55, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jo HyeonSeong Very good, but I can't find the Solmoi holy site mentioned in the listings - the name appears just in the lead?

For the understand section, add a short (2-3 sentences) subsection about 'history'.

For the festivals, please add URL (links) to their homepages. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 01:41, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I revised the professor's feedback on Sollmae Village(Not solmoi holy site. It was my mistake). In addition, I attached a link to the festival and attached a short history part. Please check. Thank you. Jeong Ahram (talk) 02:26, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram Very good. Can you also check the "Sinri holy site" - that's another term used in the opening that I cannot locate in the article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I checked and corrected it. More specifically, I changed from Sinri holy site to site of bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in dangjin sin-ri. Please check. Jeong Ahram (talk) 00:15, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram Good, but I don't see "St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy" in any listing? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We added Site of Bishop St. Marie Nicolas Antoine Daveluy in Dangjin Sin-ri on See part. Please check it. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 04:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram @Jo HyeonSeong Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5:ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

I finished Deadline5 and uploaded the article, please check it.Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 04:29, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Good. Please note that this topic was accidentally translated by another student in our class for extra credit a bit earlier. Can you combine two existing articles into one? See the notice on the top of your translation project _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:32, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, I have confirmed and registered with you before confirming the article, so how can I merge the two articles into one? I don't know how to operate. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:14, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Compare the two articles, then if you think any part of your article is better (better language, grammar, links, etc.) replace the part in the older article with what you have done. You can get extra credit for that (your main project is finished successfully). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Read more at 维基百科:合并页面 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:57, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have combined two existing articles into one, please check it, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 05:38, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadlin ：CAI ZHIHANG

Dear Professor I revised the article and added the missing parts in the original article. They are notes 6 7 8 13 20 22 23 Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 04:50, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Good progress. Please note that several other parts of your article need citations (references/footnotes). I've marked them in your text with [citation needed]. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:36, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I made additional comments on 2 3 6 23 25 36 38 39 40 Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 08:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Very good. Please note that two references are low quality and should be replaced with better ones: 25 is WP:EPOCHTIMES and 39 is a blog (see WP:SPS) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:58, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:59, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have re-annotated comments 25 and 39.Here is the link Caizzz (talk) 05:38, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:56, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is my Wikivoyage link Caizzz (talk) 05:15, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Caizzz Ok. Here are things to fix:

Please format the see and do properly - see how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . Each tourist location should have a separate listing, with GPS coordinates, address, description, and if possible, URL.
Read manual at Wikivoyage:Listings and Wikivoyage:Where you can stick it – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:25, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I re-edited the entire article, here is the link Caizzz (talk) 10:36, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This is the latest link Caizzz (talk) 10:49, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7: Jeong Aram & Jo HyeonSeong

Dear Professor:

We're taking Media Trends and Globalization. I've completed articles.

KOR -> ENG : Here is the link.

ENG -> KOR : Here is the link.

Thank you for checking. Thank you. Jo HyeonSeong Jeong Ahram (talk) 05:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeong Ahram

Very good. Some issues to fix in your English translation:

if a topic exists in Korean but not English, please link it using this tool:틀:임시링크 - 위키백과. If you don't know how to use this, come to my office and I'll demonstrate
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Korean, please use both the Korean and English titles. Use Korean title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.
See your reference one for correctly formatted footnote

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We revised our article based on your feedback. Please check it. Thank you Professor. Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 09:00, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jo HyeonSeong Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:04, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：BAILINHAN

Professor, I have commented on other students' Wikivoyage, please check it out Bai0926 (talk) 06:01, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:46, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5：ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor. I am studying “Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis” and “Media Trends and Globalization”.Here's my edit link to Wikivoyage, check it out。BAOTOU。I have added the changes you have suggested。Thank you. Shuo1103 (talk) 06:16, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Good start. Here are the issues to fix:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage . I see you have a climate section elsewhere - you should move it to the understand as a subsection and rewrite to it looks similar to those in the linked articles.
Please remember that you can only add your own work to Wikipedia -that includes images. Please show me on your computer how you made the File:Baotou Climate Map.jpg image - otherwise it will be removed as copied from another website (plagiarized)
Get around section is totally wrong. That section should discuss how to travel in Batou (what are the local public transportations and like). The content you currently have there should be moved to see/do as listings
Your do section is also wrong; it reads like generic useless AI generated text. Please replace it with proper listings about specific attractions that can be taken part in (ex. festivals)
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:55, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, this is my revised version, Baotou.I don't know why you can't add climate maps. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:35, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 I can show you how to add climate chart in my office (just copy the one from Ansan, for example, then correct the numbers).

Please re-read my comments above. I do not see, for example, any improvement to the lead. I do not see a history section. Whatever you did it clearly ignored most of my comments above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:00, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: HAN YUANYUAN

Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.I added a few images to make the Wikivoyage article more beautiful. Please review the final draft.Yuzhou Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 06:37, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613

Good, but we cannot copy random images from Baidu (or similar) and claim that "This file is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International license". It is very unlikely any of the files are licensed in such a way, and that means we are stealing them - they will therefore be deleted shortly. You can only use files already on Wikimedia Commons or upload images you took yourself or from websites where the authors have clearly indicated they are using free license.

Some things to fix/improve:

Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.
Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:17, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good evening, Professor. I have made the changes as you requested. Please check Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 11:00, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Good progress. The expanded lead is encyclopedic-style rather than a tourist guide. Please add something to it that tells people why this is a fun or interesting place to visit.

Double check the feedback you got on talk as well for some ideas and comments. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:06, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor, I have made some changes according to your suggestions and those in the discussion. Please check.https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Yuzhou Hanyuanyuan613 (talk) 04:40, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hanyuanyuan613 Very good, see the nice comments you got on the talk page _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. Last suggestion from me: add a subsection on festivals to the 'do' section, like in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:41, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline5：CHEN HEBING

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.

in "Media Trends and Globalization" class. My team member LIU JUNYU @LJY2455 also completed the translation from Chinese to English

This is the completed translation

In "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis " class, the editing of Suqian is completed. Thank you for checking. CHEN HEBING (talk) 07:34, 9 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING @LJY2455 I Regarding your article in English, as you can see, it was declined because the sourcing is insufficient. I already outlined this and other issues in my feedback to you from last month (November 4th: User_talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive_4#Deadline_6_---FAN_XINRU). I can only assume you forgot to read it then, since I do not see that anything I wrote then has been fixed.

Regarding Suqian, the following fixes are needed:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Please see the feedback you got on the talk page, and carry out changes required by the reviewers
In the do section, add a subsection about local festivals

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline：ZHANG QI

Hello,professor.I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' and "Media Trends and Globalization" class.

Deadline3:Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed the task of referencing once, please check.The referenced link is here.

Deadline3:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

My partner LIU ZIFU and I completed the Wikivoyage task last month. After your feedback, we have added Chengdu Shuangliu International Airport and Chengdu Tianfu International Airport. I think there are still areas for improvement in our work, so I will continue to improve our assignments this week and report back to you at any time. Looking forward to your feedback.

Deadline4&5 :Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed the translation work for Wikipedia, 100% done. Please check(1)

Deadline4:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed the task evaluation for other classmates.I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. By modifying the content of our group, I have gained some experience, which I have used to complete the peer review. Please check.

Deadline5:Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed the modifications to our group's Wikivoyage based on your feedback to LIU ZIFU last month. Please check.

Deadline6 :Media Trends and Globalization

I have completed this task and provided suggestions for HUANG YANHAN's article in his translation task. Please [[Talk:Four Scholars in Wuzhong#Suggestions:ZHANG QI[edit source]|review]].

Deadline8 :Media Trends and Globalization & Deadline7 :Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis

I have completed all tasks, please check1 check2

When I was completing my translation task, the person who posted the photos was officially banned by Wikipedia, so two of the photos could not be accurately synchronized to my translation task. Please forgive me. And when I was doing the translation task, I used templates to reference both of the following templates in my article, and corrected any links that did not display correctly using templates like this.[[:zh: en| zh]]

May I obtain additional scores by completing these two templates.

Thanks. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 07:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZHANGQI1066 Good. For references, if the source is not in English, the title should be in the original language (here, Chinese), and the English translation of the title is added to the 'translated title' parameter. Stop by my office hours if you want me to show you how to do it.

For Longquanyi – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, the following fixes are needed:

Understand section should have a short section on history and another one on climate, with a climate chart (see how it is done at )Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Sanmenxia – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Listings in 'get in' should include the main train and bus station (with GPS coordinates)
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.

Regarding Battle of Weixian:

Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability. There are numerous paragraphs in your article that have no references. Please add references to them.
Please carefully check all references one by one to remove errors and to ensure they have metadata information (author, title, publisher, date). Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:42, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I will reply to you again after I have completed all the additional information. ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:11, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:01, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First of all, I have completed your first suggestion - I have translated the Chinese materials in the citations and checked all the citations. I also deleted several inappropriate citations and citations whose pages were deleted.Battle of Weixian

Secondly, I completed the modification of Wikipedia. I added the historical background of Longquanyi and the climate and climate map. And I also added the train station. Finally, according to your suggestion, I also found the local festivals and put the festivals after the history. Please check.[2]

However, I don’t quite understand this paragraph: Please ask for your article to be reviewed as discussed in our assignment at the bottom of the page here: User:Hanyangprofessor2 – Travel guide at Wikivoyage, then in a few days check what was written and carry out any changes based on advice there and report back to me.Because I am in the same group as LIU ZIFU, he has already completed the review, but you may have deleted the previous information. You can check whether you have modified his and my grades to know that we completed this assignment ahead of schedule last month, but only he left a message on the page, so you may not know. Please check

Regarding Battle of Weixian: I added a few citations and checked and modified the previous ones. The citation I added is the Battle of Huaihai. I don't know if you can understand what I said. Because the Battle of Weixian is the beginning of the Battle of Huaihai, they are related, so I quoted some citations with titles similar to the Battle of Huaihai. Finally, I completed your last request: Next, if the source is in Chinese, please use both the Chinese and English titles. Use Chinese title in the 'title' field, and English in the 'translated title' field. If you need help, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate how to do so. Please check ZHANGQI1066 (talk) 08:30, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7:HONG HAOTIAN

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

This is the additional Wikipedia task I completed personally Lin Aqin , Qiu Jinlian ,Zhou Hongchou .Please check, thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 08:12, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian Very nice. The main thing to improve in your submissions are links: If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:03, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor, I have revised the question you asked. Honghaotian (talk) 03:08, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor! This is the new bonus material I have created. Weng Kun De ，Chen Xue jun，Chen Daming . Please review it. Thank you! Honghaotian (talk) 04:18, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian Very good, but for Chen Daming you should add more sources. A mention in a single obituary is not enough to estabilish Wikipedia:Notability _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:07, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6 : Parksungeun

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

This is my final draft Jecheon for main project.

Please review it additionally, thank you! Parksungeun (talk) 13:31, 11 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parksungeun Good. Things to fix:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
See also feedback at Talk:Jecheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 6-LI LINLIN

Dear Professor,

I am taking 'Understanding Small Data and Big Data' course.

My topic assignment is Burqin, and I also made an extra credit wikivoyage article:Qianjiang.

About weekly wiki-editing project, I have done over 170 edits total, plaese check by this.

For the more extra credit, I also translated a Korean article: 열두 살에 부자가 된 키라 into Chinese: 小狗钱钱.

Please check by the link~

Have a nice day.

Leeinm (talk) 07:49, 12 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Leeinm Good. Check feedback on talk of Burqin and Qianjiang and my comments on how to improve them above in other sections.

Good job with your weekly edits. Regarding your extra credit translation, please add reference to it (also you can add a reference ot the Korean original article for extra credit). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability - in zh wiki that's 维基百科:可供查證 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:07, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear Professor,

I checked the discussion pages of burqin and qianjiang and made some modifications based on comments from other users.

For extra credit translated articles, references are also added. Please check it here.

I also translated a english article Separate spheres to Chinese and added references. Please check it here.

Thanks~ Leeinm (talk) 13:29, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7 (Kang Taeho and Kim Jongmin)

Dear Professor

we are taking a class on 'Globalization' and 'Data'.

Globalization : Lee Jung-hyo(KO->ENG) , 브렌트퍼드(ENG->KO)

Data : Pocheon(wikivoyage)

We need your review of our final document.

Thank you! Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 04:27, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim jong min (hanyang) Regarding your translation to English, there is much unreferenced content (with no footnotes). Please remember that only referenced content can be added to Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

For Pocheon, add a short subsection on history to understand (2-3 sentences will be enough), and 2-3 pictures to the article. See also the important feedback at Talk:Pocheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the fixes requested there. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Lee Jae-Hyun

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

I would like to submit my Final Draft to professor.

Here is my final draft. Nonsan JHyunlee (talk) 05:48, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JHyunlee Good. Last few items to fix:

add a short subsection on history to understand (2-3 sentences will be enough)
add a short description to listings that are missing it (like Oknyeobong Park)

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:04, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

See also comments at Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and fix the issues mentioned (for cafes, keep the most unique/interesting ones) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:05, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, professor. As I accepted your feedback, So I added a short subsection on history to understand, and also added a short description to listings that are missing it.

And you said that I have to fix the issues mentioned in "Nonsan discussion page", but I already fixed already!(Deadline 5)

Thanks to your feedback!! JHyunlee (talk) 10:17, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JHyunlee Very good. If you fixed issues raised on talk, post a message there (Talk:Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage) pinging editors who gave you feedback, thanking them for it and saying that you fixed the issues they have asked you to fix. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:11, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I completed all of them! JHyunlee (talk) 04:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JHyunlee Very good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:09, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki edit:BAI LINHAN

Professor, here are my 80 Wikipedia edits, please check it Bai0926 (talk) 08:15, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Bai0926 Very nice. The only item to check is reference 7 in Guo Degang - Wikipedia - is it reliable? See WP:BAIDU _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:12, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Jeongeun Park

I take Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis and would like to submit the Final Draft.

I checked what you left in the discussion, but there are some issues to correct the article in Seoul/North divided into East and West: Relatively, there's little information in the northwest (Eunpyeong) compared to the northeast(Gangbuk, Seongbuk, Dobong, and Nowon). If you make a separate article in the northwest, it will be an article with extremely little information. Therefore, I think it is a better option to merge with Seodaemun-Mapo next to Eunpyeong in terms of location. Seodaemun-Mapo articles are as follows. Seodaemun-Mapo

I have been faithfully adding and revising information to articles in Seoul/North for a semester. As I suggest above, the article in Seoul/North is my current result. Seoul/North

Thank you! Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 15:07, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parkjeongeun0430 Excellent job.

To make Seoul/North better, I'd suggest the following fixes:

add the 'Understand' heading above climate, then add a tiny section on 'history' and 'orientation' (that would explain the map issues). See how it is done in Ansan

Regarding the possible split, copy your argument above to Talk:Seoul/North – Travel guide at Wikivoyage then ask for feedback linking that discussion from https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Travellers%27_pub to see what experienced editors at Wikivoyage will say _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:15, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I asked. https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Travellers%27_pub Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 01:44, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

And I added History. Please check it out. Seoul/North Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 01:58, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parkjeongeun0430 Excellent _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:45, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4: Yeogeun Song

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" I'm so late.

Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I'm attaching the translation from my sandbox. Please check. Thank you. I'll do best untill last week. 송여근 (talk) 15:36, 13 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@송여근 Good. Make sure to translate some text like 'democratization after 1918' and the text in the see also (you can just remove that section, it is not needed). If a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool 틀:임시링크 - 위키백과 to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.

Then if you think your translation is good (proofread it to make sure there are no errors), please move it to mainspace and then we will see what Korean reviewers will say.

After the move, please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles if they don't have any; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories in Korean. Also, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link by clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and link the other language articles. If this is unclear, ask me in class or during my office hours and I'll demonstrate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:19, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

wiki voyage：Zhang Wenfei、Zhu Yingying

Dear Professor,

This is the theme my group's Wiki voyage . Please check it and let me know if there's anything missing. Thank you!

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Tongling

장문비2022096399

주영영2022009598 Fifi623623 (talk) 08:21, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fifi623623 Good progress. Here are things to do:

Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Right now it talks about industry - but why would tourists want to see the city?
Please try to find and propose a new banner (see our instructions at https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Banners ) .
please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage. If there are districts/neighborhoods, discuss them in the 'orientation' section.
For main train/subway/bus stations, please add listings with GPS coordinates
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
In the buy section, discuss briefly what are best things for tourists to buy (special local gifts, food, etc.)
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:24, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have corrected it, please check it again. Fifi623623 (talk) 04:37, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fifi623623 Very good, all that remains is asking for feedback from Wikivoyage reviewers, please do so ASAP. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:47, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6:ZHANG XIAOTONG

Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class

I have added more city content on Laiyang's Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 13:11, 14 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Good. Here are things to fix:

Please expand the first paragraph by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special. Tourists don't care about boring encyclopedic details like population.
You cannot copy maps from the Internet, upload them to Wikipedia and claim they are your own work. Please create your own map for the districts, in English. See examples of how this can be done in Ansan or Sanmenxia
Are there any festivals that could be discussed under the do section?
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Professor, I recreated the map myself and added interesting aspects and festival-related content under the do section on Laiyang Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 06:30, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Ok - where is the new map? I only see the old one in the article. Festival section looks good. And don't forget to ask for feedback and follow recommendations, there is not much time to compelte this step. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:50, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I directly applied to delete the problematic map and asked for feedback. Please check again. Thank you. Hyodong318 (talk) 14:36, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Hyodong318 Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:50, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Zhang Wenfei、Zhu Yingying

Dear, Professor, this class is about 미디어트랜드와글로벌라이제이션.

English Supplement :https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Niushoushan

English to Chinese :https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A9%AC%E5%B0%94%E5%A0%A1%E5%9F%8E%E5%A0%A1

This is what we've done.

주영영2022009598

장문비2022096399 주영영 (talk) 05:26, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@주영영 I am afraid your English contributions are not at an acceptable level; I have hidden them in the article's history. Please read specific reasons below:

Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability
your footnotes were links to Chinese Wikipedia. This is not correct. Read Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking . Footnotes are used for references, not links to other Wikipedia articles. If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage linkI to link it. f you need help with this, stop by my office during office hours and I'll demonstrate.
You also removed the existing WP:LEAD in the article, which was correctly formatted. Do not replace existing good content with lower quality one.

I had to hide your Chinese contributions as well because they also did not have proper links/references.

Note that your translated content is visible in article history. You can restore it, but only with proper links and references. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:35, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Niushoushan

Dear professor，

I corrected my article. Fifi623623 (talk) 13:51, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fifi623623 @주영영 It's better but still not fully fixed. There are still several footnotes to Wikipedia that should be converted to internal links (I count twelve). I also see some paragraphs that have no reference (outside the incorrect links to Wikipedia). You should also add a source for the claim that As described in Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”

Additionally, if a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. For example, zh:法融禅师 should be linked in such a way. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor，

I corrected it as you requested, could you please check if this change is correct?

I couldn't find the source, so I deleted ‘Jinling Langu (A Glimpse of Ancient Jinling): “From afar, the two peaks compete in height, resembling ox horns.”’.

Niushoushan Fifi623623 (talk) 04:40, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fifi623623 That is fine. If we cannot find a source for some claims, they should be removed as they can be false (read also: Zhemao hoaxes).

@Adakiko (re: unexplained content removal) - the removed content was discussed above (unreferenced or badly referenced content). Feel free to give more feedback to the student (she is trying to improve that article; it's a class assignment I am supervising). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:12, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Dear professor，

The article has been corrected，please check again.

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A9%AC%E5%B0%94%E5%A0%A1%E5%9F%8E%E5%A0%A1 Fifi623623 (talk) 08:51, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Fifi623623 No it hasn't. The same problems I identified above exists in the current version, for both of your articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:53, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki edit:CHEN HEBING&LIU JUNYU

Hello, Professor. This is the Chinese-English translation of our group. It has been translated. Since there are two problems in the Chinese article, although we have submitted the English manuscript to mainspace, it has been rejected. How can we solve this problem? CHEN HEBING (talk) 06:27, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING You need to ensure all content in your article is properly referenced. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability . See how your collegues have properly referenced their article on Criticisms of Baidu (they just started few weeks ago, asked me for feedback several times, and finished last week). You need to find references for all claims in the article, or remove the content that cannot be verified. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Week 15---FAN XINRU

Hello Professor, I have recently completed 30 Wikipedia edits, including these three articles. Please check them out. Thank you!1.2.3. Jzhdylb (talk) 08:35, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jzhdylb Very good. I moved a picture that was making one of the your articles look bad. Keep up the good job, you are getting a lot of extra credit :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline4：Zhuang Minna

Dear Professor: I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization" sorry I'm late. Among the Deadline 4 tasks, I have modified my sandbox. Please check. Thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 13:09, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minazhuang777 Good. I still see some unreferenced content, however. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit ("On the same day, a Facebook page named "Release Simon Cheng" uploaded...").

Also, reference [29] is bad ( "警方提供郑文杰与不同女性进出会所房间以及嫖卖双方忏悔的视频" ). See WP:Huanqiu. It cannot be used - it has too many fake news. We need to remove it and replace it with another better reference, or remove claims made by that outlet.

If a term exists in Chinese Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link it. If you need help with this, stop by my office and I'll demonstrate.

After you fix those issues, you can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Chinese article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on zh wiki and add similar ones here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:46, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor,

I take "Media Trends and Globalization" course, and work on the main project with Eunyeong Kang.

However, I have encountered some difficulties in translating the document titled "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government" into English, particularly with the challenge of locating citation sources. Despite seeking your assistance in your office last week, I have found it difficult to properly complete this task.

Following your suggestion last week that it would be fine to switch to a different document, I have decided to change the final project document to "The 1st Korean Music Awards" for the Korean-English translation. The translation of the previous document, "Press room and press corps of the South Korean government," will be kept as an extra credit assignment.

Both the completed translations—of the original and the new document—are available in my sandbox. Please find the link below for your review:[Sandbox link]

I would greatly appreciate it if you could kindly review the materials and provide feedback. Thank you. Dbinni (talk) 15:00, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Dbinni Your press room... article is almost finished. It would be a shame to waste your effort. I think you can publish it. Same for your work on the 1st Korean music awards. Just make sure to split them before publishing. Please let me know when you have published both.

You can publish your article (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). After the move, please add the interlanguage (interwiki) link clicking the "Add interlanguage links" button and linking the Korean article. Also, please add WP:CATEGORIES - see what categories are used on ko wiki and add similar ones here. Stop by my office if you need help. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:49, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ZHANG BINGYI

Hello, Professor.

When I was discussing with my friends today, I suddenly realized that I joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2023) invited by the professor, but my friends joined the Blogging through Media Trends and Globalization (2024). My blogs were all published in 2023. Will it have any impact?

Thank you!! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 17:29, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zhangzhang111 This should be ok, but just in case, send me an email reminding me that you submitted your work to 2023 blog. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:50, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6：XU YAN

Dear Professor,

I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”.

Here is a link to my feedback on the article. Please check it out, thank you. Xuan6699 (talk) 18:17, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Xuan6699 Good _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:52, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7:FAN JINGYU

Hello, Professor. This is the Chinese-English translation of our group. It has been translated. Aaiiuuu (talk) 03:40, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aaiiuuu Good. Please fix the following:

Remember: if a term exists in English Wikipedia and has an article there, but not on Chinese Wikipedia, please use this tool zh:Template:Interlanguage link multi to link it. If you need help, I can demonstrate how to use it.

Once you fix that, you can publish your article by moving it (see zh:Help:页面重命名 if you need help with that). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:54, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry professor, I don't know how to operate it and I can't find where the mobile interface is. Aaiiuuu (talk) 15:08, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aaiiuuu I can show you in class on Friday, or ask many of your friends who learned how to do it, or you can ask on live Wikipedia help chat. See places to ask for help listed at the top of the article here: 维基百科:IRC聊天频道 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:02, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7:XUE DONGXIN

Hello Professor, I have finished editing the Wikipedia article.2014 Taiwanese Adulterated Oil Scandal

This is a bonus wiki mission article.Taiwanese Tofu Dried Bean Curd Scandal

Please check them.Thank you so much. Donghem (talk) 04:01, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Good. Things to fix:

Please try to add WP:CATEGORIES to your articles; see categories at the bottom of the original articles for ideas and try to find similar categories for your articles in English

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I've added categories.Please check it out. Thanks. Donghem (talk) 01:18, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Donghem Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:54, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7:YUE ZIYI

Dear Professor

I are taking a class on 'Globalization' and 'Data'.

Globalization : Future(ENG->ZH) , Spaghetti(ENG->ZH)

Data : Fuding(wikivoyage)

I need your review of final document.

Thank you! YZY2233 (talk) 04:18, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Good, but I think you did not finish all the translation; for example, the popular culture section of spaghetti has not been translated yet.,

Regarding your Wikivoyage article, please recenter the map a bit - right now it is a bit too far north to show all the interesting spots. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:13, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

PS. And check the talk page for reviews - I've asked experienced editors to give you some reviews, since nobody stopped by so far... _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:14, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

OK, professor, I have re-added the translation of the popular culture in the Spaghetti, and I have made some changes to Fuding's article according to the suggestions on the discussion page. Please review it again. Thank you. YZY2233 (talk) 10:29, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@YZY2233 Good. If you corrected the issues raised on the talk page, please post there saying so (after making sure you addressed the most recent issues raised). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:55, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: SHU YING

Dear Professor,

I am taking the course “Media Trends and Globalization”and 'Globalization' and 'Data'.

I've published two articles with links to deadline5 comments that you've already seen and are now reposting as deadline7 in the discussion page.

Here are the links. Unemployment in South Korea(ENG->ZH) , Sociology of education(ENG->ZH) Data : Fuding(wikivoyage) Please review again.

Thank you. Syouziiye (talk) 04:39, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Syouziiye Regarding Fuding, see my comments above to your colleague.

Your other articles look fine, but always check for feedback from local volunteers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for double-checking. I'll keep an eye on the feedback Syouziiye (talk) 11:26, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Sarang Yoon & Jisu Lee

Dear Professor,

We are taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class.

We completed the final draft reflecting the feedback you gave us. Here is the link.

Thank you and have a nice day :) Ysrfield (talk) 06:18, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Ysrfield @Xisuux Please double check that you have fixed all the issues raised on talk; I've received a message from a Wikivoyage reviewer (@Ground Zero) that you have not done so on time. Please make sure not to readd any errors.

Things to fix in your article (which is overall looking good):

please add a short (2-4 sentences) subsection on history to understand section
your get in and get around section should clearly specify which bus stations are intercity and which are local (local bus stations do not need to be listed). Are there any train or subway stops in the city? They should be listed. See how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:22, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline7 : Parksungeun

Dear professor.

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

I'd like to get the final draft reviewed by the professor.

This is my final draft Jecheon.

Please check, thank you! Parksungeun (talk) 06:19, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Parksungeun Ok. Things to fix:

your history section is way too long for Wikivoyage, which is not an encyclopedia. Please condense it to two paragraphs (cut by 75%)
in get around, mention whether rental bikes are available
some of your listings under 'see' need a description, likeCheongpungho Lake Observatory (there are others). Others, like I mentioned in class already, seem to have strange names (badly machine translated?) like "a small garden". We do not translate place names
are there any festivals in the city? If so, mention them in the do section

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:26, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Yujin Jang

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class.

I would like to submit my Final Draft to professor. (There was no separate link to the festival that gave feedback last time, so I didn't post it.)

This is my draft Hongseong at Wikivoyage for main project individually.

Please check, Thanks. Yujin0203 (talk) 06:22, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yujin0203 Well done. Please add a short (2-5 sentences) subsection on history to the understand section.

Double check the talk page of your article to see if there are any outstanding suggestions from reviewers _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:30, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline6: Zhuang Minna

Dear Professor, I am taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data' class I have added more city content on Jieyang's Wikivoyage, please check it out, thank you. Minazhuang777 (talk) 08:13, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Minazhuang777 Ok. Things to fix:

Please expand the first sentence by adding some more content (2-3 sentences) describing most interesting aspects of this location - tell people why they would want to visit this place, what makes it special.
please expand 'understand' section. It should have a paragraph on history and another one on the climate, with a graph. See for example Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage or Nonsan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Please double check GPS coordinates for Kuitan station and Shuangfeng Temple. They seem very far from the city
In your listings please fix the links to Wikipedia articles by removing the excessive URL code so that they work
add listings for festivals to the do sections, if there are any in the area
Please recenter/zoom out the map so it shows the pings for most attractions
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki edit:CHEN HEBING&LIU JUNYU

Hello, Professor.This is the Chinese-English translation that we have revised again. Please check it out. Thank you. CHEN HEBING (talk) 11:08, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@CHEN HEBING As you can see, your submission has been speedy declined by the reviewers as insufficiently sourced. I can see, in five seconds, numerous paragraphs missing references. Please read my prior comments / reviews and carry out all the fixes requested first, before asking me for another review. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:38, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional credits——Wangtao626(Media Trends and Globalization)

Hello professor, this is my blog post this semester——blogger.This is all the additional edits so far this semester——additional edits, Please check. Wangtao626 (talk) 11:32, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Wangtao626 Well done, I'll be grading them shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8: Wangtao626 & ZAIWEI0328(Media Trends and Globalization)

Hello professor, here are two articles from our group, one in English（Early buildings of Wuhan University） and one in Chinese（世界价值观调查）, please check ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 11:38, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZAIWEI0328 Well done. Please make sure to check them every few days in the next few weeks for feedback from local reviewers. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Additional credits——ZAIWEI0328(Media Trends and Globalization)

Hello Professor, this is my weekly extra edit for this semester. Here is my blog post. ZAIWEI0328 (talk) 11:41, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@ZAIWEI0328 Well done, I'll be grading them shortly _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. This is my final draft Yangju. Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 12:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Ok. Here are things to fix:

please add a lead to your article, explaining why the city is interesting to see for the tourists. I removed the text that was there because it was terribly written
please make sure all your listings have descriptions which likewise explain why the location is worth visiting. For example, your first listing there is "Korea's 15th national park. No cooking, smoking, or bringing in flammable substances. No tents or parasols." That sounds terribly uninspiring and almost funny in a bad away. Your second listing just states that the place is "A historical landmark.", which is even more unispiring. Having read those, almost all tourists would be convinced this place is very boring.
please add listings for local festivals to your do section. Compare how this is done in Ansan – Travel guide at Wikivoyage
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:50, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

ZhangWenfei 、 ZhuYingying

English to Chinese ：https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%A9%AC%E5%B0%94%E5%A0%A1%E5%9F%8E%E5%A0%A1 주영영 (talk) 14:22, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@주영영 Good progress but many of your references were not translated correctly and some are plainly wrong (they are just links to English Wikipedia). Please ensure each footnote for translated content is in the correct place and contains correct information. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:56, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 : Jo Hyeon Seong & Jeong Aram

Dear Professor: We're taking Media Trends and Globalization. We've completed articles. So, We submit our Wiki main project. Links are here. KOR -> ENG : Here is the link. ENG -> KOR : Here is the link. Thank you.

@Jeong Ahram Jo HyeonSeong (talk) 14:28, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jo HyeonSeong There are no working links in your post. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8 Kim jong min(hanyang), Kang taeho

Dear Professor

we are taking a class on 'Globalization' and 'Data'.

Globalization : Lee Jung-hyo(KO->ENG) , 브렌트퍼드(ENG->KO)

Data : Pocheon(wikivoyage)

We've made changes to reflect your feedback. We need your review of our final document. ;) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 14:29, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kang Taeho@Kim jong min (hanyang) Kim jong min (hanyang) (talk) 14:31, 16 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Kim jong min (hanyang) @Kang Taeho Good, but make sure all content is referenced. For example, what is the source for this: "After receiving attention through this tournament, he joined Daewoo Royals (now Busan I'Park), the parent company of Ajou University." or "However, towards the end of the first half of the season, he suffered a serious injury and it became difficult for him to continue playing." ?

Regarding Pocheon, please see the feedback you got at Talk:Pocheon – Travel guide at Wikivoyage and carry out the fixes requested there _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:58, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8: Hyeonmin Song

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. This is my final project 페르미 역설(Fermi paradox), 용광로 이론(Melting pot). Thank you for your checking. SongHyeonmin2020007129 (talk) 04:49, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@SongHyeonmin2020007129 Good. Please check those pages over the next few days to see if there is any feedback from the zh wiki reviewers _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:08, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline：ZHANG XIAORUI

Dear Professor,

I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization."

I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published.Chiang Zhongzheng's Diary

This is the city I chose for Wikivoyage, and everything has been completed. Please review it.[3]

Thank you, Professor. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:00, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Well done with your translation. For Mohe, the following fixes are needed:

add a short 1-2 paragraphs subsection on 'history' to the 'understanding' section
for 'Get in', add information (listing) for the local intercity bus station if one exists in the city
can you add a listing for the Beiji Village, with the GPS coordinates to Mohe?
Then please ask for review and follow the recommendations from it (see https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User:Hanyangprofessor2#Final_review). Then check for feedback in the next few days and carry out any fixes that are asked for

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:21, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extra credit blog：ZHANG XIAORUI

Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.

Thank you, Professor. Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 10:24, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Zzzxxxrrr Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:13, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

LIU YUNXIANG&HUANG LINGXUAN

Dear Professor

We are taking 'Media Trends and Globalization' class. here is edit we have completed https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/生活在树上 chn-eng

https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%B7%A7%E5%85%8B%E5%8A%9B%E7%9A%84%E6%AD%B7%E5%8F%B2 eng-chn please check thank you! 1eleven0086 (talk) 11:31, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@1eleven0086 Very good. Please add a reference to the text marked with citation requests ("More than 2700 teachers in Zhejiang Province have been selected to participate in the evaluation of the college entrance examination. They are all university teachers with higher professional levels in their respective disciplines, or in-service high school teachers with three years or more of teaching experience, and the title of first level teacher or above in secondary schools") _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 5: YeogeunSong

Dear Professor:

I'm taking "Media Trends and Globalization"

Among the Deadline 5 tasks, My article finished in my sandbox. I'm attaching the link, so please check. I've finished both topics. I'll work hard on the rest of it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 송여근 (talk • contribs) 13:55, 17 December 2024 (UTC) 송여근 (talk) 06:25, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@송여근 If you have finished your translation, please publish it, by merging it with 근대화 이론 - 위키백과 . Then see if there is any feedback from the Korean reviewers. When copying your text, make sure not to delete the existing referenced content (it should be incorporated into your expansion). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:20, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline8：ZHANG MINGSHUO

Dear Professor, I am currently taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from Chinese to English, and it has already been published. Battle of Baotou(CN->ENG) (ENG->CN)戈佐岛体育场 Please review them. Thank you, Professor Shuo1103 (talk) 17:49, 17 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Shuo1103 Your English article has been declined because the translation is not finished - it is missing references. Please make sure to add references to your article. Please remember that only referenced content can be added to English Wikipedia and only such content will count for credit. The content from Chinese article that has no references needs to be referenced first before being translated. See Wikipedia:Verifiability

Your work is placed in Draft:Battle of Baotou _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:22, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Professor.I added references and re-posted the Battle of Baotou Please check it out. Thanks. Shuo1103 (talk) 11:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extra credit blog：HONG HAOTIAN

Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them.

Thank you, Professor. Honghaotian (talk) 05:48, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Honghaotian Ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:22, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

wiki:ZHANG WENFEI、ZHU YINGYING

Dear, Professor,

This is the final version of our extended English article, please check it. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Fifi623623/sandbox

주영영2022009598

장문비2022096399 Fifi623623 (talk) 08:10, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Niushoushan Fifi623623 (talk) 08:11, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

CHEN HEBING&LIU JUNYU

Dear professor, we have revised our translation of Hong Kong Media Controversy, but we are still unable to submit it. The reason given by the administrators is that the reference sources of our article are unreliable, but the information sources in the Chinese article are also unreliable, so we are unable to successfully upload it now. This is the reply given by the administrators. CHEN HEBING (talk) 08:26, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline8：白诗棋

Dear Professor, I am taking the courses "Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis" and "Media Trends and Globalization." I have completed our final project. This is the article I translated from English to chinese, |全球金融体系]and it has already been published. 白诗棋 (talk) 08:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Extra credit blog：LIMENGCHEN

Hello, Professor. These are all the additional blogs I have completed. Please review them

Thank you, Professor. Limengchen2777 (talk) 08:33, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 7: Dabin Kim

Dear Professor

I'm taking 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis' class. Here is my final draft for the Wikivoyage article on Pyeongtaek. I have incorporated all the feedback you provided in Deadlines 5 and 6.

Please let me know which parts should be further revised or improved to achieve an A+ grade.

Thank you for your checking. Dbinni (talk) 10:27, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Deadline 8, Additional Edit: Dabin Kim, Eunyeong Kang

Dear Professor,

We're taking the "Media Trends and Globalization" course.

Here are the final document links for our main project:

"Abortion in Japan" (English to Korean)

"1st Korean Music Awards" (Korean to English)

Additionally, we have completed the following translation tasks for extra credit:

"We Need to Talk About Kevin" (Eunyeong Kang, English to Korean)

"Press Room and Press Corps of the South Korean Government" (Dabin Kim, Korean to English).

Please review the documents. Thank you! Dbinni (talk) 10:43, 18 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]