Talk:1993 Long Island Rail Road shooting
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Is it Long Island Rail Road or Long Island Railroad? -- Zoe
both are used. Vera Cruz
- Only the former is used by the MTA[1], however. On the other hand, Wikipedia has the latter. --Calieber 13:28, 30 Sep 2003 (UTC)
- I have fixed the Wikipedia article. Rail Road is the correct usage for the LIRR (about the only railroad in the world for which it's correct, in fact) --Morven 17:20, 24 Oct 2003 (UTC)
- The use of the term "Rail Road" for the LIRR is accurate and emphasizes the antiquity of the line. It is currently the oldest railroad in the country still operating under its charter name.
- Other lines that uses "Rail Road" include the very old Strasburg Rail Road and the Indiana Rail Road Company. Cecropia 17:48, 17 Jan 2004 (UTC)
so is that 5:33 am or pm? Vera Cruz
It was a PM train. Not much call for 5:33 am ones even on the LIRR-- Someone else 06:19 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
the article doesnt say am or pm. Vera Cruz
ludicrous is not an npov term Vera Cruz
The cross examinations were bizarre. They were surreal. Colin: Did you get a view of the killer? Witness: Yes, I saw YOU. Colin: And what did the killer do next? Witness: YOU pointed the gun at me. -- Someone else 12:56 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
Bizarre is a pov. There is nothing bizarre about arguing that he is innocent. Vera Cruz
Yes. And in this case, a neutral one. It's not bizarre that he claimed to be innocent, it is bizarre that he intentionally called witnesses that identified him as the killer, and spoke to them in such a way as to provoke them to reiterate that identification time and again. -- Someone else 12:59 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
What happened to the bit about him having been detained by the victims? That was useful information (if true) and it isn't in the current version anymore. Tannin
Its your opinion that its bizarre. If you want to add the transcript of the trial, thats fine. But you aren't allowed to say whether u think it was bizarre or not. Vera Cruz
Is there any dispute that he "called witnesses that identified him as the killer, and spoke to them in such a way as to provoke them to reiterate that identification time and again"? If there is not, then any reasonable person would unhesitatingly use the word "bizarre". NPOV does not mean "bland" or "use only meaningless generalisations". Tannin
- It was completely bizarre. Every newsperson covering the trial remarked on how bizarre and surreal it was. Some saw his crossexaminations as evidence of his insanity. -- Someone else 13:14 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
A few words from CourtTV's coverage: "Some people think that was precisely what happened in 1995, when Colin Ferguson defended himself in a courtroom in Mineola, New York. Ferguson, who shot six people and wounded nineteen during a rampage on the Long Island Rail Road, was found competent to stand trial and represent himself.
Ferguson punctuated what many considered a lucid defense with some surreal moments, such as his diatribe about how the state devised ninety-three counts against him because his shooting spree occurred in 1993, or his cross examination of his own victims. It may have been odd behavior for the courtroom -- and possibly damaging to the court's dignity -- but it wasn't enough to keep Judge Donald Belfi from allowing Ferguson to defend himself. "
Most coverage used the word surreal or bizarre for these moments. --Someone else 13:32 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
- Thankyou. I think that makes it perfectly clear. Tannin
- Ahh, so some moments were "surreal", but the conduct as a whole was "lucid". That's subtly different from the claim that the trial was "completely bizzare", no?
- I wrote in the article that the crossexaminations were bizarre, rather than the whole trial, and they were. -- Someone else 14:56 Jan 14, 2003 (UTC)
I've done a moderately large copyedit here, mainly for greater readability, but also to clarify a few points. For starters, most instances of "killer" have been replaced with "shooter", since Ferguson was tried and convicted for other shootings as well as the killings. I've also removed the scare quotes from "black rage" and added a link to "innovative defense". I've put Kunstler & Kuby's arguments before the trial, rather than during, since the Ferguson did his own arguing once the trial started. Could someone clarify if Kunstler & Kuby remained as his advisors during the trial, or were they fired by Ferguson and replaced with a court-appointed counsel? Thanks. JHCC 14:21, 29 Sep 2004 (UTC)
Wouldn't the gun purchase have been *illegal*, not legal, if the license was fake? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 216.139.142.18 (talk • contribs) Superm401 - Talk 21:57, August 30, 2005 (UTC).
- Just what I came to this page to say. I think it was really illegal because he used a temporary location as a proof of residency. Superm401 | Talk 21:55, August 30, 2005 (UTC)
The Intro
The line " Motivated by phantom prejudice he saw as the reason for the failings in his life..." seems POV. What evidence do we have that the percieved prejudice was trully "phantom". Isn't it really the case that the claims of prejudice he cited as being resposible for the failures in his life were simply unproven or lacked any supporting evidence. As such the word phantom seems to be making a judgement on whether the pervieved prejudiced was just in his head or not. While it may have indeed been phantom, such a claim would seem difficult to prove sufficiently for it be NPOV as far as Wikipedia guidelines are concerned. Is their evidence available that justufies the use of that adjective? Remember, absence of evidence is not evidence of absence. --Cab88 10:27, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
--Cab88 10:27, 2 December 2005 (UTC)
Cleanup
I am going to attempt some cleanup here, at least of the top section. I must say this is a very odd article, considering that it is about a newsmaker, but fails to actually say up front exactly what he did, when, where, how, etc., or to cover the basic biographic details of his life. Instead, all there is is one sentence speculating about the motives of crimes which are, bizarrely, not mentioned except in passing. MCB 22:06, 11 December 2005 (UTC)
Question about Quotes
Question: To whom should the quote at the bottom be attributed?
- "I hope somewhere down the road I will be forgotten...that I will just be able to live the life I had before, a quiet life unknown to the world."
Parole date
I have removed the sentence about Ferguson being eligible for parole on a particular date, whether it's 2039, 2041, 2309, or 2214. I have been unable to find a reliable source; Google links make reference to all four of those. The only quasi-reliable source is The Smoking Gun, but that site is really only considered authoritative when it reproduces actual copies of official documents (and this is not the case here). Therefore, under WP:RS and WP:V, the sentence should be removed unless an authoritative and reliable source is found. MCB 05:58, 24 April 2006 (UTC)
Please stop moving the page
The assertion in the edit summary for the page move that "The incident is better known as the long island railroad massacre. i know this because i googled ferguson and the term long island railroad massacre had more results)" is not even remotely true. You did remember to quote the phrase, right? Otherwise the result will be wildly skewed with irrelevant results.
The following are direct cuts and pastes from my browser:
Results 1 - 10 of about 142,000 for "Colin Ferguson".
Results 1 - 10 of about 9,150 for "Long Island Railroad Massacre"
That's more than an order of magnitude difference. So, please leave the page name alone, OK? --MCB 06:31, 28 July 2006 (UTC)
Duplicate article redirected here
Apparently someone started a duplicate article title "Long Island Rail Road Massacre" unaware that this article was formerly named that (well, a slight variation, "Long Island Railroad Massacre"); I have redirected it here. --MCB 06:20, 19 December 2006 (UTC)
Gun Rights Advocates...
"Gun rights advocates frequently cite the Ferguson attack on the commuter train as an example of the danger of disarming the population, arguing that Ferguson was able to shoot as many victims as he did because no other person on the train was able to return fire."
That sounds pretty stupid to me. Almost too stupid. Is there some sort of source to back this up? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 68.32.132.145 (talk) 04:29, 29 December 2006 (UTC).
Undiscussed page moves
Please do not move pages unless there is a compelling need to do so, and then only after proposing the move here, on the article's Talk page. In this case, all that is needed is a simple disambiguation note redirecting those looking for the actor:
- {{For|the Canadian actor|Colin Ferguson (actor)}}
Posting on the Talk page for discussion would have also avoided the problem of having made three page moves (plain -> (criminal) -> (murderer) -> (mass murderer)) which, unfortunately, leaves a mess of redirects and double redirects.
Also, there is no particular point in performing a page move of that type unless you also create a disambiguation page for the name, instead of just leaving the automatically-created redirect.
I have undone the page move and added the disambiguation note, and if you still think a page move is necessary, propose it here on the Talk page for discussion. Given the disparity in the notability of the people with the name, I don't think a disambiguation page is necessary, thus no need for the page move. --MCB 23:18, 22 February 2007 (UTC)
White Passenger Shooting
I removed the race of the passengers as white because there were victims who were NOT white. 75.20.203.231 07:07, 2 April 2007 (UTC)
- Hmmm... I think that information would be suprising, as race was such a factor in the crime and the case. Can you help elaborate the racial aspects of the event correctly? Obviously we need sources for this... --Knulclunk 19:49, 3 April 2007 (UTC)
Colin Ferguson was a delusional paranoid schizophrenic
It was pretty clear to the vast majority of US psychiatrists living at the time that Colin Ferguson was a delusional paranoid schizophrenic. Despite manifesting all the classical symptoms of delusional paranoid schizophrenia, he was tried as if was a normal, healthy human being. See: "Criminal Competency on Trial": The Case of Colin Ferguson by Mark C. Bardwell (Author), Bruce A. Arrigo (Author)