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Article length
I was charting the growth of the article over the last couple of weeks using User talk:Dr pda/prosesize.js and thought I'd share the results:
Current http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=United_States&curid=3434750&oldid=141$ (150k)
- Prose size (text only): 63 kB (9992 words)
From the end of the most recent FAC: http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=United_States&oldid=139239542 (133k)
- Prose size (text only): 57 kB (9110 words)
From the start of the FAC process: http://en.wikipedia.org/enwiki/w/index.php?title=United_States&oldid=135527718 (114k)
- Prose size (text only): 48 kB (7779 words)
It's worth noting that there are a fair number of template:main articles linked here that require a fair bit of cleanup or that don't contain many of the points that are new to this article. The pre-FAC/mid-May suggestion that the article be broken up isn't viable, as those articles do already exist. That said, it might help us try to get back to a more effective article length to go through and take the scissors to the article, carefully cutting few dozen sentences after moving their key points and references to the main articles. MrZaiustalk 18:59, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
- The reference section of this article takes up alot of space. Isn't there a method/way of shrinking it? Or at least having it in a way that allows it to be contractable and expandable? Londium 21:45, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
Spanish will become the main language of the US in fifty years time
According to one of the sources used in the Spanish language article it will. Looks like POV to me.
- It's plausible. But please use a reputable source that is easier to identify. Signaturebrendel 02:02, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
I totally agree. It's the Spanish language page editors that don't.
It's not so pov, it's a reality. --Tones benefit 12:24, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think a prediction of the future can be considered reality. --Golbez 20:46, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
- Wiki is not a "Crystal Ball" that can predict the future; therefore this information is not appropriate at this time anyways. KyuuA4 17:26, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- We can't really predict this. Also, America is a big place. Spanish may be the most commonly-used language in the states bordering Mexico, and they may very well eventually constitute the majority of Americans, but that doesn't by any means that Spanish will be the main language in the U.S., there will still be many parts of America where the majority still speak English, and their congressional appointments will speak English. -- R'son-W (speak to me/breathe)
- Have a read of WP:NOT: Wikipedia is not a crystal ball. Unless we have a 100% reliable source that guarantees its going to happen, it's either OR, POV, or violation of NOT. Matt/TheFearow (Talk) (Contribs) (Bot) 07:44, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
The most that any of this implies is that if current demographic trends continue, then that would lead to Spanish being the majority language in that length of time. However, that is plenty of time for the trends to change entirely. Spanish-speaking people could stop immigrating, there could be waves of speakers of Croatian starting to arrive instead, Spanish-speakers in the US could start using English as their primary language so that their descendants don't even know Spanish, birth and/or death rates can change dramatically... lots of stuff can happen. We're not a crystal ball. *Dan T.* 18:04, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- I realize that you're agreeing with the "not a crystal ball" point, but I'd like to expand on this with a quasi-rhetorical question: At what point will 200% of the population speak Spanish if current demographic trends continue? Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 18:12, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- It is impossible for 200% of the population to speak Spanish, as the overall size of a population is limited to 100%. There may a 200% increase the use of the Spanish language. It is not possible to predict when such an increase will happen. What social scientists can gurantee you is that there will always be a wide variety of languages spoken in the U.S. Signaturebrendel 19:52, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- That was exactly my point. The "quasi-rhetorical" part didn't give it away? ;) Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 20:13, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- It is impossible for 200% of the population to speak Spanish, as the overall size of a population is limited to 100%. There may a 200% increase the use of the Spanish language. It is not possible to predict when such an increase will happen. What social scientists can gurantee you is that there will always be a wide variety of languages spoken in the U.S. Signaturebrendel 19:52, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
Thoughts and suggestions
I came here mostly to look at the coverage of culture, but I read through the entire article and was very impressed. I also looked through the recent edit history to get a sense of what's been going on. I have to say, I find it very odd, this resistance against coverage of America's major current war. I've restored the essential data about how much it has cost and how many Americans have given their lives to it--this seems to me very basic information that the average reader would hope and expect to find in this article. Of course there are all sorts of minute details that belong in the specific article on the war and not here, but to claim that these fundamental data points about one of the most important actions of the country at present are in some way not "relevant" is just stupid, and, I suspect, ideologically motivated.
A few other things I think need to be covered:
- I see someone, perhaps rather awkwardly, tried to address Andrew Johnson's impeachment. That effort was reverted, I guess understandably. But really, shouldn't both Johnson's impeachment and Clinton's be mentioned? The unprecedented peacetime economic expansion of the Clinton years also belongs here--couldn't all of Clinton be done in a single sentence?
- It just seems weird that you can read this whole article and not learn what the country's leading industry is. Is there no source for what three or five industries recorded the greatest income or profits in the most recent year?
- Agriculture? I'm not sure exactly where this would go, but the U.S. is one of--if not the--greatest agricultrual powers in the world. What are the leading crops/animals? How dominant is the country?
- Philosophy. Very important. The transcendentalism of Emerson. The pragmatism of James and Dewey. The U.S. has made major contributions to the philosophical discipline. This can't be left out.
Alright, I'll dismount from my high horse. I'm happy to discuss/debate any and all of these matters. Just don't say that an accounting of the U.S. citizens who are currently dying in the U.S.'s war doesn't belong in the U.S. article.--DocKino 07:05, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
- Since we have several extensive articles on the war, I don't see why any more than a howdy-do and a link to the article on the war is required. It's not very basic information for an article on the country. War, yes, country, no. --Golbez 07:10, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
- Well, there are several extensive articles on many of the topics covered in the country article--it's hard to understand what point you think you're making here. The number of people who have died in a very recent or ongoing war isn't just basic information about a country, it's crucial.
- Another thought on culture--Music: Elvis is inarguable, but I'm not sure about the empahsis on celebrities (Michael Jackson, Madonna) rather than on true popular musical innovators like Chuck Berry, Bob Dylan, and James Brown.--DocKino 15:43, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
- Agreed on the Iraq war data point. The other argument offered for cutting it--"We don't mention the costs of any of the other wars, nor should we"--is equally nonsensical. The "other wars" are not current. We mention many current data points--the population, the distribution of power in the Congress, the military budget, the winner and loser of the most recent presidential elections, and a host of others--without supplying that data for every, or even any, comparable point in the past. I would like to call that "common sense," but, sadly, it doesn't quite seem to be common; let's call it "good sense." Dr. K (are you a secret Dwight Gooden fan?), your other suggestions are all sound, though we are under some pressure not to expand but rather to trim the size of the article (there's a thread on that in the recently archived discussion). Perhaps you'd like to make a counterargument on that. Specifically, I've looked for the kind of industry data you mention online and have been unable to find it. My next trip to the library, I intend to check out the recent almanacs, which generally do carry such data. Best, Dan.—DCGeist 22:39, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
- If you want current information on the war, by all means, go to the war article. It has no place in the country article. DocKino, you have yet to justify your statement that it is "crucial" information for this article. Would you suggest we include each state's death toll in every state article? Every city's? If not, then why here? --Golbez 22:45, 5 July 2007 (UTC)
- Actually mentioning the current death toll from our current "military engagement" makes sense. I see your point, Golbez, it makes sense but I would argue that our wars are fought on a national level. Therefore, it makes sense to menion the death toll on the nation's article, but not that of towns, counties or statiods. Dc. K. also has a point in stating that we don't mention the death toll of other wars; so why mention this? Becuase it's current - as Dan said above.
- As for the inclusion of ag data, true the U.S. is an ag-power. But the U.S. is a every-thing-power. Becuase the U.S. has by far the largest pop of any post-indstr. country, it has/is pretty much the largest everything (be it military spending or soy crops). Yet, agriculture is only a tiny component of the current American economy - our present day economy is characterized by the service sector and that is what we should focus in this article. Regards, Signaturebrendel 23:11, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
In the last sentence under Sports the claim is made that "Several American athletes have become world famous, in particular baseball player Babe Ruth, boxer Muhammad Ali, and basketball player Michael Jordan.". Tiger Woods was just removed from that list by someone claiming he isn't famous enough, but Babe Ruth remains, even though Baseball is nowhere near as popular anywhere else in the world as it is in the US. As a European I can say that in my experience Tiger Woods is a household name over here, while no-one ever mentions Babe Ruth. I'd believe the claim if there was any source for it, but there isn't, so it looks like speculation to me.
US air force jets
i don't believe the source states that the oil fields being flown over by the air force jets in the picture are kuwaiti... they may very well be iraqi, and the kuwaiti reference should probably be replaced — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.156.166.51 (talk)
- True, the source doesn't identify the location of the pictures oil fields. It doesn't mention whether they're in Iraq or Kuwait. Unfortunately I'm not a war-buff and don't know enough about Gulf War I to critique this pic's cap. I do, however, agree that unless the oil fields can be idenified as Kuwaiti they pic cap shouldn't speculate on the oirl fields location. Regards, Signaturebrendel 23:18, 6 July 2007 (UTC)
Government Section
Why has senate majority leader been placed in the government section? It is not a constitutional position and truthfully holds no power other than what it is granted by the members of the majority party. Also, I noticed that ever since Nancy Pelosi became speaker there has been a battle to keep her in the government section (this was never even considered when Dennis Hasteret was speaker). It seems that someone just wants to flaunt the fact that the democrats have control of congress by adding every position they can think of or someone is just getting to wrapped up in being fair. In my opinion it should either have only the president (the constitutional head of state) or the leaders of all three branches of government (president, vice-president, speaker, and chief justice) and thats it. In any event majority leader should not be included because it is not a constitutional office. President pro temp. of the senate has a more legitimate claim because it is a constitutional office and third in line to the presidency, majority leader is neither of these. And since I cannot remove it, can someone else?
- Quite right. Senate maj. leader was recently added and per your argument should be removed. Done.—DCGeist 16:31, 8 July 2007 (UTC)
Someone keeps remoing my information about New Zealand and the ANZUS Treaty from under military and foreign relations, even though the information is encyclopedic verifiable and comes straight from this very website.... why is that?? Murchy 16:46, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
The government section states that the United States is the oldest federation in the world. This should either be changed to something like the oldest continuous federation in the world (as recommended by the FAQ page) or removed, since Switzerland was declared a federation in the year 1291. See: Federal Charter of 1291. — — Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.73.94.49 (talk • contribs) 17:49, 30 August 2007(UTC)
FAQ
I have added two new sections to the FAQ. Tell me if you think that they are proper additions. (As the FAQ section is meant to be anonymous, I request that you do not add {{unsigned}} to this comment.
- I think you are missing the point of why you are not supposed to sign the FAQ. It is not to make it anonomous, as a view of the history will reveal who you are. It is done for the same reason as no one signs additions to articles, it would be distracting to add it. 199.125.109.67 23:20, 9 July 2007 (UTC)
- Bingo! (sign flash, jack-pot-sound) Signaturebrendel 00:26, 10 July 2007 (UTC)
- Oh. My mistake.
Subdivisions
Why does this article lack a subdivisions section, or a template to guide readers to the 50 states and overseas holdings of the United States? I believe more readers would come to a "United States" article seeking pointers to Iowa, Maine, Nebraska, Arizona and Kentucky than, for example, the number of dead and wounded from a current engagement overseas. Is this article not overseen by the WikiProject on Countries? Should it not then follow its guidance? The relevant guideline suggests that these articles give a "Quick overview of the administrative subdivisions of the country. Name the section after the first level of subdivisions (e.g. provinces, states, departments, etc.) and give the English name. Also include overseas possessions. Link to "(subdivisions) of X". This section could also include an overview map of the country." As a side note, this article is still terribly bloated. Have you considered making more effective use of summary style, specifically in the "Income and social class", "History", and "Crime and punishment" sections? I'm sure that there aren't to many who would fault you for implementing trims in those sections. Geuiwogbil 13:55, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- That's a good point, there used the be a template in the middle of the article about the states, but it would appear to have been removed some time ago... --Golbez 13:59, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- Because it was something like 400px, and illegible below that - struck as part of the recent attempt at a FAC cleanup. Note that Territorial evolution of the United States is still linked to as a main article from the Geo section, and every state is listed therein. That said, it wouldn't hurt to have a two sentence summary of that article in the Geo section to explain the link being there. MrZaiustalk 14:06, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- That's a really bad article to direct people to for a list of the states. =p --Golbez 14:16, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- Because it was something like 400px, and illegible below that - struck as part of the recent attempt at a FAC cleanup. Note that Territorial evolution of the United States is still linked to as a main article from the Geo section, and every state is listed therein. That said, it wouldn't hurt to have a two sentence summary of that article in the Geo section to explain the link being there. MrZaiustalk 14:06, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- It might be a little clunky, but it works.
Looks like there isn't much else we can use other than the cat. However, I wonder if they'd look kindly on a 5 column list of states in the Geo main article, eliminating the need to summarize and link to territorial evolution there.MrZaiustalk 14:43, 12 July 2007 (UTC) - Posted two clicks too soon - Can replace the main link with U.S. state w/o changing a word. Works better, too. MrZaiustalk 14:44, 12 July 2007 (UTC)- Of course, I say that, and neglect to state that that would overlook the territories and D.C. What would you say to breaking that list out of U.S. states, moving it to List of U.S. states and territories, and adding the territories and D.C. with a new lead reading something like "This list of U.S. states and territories lists the 50 states that have made up the United States since 1959 and its territories and the District of Columbia, which, though neither state nor territory, is home to the federal government of the United States." Enough of the states and territories are listed in geography to link to that as a main w/o qualms. MrZaiustalk 15:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- We have a Political divisions of the United States, I don't think all of that article juggling is needed. --Golbez 23:58, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- Of course, I say that, and neglect to state that that would overlook the territories and D.C. What would you say to breaking that list out of U.S. states, moving it to List of U.S. states and territories, and adding the territories and D.C. with a new lead reading something like "This list of U.S. states and territories lists the 50 states that have made up the United States since 1959 and its territories and the District of Columbia, which, though neither state nor territory, is home to the federal government of the United States." Enough of the states and territories are listed in geography to link to that as a main w/o qualms. MrZaiustalk 15:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, that's less apt, both to the geo section, and as answer to Geuiwogbil, as it discusses considerably more than the geographical distinctions. A straight up list of states and territories might be a simpler approach, and may actually be a welcome change to the U.S. state article, given the degree to which the lengthy list detracts from the article as a whole. MrZaiustalk 00:38, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
Postwar superpower
The first chapter of the "Postwar superpower" section equated the United States and Soviet Union in a misleading way. It downplayed the significance of US allies such as the UK and France, which had their own military doctrines and nuclear weapons unlike any of the Soviet allies. It stated that both supported dictatorships as if the countries had a similar view on democracy. It equated American anti-communists such as McCarthy with communists by stating that they attempted to suppress opposition like the Communist Party in communist countries. McCarthy never imprisoned and tortured members of the Democratic Party like communists did with their opposition. Moreover, there wasn't just one Communist Party in each Eastern Bloc country. In East Germany, for instance, there were several parties. Nazi activity was suppressed in several West European countries after WWII. Does that mean political opposition was suppressed like in communist countries? No. The chapter had to be rewritten to more accurately reflect actual history.--Kelstonian 17:25, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
- You're right about the tone of the later part of the section, but your edits to the first part introduced a couple of oddly worded phrases that decreased readability, and, more importantly, downplayed the importance of the superpowers. Reverted the first part to the stronger and more correct wording, left the positive edits to the anti-communist section. Note that we discuss the role of NATO and select member states elsewhere in the article, as well. MrZaiustalk 17:40, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
- I agree about the readiblity issue and also about including the Korean war as it is now. However, it's misleading to talk of the Cold War as US and SU jockeying for power the way, for instance, Britain and France were in their colonial wars. The Cold War was mostly an ideological war in which success was measured by the political and economic system that each country ended up with; power was only a tool to achieve these goals. The SU was trying to spread communism and the US was trying to prevent it.--Kelstonian 20:11, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
- Not just prevent it, but actively promote western economic and political ideals. Jockeying for power isn't all that far off the mark, but it would be a little closer to say something along the lines of "using their political, economic, and military strength to promote the dueling ideals of Stalinist communism and capitalist democracy" - Probably ought to stress all three to avoid glossing over the non-military aspects of the Cold War MrZaiustalk 20:32, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
- I agree about the readiblity issue and also about including the Korean war as it is now. However, it's misleading to talk of the Cold War as US and SU jockeying for power the way, for instance, Britain and France were in their colonial wars. The Cold War was mostly an ideological war in which success was measured by the political and economic system that each country ended up with; power was only a tool to achieve these goals. The SU was trying to spread communism and the US was trying to prevent it.--Kelstonian 20:11, 14 July 2007 (UTC)
This is unrelated to the discussion above, but why does this section mention Bush and the Axis of Evil? As I remember his speech, it mentioned the Axis of Evil only shortly, however, it was quite some time ago. It seems to me that, when one is compacting so much history into such a small section (albeit, the section has many links, but let's just say that the average lazy internet bum isn't going to play around with those links), wouldn't it be more efficient to remove said Axis of Evil speech and simply say,
"In late 2002, the Bush administration pressed for regime change in Iraq on controversial grounds, and, in 2003, a Coalition of the Willing invaded Iraq, removing President Saddam Hussein. Although facing both external[36] and internal[37] pressure to withdraw, the United States maintains its military presence in Iraq at this time."
I suggest that "at this time" be added, for the reason that the US Congress is, at this time, requesting that a withdrawl be performed, and a sizable portion of the population is as well. I'm not Democrat or anything (in fact, just the opposite), but it just seems...better. Also, perhaps a link could be added after 'time'. It really shouldn't be that hard to find some evidence that the US is still in Iraq :P. Cronos2546 00:07, 16 July 2007 (UTC)Cronos2546
- Dissent in Congress has been noted, although more up to date sources would be valuable - that and the use of the present tense is adequage. That said, the Axis of Evil ref isn't all that terribly relevant, in retrospect (although it did have a considerable social impact, regardless of the brevity of its use by Bush). MrZaiustalk 00:14, 16 July 2007 (UTC)
Name of article
--Jolo Buki Original 14:52, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
- Please see the FAQ for further information on why this article is called "United States" instead of "United States of America." Thank you, Signaturebrendel 22:36, 17 July 2007 (UTC)
NPOV
I think the opening paragraphs need to be reconsidered for NPOV. There's alot of emotive language in there and I can see why it could be hard to leave that out when most of the editors are likely American, but it's unnecessary. I think it could be altered to be more objective is all :) Sean 23:38, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
- Okay, but could you give us an example. To me the intro reads NPOV. Regards, Signaturebrendel 23:42, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
- Aside from "rebellious states" (which is, at the very least, accurate), and the final sentence which seems warranted, given the subject, I don't see any really strong examples of POV in the lead. The excessively colorful prose of a few months ago is largely gone from that section, although some has creeped back in to the expanded culture section. MrZaiustalk 01:04, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- I've reread the lead and I can't find a single passage that qualifies as "emotive language." Everything in the lead appears well supported by high-quality citations where appropriate and abundant historical evidence in general. As requested above, please give an example of what you perceive as "emotive language."—DCGeist 02:01, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- As a non-American, I think I can see some grounds for the statement about emotive language. Examples:
- At over 3.7 million square miles (over 9.6 million km²) and with more than 300 million people (The "over" and "more than" are not necessary, these are rounded numbers)
- most ethnically and socially diverse (ethnically yes, socially experienced as rather uniform, likely to be more uniform than some countries with tribal or caste systems)
- rebellious (why not the less emotive "seceding")
- first successful colonial war of independence (not quite; that would have been when the indians had expelled the colonisers)
- World War I confirmed the nation's status as a great power (why not "World War I confirmed the nation's military power")
- dominant economic, political, military, and cultural force (first three yes, but the latter only from a western viewpoint)
- −Woodstone 08:19, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- As a non-American, I think I can see some grounds for the statement about emotive language. Examples:
- 1)Well, unless we give exact figures for land area and population (which would require continually updating), using "more than" and "over" is fine. 2) According to the article, it is one of the worlds most diverse, not the mos diverse. 3) we call them Rebellious because they rebelled (Secession doesn't necessarily mean a war was fought). 5) They were a great power after WWI because of diplomatic, economic, and military strength. 6) That last statement is sourced. New England (C) (H) 12:53, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- 1) Because the numbers are rounded, it is not relevant if the actual number is (just) above or below.
- 2) From the outside, the USA makes a very uniform impression, more so than many other countries with more variation in culture.
- 3) Since the war is already mentioned, the word rebellious is superfluously emotive
- 5) The word "great" power is judgmental. They are "powerful"
- 6) The impact of USA culture is not very deep in most of Asia (a large fraction of the world's population)
- −Woodstone 20:28, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
That's all debatable, but I forgot to talk about the colonial revolt thing. The term "colonial war of independence" implies that colonists rebelled against the colonizing country. Indians were not colonists. New England (C) (H) 20:35, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
RE Woodstone:
- "From the outside, the USA makes a very uniform impression, more so than many other countries with more variation in culture." - That's one hell of a wrong impression! The U.S. is indeed very diverse. Even if -and doubts this is the case- most non-Americans had the misperception that the U.S. is homogenous, we'd need to bust that myth right in the intro.
- "Because the numbers are rounded, it is not relevant if the actual number is (just) above or below." Ture, but it is customary to hint the reader whether or not the population is "above or below."
- The impact of USA culture is not very deep in most of Asia (a large fraction of the world's population)" Yes-and-no, U.S. culture has affected much of the world including Asia.
- The word "great" power is judgmental. They are "powerful" True, we could lose the word "great." There is one problem, however. There are several powerful countries in the world (Germany, China, etc...) - yet the U.S. is especially powerful. How else can we convey that the U.S. is powerful to an extent greater than that of other powerful countries?
Thanks for giving exmaples. Regards, Signaturebrendel 21:02, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- 6) I would argue that the impact of USA culture on Asia is far more than most of their leaders would like. We have had a significant cultural impact on Korea, Vietnam, Japan, China, and India, just to name a few. Whether that impact is positive or negative is obviously POV, but I cannot imagine that you would argue it's not significant. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 20:45, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, I do maintain USA's cultural impact on India (and China) is minimal.
- A won colonial war of independence is one where the original population regains power over the newcomers. Not so in the USA. So it cannot be said the have won the first of them.
- Cultural diversity is difficult to measure, but I cannot see how USA would be more diverse than many others.
- The essence of these points is only partly their truth, but more their boastfulness. Toning down would help.
- −Woodstone 21:34, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- Exhibit A. ;) Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:46, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- Indeed - all of "Bollywood" can serve as exhibit - just for fun: Exhbiti B. Signaturebrendel 22:08, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- Exhibit A. ;) Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:46, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- Response:
- Yes, I do maintain USA's cultural impact on India (and China) is minimal. What are your sources?
- A won colonial war of independence is one where the original population regains power over the newcomers. Not so in the USA. So it cannot be said the have won the first of them. - This contradicts most history books.
- Cultural diversity is difficult to measure, but I cannot see how USA would be more diverse than many others. Most any sociology or anthropology text describes the U.S. as one of the most diverse nations on earth. Stating that the U.S. isn't especially diverse contradicts current consensus among social scientists and, therefore, our sources. Quite frankly, I find it hard how anyone could even see the U.S. as homogenous. The U.S. consists of 300 million persons (the larger the group, the more diverse), most of whom the descendents of immigrants that came from all corners of the globe (no ancestry group makes up more than 16%). The sheer number of ethnic groups, languages and beleives that characterise more than 1 million people within the U.S. is amazing - not mention the variety of ideologies, tastes and socio-economic differences. But you don't have to take my word for it - take that of our sources and the majority of social scientists for it. Regards, Signaturebrendel 21:59, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
- I think the examples given above are good, it wasn't that any particular examples jumped out at me but the general feel of the opening paragraphs was of admiration and a slightly romanticized history. For example it states "the U.S. is one of the world's most ethnically and socially diverse nations" which is a subjective matter of opinion, and shouldn't be in the opening sections of an objective encyclopedia. Also, the facts and statements that have been chosen for the opening section are all positive, "america is a great power", "america has the largest economy" etc may be fact but are they appropriate? Other points of emotive language such as "rebellious states" reads as states that are rebellious in nature, rather than states that rebelled. Figures stating ethnic diversity and land mass are fine but do we need phrases like "from almost every corner of the globe" and "with more than 300million people..."? Note that the modern globe doens't actually have corners ;) I just think the widely read introduction to an important article on the English Wikipedia (where many readers and editors are from the USA) needs to be scrutinized for objectivity and relevance. Sean 00:10, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
I notice the intro says "The American Civil War ended slavery in the United States," which is untrue. Slavery existed for several months after the Civil War, it was ended by the 13th Amendment after the Civil War. The artle also goes on to say that the North abolished slavery by 1804, when the truth is Delaware, Kentucky, Maryland, Missouri, West Virginia, Washington D.C. had slavery during the Civil War. New Jersey kept slaves over a certain age as "apprentices for life" until the 13th Amendment. -- "Dominant economic, political, military, and cultural force": There needs to be a lot more explicit evidence to claim that USA is a dominant cultural force, which is far from obvious. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.221.29.252 (talk) 23:45, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
":::5) The word "great" power is judgmental. They are "powerful" " - The term great power has a specific meaning which is warranted. Captain Crush 00:37, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
Use of a scroll template
Obviously, I'm sure this issue has already come up before. I'm justing wondering why a scroll template isn't neccessary in the reference section when there's nearly 200 reference links? I can't seem to find the "warning on the scoll template page" anywhere, and I'm not going to scroll through all 28 archive pages to find the discussion about it. 24.21.130.80 16:24, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- He was referring to Template:Scroll box. The real problem isn't one of necessity or readability, it's about basic accessibility - using overflow tags and the template that does the same breaks the printable layout of this page, rendering obscured content permanently obscured to readers of the printed page and, potentially, users of screen-readers reliant upon said layout. MrZaiustalk 16:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- Also, as the editor that put it in this time appears to have been a heavier editor of the zh wiki, please keep in mind that the above applies equally to all wikis on Wikimedia and, presumably, all other installs of MediaWiki. MrZaiustalk 17:37, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
US economy
I've changed the sentence that said that the US economy is the largest in the world. I've added the sentence: "second if the EU's economy is counted.". I think that is a fact that should be in it, it just makes the picture complete. Whether people do want to count in the EU or not, that is up to them, but it is a fact that the EU's economy is slightly larger than that of the US. --Robster1983 20:24, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- I agree it's interesting, but perhaps as a parenthetical? It currently sounds a little awkward to my ears. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 20:26, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- If it's minor or unrelated enough in the sentence at hand that it is stronger in parentheses, it doesn't belong in the LEAD. That said, Robster's correct that it is worth pointing out. Replaced with similar statement in Economy section that also has added benefit of giving perspective to GDP compared to other nations that was previously lacking, implicit instead on the GWP statement. MrZaiustalk 20:31, 21 July 2007 (UTC) PS: Adding it to the lead without rewriting the sentence (which is strong as it stands - I'd advise against it) adds an implicit label of "nation" to the EU.
- Well, does that mean that the article as it is, stays the same? Th section of the US economy is saying that the EU's economy is larger. So the article contradicts itself then. To find a compromis (which is correct at the same time): what if the lead would say that the US economy is one of the largest of the world? It won't contradict itself, and in the section of economy, people can read more about the US economy, and whether or not it can be identified as the largest economy of the world. --Robster1983 20:51, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- If it's minor or unrelated enough in the sentence at hand that it is stronger in parentheses, it doesn't belong in the LEAD. That said, Robster's correct that it is worth pointing out. Replaced with similar statement in Economy section that also has added benefit of giving perspective to GDP compared to other nations that was previously lacking, implicit instead on the GWP statement. MrZaiustalk 20:31, 21 July 2007 (UTC) PS: Adding it to the lead without rewriting the sentence (which is strong as it stands - I'd advise against it) adds an implicit label of "nation" to the EU.
- That means that the relative size of the GDP is perfectly clear in the lead already. Also, read the whole sentence. Once again, by adding mention of the EU in the way you did you added an implicit statement that the EU is a nation and not an IGO. This edit was intended to resolve your concerns stated above without necessitating a rewrite of the concise, correct, and well written sentence currently in the lead. It is in no way contradictory, as the lead is clearly talking about "national economies" while the Economy section only compares the GDP of the United States to that of the EU, containing no other comparative text dealing with the total GDP. MrZaius<fontcolor="Blue">talk 21:18, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- First of all: the EU is not an IGO. The European Community could be seen as such, but the EU is more than that, for the EC is the first of three pillars of the EU. The EU itself can be seen as a supranational and/ or a intergovernmental body. It is not (yet) seen as a country, but it is also accepted as something more than an IGO (for no other other International Organisation has integrated facts like laws (the EU laws are the highest laws in each EU-state, the national laws are 'beneath' them), currency (Euro) and a central bank, nor does it have a parliament). So saying that the EU is an IGO, is in fact just not correct. However, the rest you are saying, I must agree with. The lead indeed says 'national economy', and the EU's economy is supranational. So I cannot do anything else, than to agree with you on that one. --Robster1983 21:41, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
- On a side note, there seems to be some room for debate as to whether or not the EU can be classified as an IGO, noted in the EU article here and elsewhere. MrZaiustalk 21:59, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
True, the EU economy is larger than that of the U.S., but the U.S. economy is the largest national economy in the world. The article did not state the U.S. to have the world's largest economy (such a statement is disputable) - it only states the U.S. to have the world's largest national economy - a statement which is indisputable. Regards, Signaturebrendel 00:41, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
- Welcome to the repetitious repetition party, no with 20% more repetition than the original 100% ;) MrZaiustalk 00:43, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
- Yup! That's why I added this question to the FAQs. Signaturebrendel 02:27, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
The US economy section was horribly unbalanced against the US (yet again). I took the appropriate steps and made it (somewhat) better. --Rotten 05:14, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
- Uh, what you changed definitely wasn't 'unbalanced'. Octane [improve me] 22.07.07 0517 (UTC)
- I reverted your edits. There is no reason to remove the median household income figures for other developed countries. They give readers a reference point by which to judge the U.S. median household income. How is showing the UK's median household income which is lower than that of the U.S. showing the U.S. in a bad light? It isn't! This removal of referenced and relevant information is completely counter-productive. Signaturebrendel 05:25, 22 July 2007 (UTC)
Party affiliation diagram
I've removed the party affiliation diagram. States like Texas don't register party membership, and the sampling of states that do is not representative of the whole United States. --Davidstrauss 22:30, 25 July 2007 (UTC)
- I disagree. The diagram is based on reputable polls. The publishers and researchers do beleive that their poll are representative of the country and on Wikipedia we need to take their word for it, as long as they their research has been adopted by reputable instutitions. Fruthermore, the chart reflects the total number of registered members with each party, information which is known to both parties. It is not a poll of political orientation, which is differs from partisanships. I re-inserted the chart as it is informative and not in any way misleading - it simply shows registered partisan membership. Signaturebrendel 05:18, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
Independents
Golbez has removed the partisan membership chart becuase he/she thinks that Independent implies third party membership. It does not. "Independent" simply means that a person is not a part of either the Republican nor Democratic Party. Please see the source used for further information. There absolutely nothing desceptive about this chart. It merely shows the size of America's two big parties. Regards, Signaturebrendel 18:36, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- "Independent" is an official registration in many states, so this is giving undue weight to that. I don't see any added value from this pie chart unless it shows all registrations. There's more than two parties in this country, y'know. --Golbez 18:47, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- Yes there are, but generally speaking social scientists refer to the U.S. as a two-party system. Perhaps the term "independent" is used in a slightly ambigous manner. If I changed "Independent" to "Other" would that solve the problem? Signaturebrendel 19:03, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- It will fix the problem of me removing it; it will not fix the problem of its relevance, since such a simplistic chart can be handled in text. --Golbez 19:05, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- Well, it's good to know that wording will improve the chart and "fix the problem." As for relevance: True, the info can, is being handeled in the text. But charts tend to be better at conveying info to readers - they allow our readers to visualize the info. Signaturebrendel 19:12, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- It will fix the problem of me removing it; it will not fix the problem of its relevance, since such a simplistic chart can be handled in text. --Golbez 19:05, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
- Yes there are, but generally speaking social scientists refer to the U.S. as a two-party system. Perhaps the term "independent" is used in a slightly ambigous manner. If I changed "Independent" to "Other" would that solve the problem? Signaturebrendel 19:03, 26 July 2007 (UTC)
Splitting
There's still a lot here in the relatively polished History and Culture sections that aren't in the slightly messy B-class articles at History of the United States and Culture of the United States. I'm of half a mind to take our History section and use that as the basis for a rewrite of the History article, although I haven't had time to get started on it. Merge back the other article into our section and split that into a new article, and it'd be starting out with a ton of strong sources, etc. Will hopefully start over the weekend. MrZaiustalk 12:23, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- The article is way too long. It needs to be shortened some how. There is no need for such great detail in one article. I would like to help in such a shortening process, but cannot promise anything. The article's excessive length and onerous amount of detail was a significant aspect of the recent failed WP:FAC. --Merbabu 14:18, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- I estimate that the article is about 25 percent shorter than the Encyclopedia Britannica's comparable Micropedia article. Remember, that's their summary article. The Macropedia version is much, much longer. Go to britannica.com and see how long their full-length and student versions of United States are (288 and 177 online pages respectively, if you're feelin' lazy). To call the amount of detail in our article "onerous" is gross hyperbole.—DCGeist 17:12, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- I wouldn't call it "onerous" either, but it was somewhat disheartening to see the article grow by 20-30% during the FAC. The split mentioned above, however, would take as back to pre-FAC4 levels, if not lower still. Just as importantly, it would give us well written articles that we could create real summaries for - As it stands, what we have is a slightly shorter rewrite, not a summary, of those two sections' main articles. MrZaiustalk 18:19, 27 July 2007 (UTC) PS: Using Britannica as grounds for comparison doesn't really work, as what we keep in separate articles they just consider pages within their US article, including the history and culture pages mentioned above and most of the pages in our little "See also" navbox
- Whether or not the aritcle is of excessive length varies greatly with section. While the history section may be 2/3 the length of its main, the economy section isn't. Consider that we have 2 GAs, and 1 B-class article dealing with nothing but income, that is not to count other articles on issues such as class (2 GAs, 1 B-class), wealth, homeownership, and poverty (1 B-class each). Overall there are over half a dozen "full-size" articles discussing the U.S. economy alone. The same can be said for the politics section. Before we devise a strategy to shorten the article, we need to identify those section who arn't limited to giving summaries of their main article(s). While we should be able to get the article down to about 100kb/110kb/120kb, it is going to remain long. I agree w/ MrZaius, that the post-FA growth rate is a bit worrisome yet would like to stress that this is going to be one of the longest high-quality article on WP. Regards, Signaturebrendel 21:37, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't part of the length due to the references section, which stands at 4102 words, or around 28 kilobytes? In which case, the actual size is somewhere around 123 kilobytes. —Viriditas | Talk 22:57, 27 July 2007 (UTC)
- Absolutely. References are a huge part of this article - the infobox and wiki links also add to the article's length considerably. The actual article, that is prose, is much smaller than the ~ 140kb you see listed at the top of the page while you edit. Signaturebrendel 00:11, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
Regarding the last few comments, I'm talking about length of prose, not the size of the article (including references) measured in kb. It's a better than it was before its last FAC, but there is still work to do. I'm not sure why this article must be longer than FA quality country articles, particularly the history section. Much of that extra detail should go into the sub-articles. --Merbabu 00:38, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
Exactly: I'm not arguing that the history section is poorly written or overly verbose, I'm saying it's better written and more thouroughly sourced than History of the United States, and, merged back, it would make a great start towards GA/FA there, and allow us to cut 10k of prose and 20k of source right off the top. Same applies to the Culture section. Here's the current stats on the article:
- Prose size (HTML): 142 kB
- References (HTML): 115 kB
- Wiki text: 152.0 KiB (21570 words)
- Prose size (text only): 65 kB (10360 words)
- References (text only): 27 kB
As you can see, even the prose is something like 30k over what WP:LENGTH recommends. When I break a copy of the history section out into a sandbox, I get the following stats for it:
- Prose size (HTML): 30 kB
- References (HTML): 1 kB
- Wiki text: 2.9 KiB (421 words)
- Prose size (text only): 14 kB (2174 words)
- References (text only): 0 kB
Compared to History of the United States:
- Prose size (HTML): 30 kB
- References (HTML): 8 kB
- Wiki text: 2.9 KiB (421 words)
- Prose size (text only): 14 kB (2175 words)
- References (text only): 3 kB
As you can tell, the neglected parent for the history section is only twice as long as the prose of the current history section. Almost entirely unsourced, I'm awfully tempted to take the significant ideas in that article not already covered in our History section, introduce them into it, and then move it back over the pre-existing article at History of the United States. Won't be simple or happen overnight, but it does seem warranted. Doing that alone would allow us to cut the history section here in half, shooting for ~7k of prose, so that it reads more like summary of the main article. Note that there's also a number of similarly detailed sections here that are better written and more thouroughly sourced than their parent articles. Rinse, wash, repeat, and we can get this article pared down to the point that it is both strong and concise enough to survive its Nth FAC. MrZaiustalk 01:19, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
I agree that the article is too long. It should however be shortened, not splitup. The article treats the History elaborately, not briefly, while there's an article already treating the history of US. The Government and politics refers to 4 main articles – isn't that an indication that "Government and politics of US" should be an article in itself? While some very brief text about Government and politics can remain in this article. Maybe same for Foreign relations and military later? Economy and Demographics maybe have more than something in common, and may be merged, shortened and it's content lifted over to a new article? Same for Culture. As regards comparisons to Encyclopedia Britannica – Wikipedia is too different to be compared. That aside, I think classical encyclopediae are much overrated, and shouldn't be used for citations, like Wikipedia shouldn't. Said: Rursus ☺ ★ 10:41, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
NPOV: Criticism of the United States
I don't seem to see much criticism in this article. Won't this be an NPOV problem? Kleinbell 02:52, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- What would be an appropriate amount of criticism? :-) Or, a better question would perhaps be, what specific criticisms are missing in your opinion? --Merbabu 03:03, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- There's a fair bit openly discussed, and a fair bit insinuated by tone - the phrase proxy war is nowhere a glowing acclamation. Criticism should be directed at specific policies, as there seem to be rather few sane people who would criticize the US simply for existing. It and most other details should be covered primarily in the articles covering those policies and, in the case of the more controversial ones (those resulting in the world's leading incarceration rate, those leading up to the Iraq war, etc), the criticism is at least hinted at, and in several cases openly discussed in the article. MrZaiustalk 03:22, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- We should not simply look for criticisms to 'balance' the article as if there should be equal weight on a set of NPOV scales. On the other hand, omission (either by mistake or intent) of any significant and relevant 'negative facts' is indeed a POV problem, and there is no reason in principal why they can't be placed in this article. I guess we wait to see if Kleinbell does have anything specific in mind. --Merbabu 03:34, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- Doesn't NPOV mean that there shouldn't be any kind of criticism OR praise? My earlier complaints about NPOV in this article were about the positive emotive language rather than a lack of negativity Sean 17:39, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
- We should not simply look for criticisms to 'balance' the article as if there should be equal weight on a set of NPOV scales. On the other hand, omission (either by mistake or intent) of any significant and relevant 'negative facts' is indeed a POV problem, and there is no reason in principal why they can't be placed in this article. I guess we wait to see if Kleinbell does have anything specific in mind. --Merbabu 03:34, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- There's a fair bit openly discussed, and a fair bit insinuated by tone - the phrase proxy war is nowhere a glowing acclamation. Criticism should be directed at specific policies, as there seem to be rather few sane people who would criticize the US simply for existing. It and most other details should be covered primarily in the articles covering those policies and, in the case of the more controversial ones (those resulting in the world's leading incarceration rate, those leading up to the Iraq war, etc), the criticism is at least hinted at, and in several cases openly discussed in the article. MrZaiustalk 03:22, 28 July 2007 (UTC)
- Criticism of US? What? Criticizing it's geography, it's DNA pool (including of course fauna and flora) or it's weather? Criticism of US politics I can understand, but that goes to Politics of the United States. Besides, NPOV requires circa: the kind of criticism, the group of critics vindicating that criticism, and arguments of defense from US or allied. Said: Rursus ☺ ★ 10:50, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
My Commonwealth Fact
Whilst I am aware that being commonwealths is merely to have a different name, I do feel that the fact that 4 of the "states" are techincally not states but commonwealths (and are merely considered to be states for the sake of simplicity and convenience) should be mentioned at least somewhere in the article, with a link to the Commonwealth (United States) article. I have attempted to put it in to instructions of various users who revert my previous attempts to put it in, but other users seem to disagree and revert it still. Anyway, what do people think about this? ChaosSorcerer91 09:24, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
- It looks like you're a relatively new Wikipedia editor. If you trace the article history and the history of this talk page, you'll notice the article has undergone several major revisions over the past four years and the general consensus has been to shift minor details to other articles as much as possible.
- You have to keep mind that everyone has their own "sacred cow" notions of what should be covered, but we all have to compromise as to the level of detail for such a huge subject. Otherwise this article will turn into a book-length document, which violates the Manual of Style as well as common sense. For example, I have about 20 things I think should be in this article, but for the sake of conciseness, I have whittled my own personal list down to two (the Internet and Law of the United States).
- In my opinion, the commonwealth issue should not be dealt with in this article. It's a minor trivial issue that is best introduced in the U.S. state article (as it already is). --Coolcaesar 10:02, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
- Ok, fair enough. Thanks, I just wished someone would have told me that when my edits were being reversed! Anyway, thanks for explaining. --ChaosSorcerer91 10:06, 29 July 2007 (UTC)
Caucasion vs. white
I noticed that there was a change from "white" to "Caucasian" and back recently, yet neither party has mentioned their rationale on the talk page. Personally, I prefer the term Caucasian. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 22:20, 30 July 2007 (UTC)
- I believe the census bureau only recognizes the term 'white', since it would be weird to be both caucasian and hispanic. --Golbez 00:15, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
- It bothered me a lot as a teenager because I, though "white", was darker than some of my "black" friends, and I suppose I still haven't completely gotten over it. Still, in looking into that Caucasian article more, I see that there are reasons not to use it, as well. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 00:22, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
- The U.S. Census Bureau uses the term White, so we should use that term as well. Remember that races are social constructs and are, therefore, arbitrarily defined. Look in the article White American for the currently "official" definition. Signaturebrendel 01:49, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
- It bothered me a lot as a teenager because I, though "white", was darker than some of my "black" friends, and I suppose I still haven't completely gotten over it. Still, in looking into that Caucasian article more, I see that there are reasons not to use it, as well. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 00:22, 31 July 2007 (UTC)
Well, to users from Russia and Esatern Europe, the term "Caucasian" or "Kavkazian" would be confusing. In russian, "Caucasian"/"Kavkazian" refers to people who are from the Caucasus mountains, and who are anything but white... —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.87.7.43 (talk) 00:12, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
What do you call someone from the USA?
Canada has "Canadian", Mexico has "Mexican" but for some reason there is a generalization to call someone from the USA, "American", is there a specific name for someone from the USA?
- Not really. American is commonly enough to clearly identify someone from the US; thus, this article uses the term American most often. Regards, Signaturebrendel 02:21, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
There is at least one other discussion of this that has some alternatives somewhere in the archives. I really do not want to dig through them right now (almost 11pm), so I'll leave it to someone else, preferably the asker. — Jaxad0127 04:46, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
See American (word) or Alternative words for American or Alternative adjectives for U.S. citizens, kthx. — RVJ 22:33, 8 August 2007 (UTC)
If "Mexican is a legitimate name for people from the United States of Mexico (thats its full title), then "American" seems fine for people from United States of America.
- Actually, its name is technically the United Mexican States. If you think that's pedantic, then imagine if someone called this the United American States. No one does. And so no one should call Mexico the United States of Mexico. --Golbez 18:01, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
well, maybe something like- The US guy, The US computer, etc, because if you say American you are talking about America. It's not wrong, but you're not specifying if it's from US, mexico, bolvia, etc.. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.213.99.230 (talk) 02:09, August 25, 2007 (UTC)
An American from the US is a US American. 82.71.48.158 17:17, 7 September 2007 (UTC)
NPOV: Crime and Punishment
The Crime portion of the Crime and Punishment section concentrates almost exclusively on Homicide and portrays the sole cause as lax gun controls. Property crime is given a single sentence with no numbers and an incorrect statement. The source shows about a 50% greater incidence in burglary in the England. Apwvt 16:41, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
- The negative tone seems warranted, given the incarceration rate that goes with it, but yeah - it would be great to get those replaced with two generic stats: one on violent crime and one on non-violent crime. Would be better summary-style content. MrZaiustalk 18:13, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
- The best way to summarize is by stating that "porperty crime is moderately low, violent crime moderately high compared to other developed countries, with the homoicide rate being the highest in the developed world." The homicide rate in the U.S. does need to be mentioned becuase it inproportionally high. Property and other violent crime rates are fit the mold of other develop countries, it is only our homicide rate (ca. 5X the developed world average) that "sticks out" - and yes, most experts (sociologists, criminologists, anthropologists...) blame easy access to guns. Also please remember that any crime section is going to sound negative - we're discussing crime. Regards, Signaturebrendel 18:52, 1 August 2007 (UTC)
New Article Idea: "American People (United States)"
I wasn't sure where else to post this, but this seemed like the best place. I've noticed several times that when American, as in American person, is used in Wikipedia that it links to this article. Since there are many good editors involved in this project, I thought I would propose an idea for a separate article entitled American People (United States) with the "(United States)" part included to distinguish it from the current American people disambiguation page.
This article would be different from the current Demography of the United States article, which is almost entirely about reporting statistics. I was thinking the proposed article would be more literary in style, using those statistics but commenting on them as well. The United States is one of the most diverse countries on Earth, and the way in which people use the word "American" varies greatly both inside the country and out. To begin with, there is the history of immigration and sense of past identity. Many places in the Northeast and West coast will self-identify by ethnicity, calling themselves "Irish" or "Italian" even if they are U.S. born. In my own travels, these people are usually not regarded as "Irish" or "Italians" in Ireland or Italy, but as Americans, plain and simple. That is only one of the differences. There is also the interesting trend in the census that many white Southerners self-identify as "American," without any mention of their ethnicity. Is this because of a stronger sense of past association with the land? Does it have something to do with the dense population of African-Americans in that area as well? And while we're on the topic of race, that plays an important role in how an "American" views him or herself also, as does religion.
I think it would be a fascinating topic. I would start it myself if I could, but I know for a fact I won't be able to write it myself. What I wrote above is based mostly on observation, but I'm sure that there are studies that we can cite to this extent also. If other people are interested in doing this, I'll do my part to get the ball rolling. SpiderMMB 02:59, 4 August 2007 (UTC)
- Your proposal is good. Except that I think that parts of demographics should belong to there playing a subordinate role in that article. And I also think that most of the culture text in this article belongs to there. Said: Rursus ☺ ★ 10:58, 7 August 2007 (UTC)
Etymology
I removed the last sentence of the etymology page:
"The prevailing use of American as synonymous with U.S. citizen has aroused controversy, particularly in Latin America, where Spanish and Portuguese speakers refer to themselves as americanos and use estadounidense to describe a person from the United States.
I happen to speak Spanish and have done a good bit of work with Central Americans and Mexicanos. They call people from the US Americanos not themselves. While the soursed word 'estadounidense' does appear to exist it is not common usage. The reference cited does nothing to verify the alleged controversy this has aroused. If there is a controversy somewhere about the commonyuse of the term American and Americano to refer to the citizens of the United States I'd be curios to read about it. Query 06:33, 5 August 2007 (UTC)
Good point. I didn't see that sentence. It's true, I only have been learning Spanish for about 1 year, and I've heard my Spanish teacher tell us that Americans are callled americanos. --Iluvmesodou 07:57, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
In fact... In spanish you have to say Estadounidenses. It's commonly said also Yankies or Gringos. You will also hear Americano and Norte Americano but that is an error. It's somehow like hearing saying Chinos to people from Japan. You will hear unendlessley Americano as "American" (US) but officially it's Estadounidense.
I'm from Argentina —Preceding unsigned comment added by 201.213.99.230 (talk) 02:13, August 25, 2007 (UTC)
- It's all a rather useless point. But in any case, you're correct. In Spanish, the word americano is too ambiguous, but it's not in English, because we don't have a word for estadounidense or (for that matter) norteamericano. It was used as a word because it's far too difficult to say "United States of American" or something like that. It's easier to create this word in Spanish. The Evil Spartan 23:06, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
- Not entirely true. The term "United Statian" is technically correct and is (very?) rarely used. The term is there - it's just that nobody knows it.Shapu 15:36, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
leading cash crop marijuana?
thats a bizzare claim. Has great irony, yes, but Im not sure its appropriate for an encyclopedic article. I dont think that illegal supstances are frequently even considered as candidates for cash crops of a country; typically the concept is used only in relation to legal farming. Its simply outside the normal use of the concept of a cash crop. Its particularly problematic by being in the 'economy' section of the article, since it reffers to a part of the black market economy, while common economic indicators naturally focus on the legal sectory of the economy, so its incongruent. The article on Afganistan for instance does not mention poppy as its 'leading cash crop', but in the 'history' section as one of the problems it stuggles with while being rebuild. Only a single article is referenced for this unusual claim, and given that it reports data from a drug reform advocate, in an article clearly focused on the ironic value of this claim, perhaps it would be better to find more official pronouncement of 'leading cash crops' for inclusion of such bizzare a conclusion, as per "exceptional claims require exceptional sources" principle of wikipedia. For these reasons, Id suggest that sentence be removed. Id also suggest the article be moved from "United States" to "United States of America" and be titled by that full title, since thats the correct name of the country, and "united states" is a generic term - meaning simply some (any) states that are united, and has no characteristics of a proper name in any, even shortened, form (except if its considered from a US-centric perspective, but that would also be a problem for an international encyclopedia). --89.172.87.60 13:13, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
- As for the name, no. See the FAQ linked at the top of this page. --Golbez 13:54, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
- Ah, sorry, didnt notice that. Is there a link that states "united states" is the most common name used for the USA in media across the world somewhere in the discussion of this? Ive encountered, but not that frequently the use of this name or its translations in the news here in Croatia, using translation of the abbreviation 'USA' is far more common here. Perhaps in other parts of the world the connection of 'united states' and USA is comparably weak? I do think its far more generic than 'mexico' or even 'united kingdom', which are rather specific and just seem a short form of a long name. In any case, nevermind. better ignore I mentioned this, if its a commonly debated topic, its unlikely Ill bring anything particularly original to it. Apologies for not looking at the FAQ first as instructed. It was just a comment in passing; I hope the objection to the 'leading cash crop' will be accepted--89.172.87.60 15:42, 12 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't see what difference it makes if it's legal or not. It's the most valuable crop produced. It's a huge part of the economy. We're supposed to pretend that that part of the economy doesn't exist? Operation Spooner 05:31, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- If it is indeed the most valuable crop produced, this should not be based simply on an assertion of a drug reform advocate, but on a more official source. My foremost objection is on the source used for including this in wikipedia. But more generally arguing this point, as I said, One would be hard-pressed to find another country that produces wast quantities of some certain drug to have it explained as its 'most valuable cash crop' in its article. And I do think that it makes a difference if its legal or not, since underground economy is not typically measured in many other economic data, and since no other part of the underground economy, either in US or in articles on other countries, is so analysed. Theres surely a lot of cash in many other parts of underground economy, perhaps one could find it justified to say that for instance, dominant industry of some poor country is say smuggling weapons, or trade in sexual slaves, or smuggling people across a border to some more fortunate country etc (just imaginary examples). Yet this is not the info we find in wikipedia articles on economies of countries, nor in official facts about these economies in various reputable sources. To include only this information on underground economy, and only in this article would be grave inconsistency--83.131.153.198 15:41, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I think both points you make are completely valid - especially the part about requiring a more substantial source than a drug reform advocate. It's very hard to believe that it could be both (a) the largest cash crop, and (b) not documented as such by a more neutral source. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:32, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't see any reason why it would have to be a "neutral source." The author of the study as a PhD in public policy and regional economic development and it was published a peer reviewed journal called The Bulletin of Cannabis Reform. [1] Here is the actual text of the study: [2] Operation Spooner 21:52, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- If no neutral source has written about marijuana being the "largest cash crop", then it seems the only logical conclusions remaining are that either (a) it's not true, or (b) there's a conspiracy to cover it up. I don't believe such a conspiracy would be possible. (I'm not trying to create a "false choice" here, so if you see another option, let me know.) I'm no expert at all in the field (hence the reason I'm arguing and not editing wrt this issue), so it's entirely possible that there is a neutral source making exactly this point. If so, such a source would go a long way to alleviating concerns that would naturally arise not just among editors but also among readers. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 22:11, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think there's any such thing as a "neutral source." What would be a neutral source? Operation Spooner 00:34, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- How about the Department of Agriculture? — Jaxad0127 15:34, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- It's certainly plausable. As Jaxad has pointed out above, government data is the best sources. If not the USDA, than another gov dep. will likely have data on the issue, try the DEA perhaps. Signaturebrendel 19:56, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- The USDA or DEA would both be relatively neutral sources. I agree that no source will ever be completely neutral, but what I'm really asking for is a source that does not have such a blatantly obvious vested interest. Again, that vested interest does not necessarily mean the point is wrong, but it does raise suspicions. If the statement is true, I assume you could find similar statements among people who are actively anti-drug - such sources rarely try to downplay the quantity of drugs being used. Although this would not be "neutral", I'm much less likely to be skeptical when I see similar arguments from "both" sides of an issue. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 20:07, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't understand why anyone would consider the government to be a neutral source. I would think it to be heavily biased and/or dishonest by political motivations. Nevertheless, have you looked at the study? It gets its figures from government data. Operation Spooner 20:20, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- If no neutral source has written about marijuana being the "largest cash crop", then it seems the only logical conclusions remaining are that either (a) it's not true, or (b) there's a conspiracy to cover it up. I don't believe such a conspiracy would be possible. (I'm not trying to create a "false choice" here, so if you see another option, let me know.) I'm no expert at all in the field (hence the reason I'm arguing and not editing wrt this issue), so it's entirely possible that there is a neutral source making exactly this point. If so, such a source would go a long way to alleviating concerns that would naturally arise not just among editors but also among readers. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 22:11, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't see any reason why it would have to be a "neutral source." The author of the study as a PhD in public policy and regional economic development and it was published a peer reviewed journal called The Bulletin of Cannabis Reform. [1] Here is the actual text of the study: [2] Operation Spooner 21:52, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I think both points you make are completely valid - especially the part about requiring a more substantial source than a drug reform advocate. It's very hard to believe that it could be both (a) the largest cash crop, and (b) not documented as such by a more neutral source. Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:32, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- If it is indeed the most valuable crop produced, this should not be based simply on an assertion of a drug reform advocate, but on a more official source. My foremost objection is on the source used for including this in wikipedia. But more generally arguing this point, as I said, One would be hard-pressed to find another country that produces wast quantities of some certain drug to have it explained as its 'most valuable cash crop' in its article. And I do think that it makes a difference if its legal or not, since underground economy is not typically measured in many other economic data, and since no other part of the underground economy, either in US or in articles on other countries, is so analysed. Theres surely a lot of cash in many other parts of underground economy, perhaps one could find it justified to say that for instance, dominant industry of some poor country is say smuggling weapons, or trade in sexual slaves, or smuggling people across a border to some more fortunate country etc (just imaginary examples). Yet this is not the info we find in wikipedia articles on economies of countries, nor in official facts about these economies in various reputable sources. To include only this information on underground economy, and only in this article would be grave inconsistency--83.131.153.198 15:41, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't see what difference it makes if it's legal or not. It's the most valuable crop produced. It's a huge part of the economy. We're supposed to pretend that that part of the economy doesn't exist? Operation Spooner 05:31, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- On Wikipedia (and in general) the government is one of the best possible sources. Unlike think tanks, most gov statistical agencies are not like to have any distinct and coherent bias (though certain branches do; e.g. Pentagon) - the goal of the US Census Bureau is to be "fair & balanced." Government statisical bureaus, such as the Census Bureau or Bureau of Labor Statistics do not intentionally support an agenda, but are simply geared towards revealing data. While it is inevitable that author bias finds its way into a document, the government is home to more than 2 million employees from all walks of life with all possible opinions; it is the most diverse and democratic institution we have. The government is home to more layers of quality control, management and editorial review than most other organizations. As a result of its size, diversity and intended neutrality, government serves as one of the best sources. Other top sources would include college textbooks, which undergo extensive review and are based on a wide selection of reputable sources and articles in top-tier publications, e.g. NY Times.
- Considering how controversial the statement in question is government data would be best, as it is the most likely to be neutral. Since you have claimed that the study in question uses government data, I will take a closer look at it later on. Signaturebrendel 23:43, 14 August 2007 (UTC)
- Regarding the study:
- I don't consider the journal The Bulletin of Cannabis Reform to be a reputable peer-reviewed journal any more than I would a journal from the CEI or AEI to be reputable.
- The figure of 10,000 metric tons of domestic marijuana is supported up by page 30 of this government publication.
- The value associated with corn is now drastically out of date, although it was accurate in 2005. The cash value of corn went from $22.2 billion in 2005 to $33.8 billion in 2006 (as opposed to the calculated $35.8 billion reported in this study for marijuana). I'm guessing corn ethanol might be responsible, but that's purely speculative on my part. (These are from the USDA's numbers, which I unfortunately cannot provide a hard link to. However, from this starting point you should be able to find these values easily enough.)
- From the 10,000 mt value cited by the government, the study then goes to 22.3 million pounds somehow gaining in both precision and size (10,000 mt = 22.046 million pounds neglecting precision).
- I'm assuming the price they associate with marijuana per pound ($2,783) is correct, as actually retrieving that data is difficult.
- Then a miracle occurs: "The producer index was calculated at 58.75% of retail value." — I have no idea where they got this from.
- If you assume that value (and the price per pound) are correct, you will find that marijuana currently narrowly beats out corn as a cash crop. It seems doubtful that this will be true in 2007, unless there was something special about 2006 that won't repeat in 2007, but that argument is not really relevant here. (I.e., "Wikipedia is not a crystal ball", so my argument here is irrelevant.)
- It's not relevant whether the source is corrrect or not. That's not the standard for inclusion in Wikipedia. Operation Spooner 18:56, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- If it's not reliable (and as I said from the outset, I don't consider the journal The Bulletin of Cannabis Reform to be a reputable peer-reviewed journal), it had better be correct. Perhaps you're right, however. Whether or not it's correct, this particular source should not be used. If a reliable source has the information, then it meets the standard for inclusion in Wikipedia. Would you accept a "peer-reviewed" journal published by CEI or AEI (for example) as reliable? What if Rush Limbaugh started a "peer-reviewed" journal? My point is that it's not enough to be "peer-reviewed" (that's a mighty low bar) - it also has to be reliable. Another way of looking at my analysis is that I was trying to determine whether this journal which prima facie does not appear reliable, might in fact be reliable. I (seriously) assumed you would welcome my analysis as it was far more favorable than I would have guessed before I actually read the article (judging from the "journal" title). Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 19:07, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- There is no reason that it shouldn't be used. Just because the source has a political position doesn't mean that the source can't be used. If you're so convinced that government is the only standard of neutrality or reliability, note that government cites that very study on a government webstite: http://www.library.ca.gov/crb/sitn/2007/0701.htm Operation Spooner 19:11, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- And yes I'd accept studies from the CEI or AEI. or anyone else. The author of every study is going to have a POV. There are no neutral sources. Operation Spooner 19:17, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- I would not accept studies from CEI, AEI, or Rush Limbaugh as evidence of anything other than their particular viewpoint. (I.e., such studies might be relevant on articles about CEI, AEI, or Rush Limbaugh.) To accept these studies is to violate Wikipedia's stance on reliability. I believe your comment about "no neutral sources" is covered by the FAQ on no such thing as objectivity. That said, the fact that the state of California cites this particular study does increase its perceived reliability in my mind. I still wish we had a study that seemed more neutral. Believe it or not, I don't have any issues with the results of this study, but I do have issues with the perceived reliability and accuracy of Wikipedia. Please have a look at my other "contributions". I think you'll find that I'm not who you might think I am. (Or, at least, who I think you think I am.) Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 19:27, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Ok, I see where you're coming from. I just don't see a Wikipedia policy that would say the source is unreliable. It says in Wikipedia:Verifiability: "Academic and peer-reviewed publications are highly valued and usually the most reliable sources in areas where they are available..." It's an academic peer-reviewed publication. Operation Spooner 19:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- I would not accept studies from CEI, AEI, or Rush Limbaugh as evidence of anything other than their particular viewpoint. (I.e., such studies might be relevant on articles about CEI, AEI, or Rush Limbaugh.) To accept these studies is to violate Wikipedia's stance on reliability. I believe your comment about "no neutral sources" is covered by the FAQ on no such thing as objectivity. That said, the fact that the state of California cites this particular study does increase its perceived reliability in my mind. I still wish we had a study that seemed more neutral. Believe it or not, I don't have any issues with the results of this study, but I do have issues with the perceived reliability and accuracy of Wikipedia. Please have a look at my other "contributions". I think you'll find that I'm not who you might think I am. (Or, at least, who I think you think I am.) Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 19:27, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- If it's not reliable (and as I said from the outset, I don't consider the journal The Bulletin of Cannabis Reform to be a reputable peer-reviewed journal), it had better be correct. Perhaps you're right, however. Whether or not it's correct, this particular source should not be used. If a reliable source has the information, then it meets the standard for inclusion in Wikipedia. Would you accept a "peer-reviewed" journal published by CEI or AEI (for example) as reliable? What if Rush Limbaugh started a "peer-reviewed" journal? My point is that it's not enough to be "peer-reviewed" (that's a mighty low bar) - it also has to be reliable. Another way of looking at my analysis is that I was trying to determine whether this journal which prima facie does not appear reliable, might in fact be reliable. I (seriously) assumed you would welcome my analysis as it was far more favorable than I would have guessed before I actually read the article (judging from the "journal" title). Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 19:07, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Regarding the study:
Absolutely laughable. I thought it was vandalism until I saw it was "sourced". Not only does the sentence in question seem "tacked on" at the end of that paragraph, with no explanation why, It's listed as part of the nation's economy? The source in question mentions a frivolous study--- I beg you if you have one shred of common sense to remove the sentence in question until more sources are found from the USDA. Sneakernets 04:28, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- Marijuana isn't under the under the purview of the USDA. The study is not "frivolous." The sentences is not simply "tacked on." It follows a sentence saying about agriculture. Marijuana happens to be our most valuable crop. The study cites government figures, if you trust the government. Operation Spooner 05:17, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- While Ben Hocking has raised a very good question about how the producer index was set at "58.75% of retail value," the crucial issues seem clear: the source passes the bar of WP:V and the information is significant. The fact may be unusual (I don't know if it is or not), it undoubtedly makes some of us uncomfortable, but the country's largest cash crop is this illegal herb and that does seem like the sort of basic and representative economic datum worthy of inclusion in the article.—DCGeist 05:34, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think it passes the bar of WP:REDFLAG, however. (I had previously linked to that same section in my "reliability" part, but it seems they changed the section name.) I agree that if we had additional, less biased sources, that it would be significant (or notable). Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:36, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
- Just to be clear, Ben, you're saying this falls under the red flag category of "Surprising or apparently important claims that are not widely known"? I'd say it's a borderline call on that. More importantly, we already do have two sources that we agree pass WP:V. The second, ABC News, is obviously a top-of-the-line news organ; it treats the first source we provide as fully reliable. It also includes this official response: "Garrison Courtney, spokesman for the Drug Enforcement Agency, says groups that advocate its taxation sometimes paint too rosy a picture. 'It's still a drug,' Courtney says. 'Just because it's a good cash crop doesn't mean you should legalize and tax it.'" Given that, I think our sourcing does adequately deal with the red flag issue.—DCGeist 02:02, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- I don't think it passes the bar of WP:REDFLAG, however. (I had previously linked to that same section in my "reliability" part, but it seems they changed the section name.) I agree that if we had additional, less biased sources, that it would be significant (or notable). Ben Hocking (talk|contribs) 21:36, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
- While Ben Hocking has raised a very good question about how the producer index was set at "58.75% of retail value," the crucial issues seem clear: the source passes the bar of WP:V and the information is significant. The fact may be unusual (I don't know if it is or not), it undoubtedly makes some of us uncomfortable, but the country's largest cash crop is this illegal herb and that does seem like the sort of basic and representative economic datum worthy of inclusion in the article.—DCGeist 05:34, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
From what I can tell, Marijuana hasn't been included in any of the economic indicators cited within this section. In the interest of consistency, the singular study should be removed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.162.174.146 (talk) 21:25, August 28, 2007 (UTC)
Basic business information
A while back, I suggested that some more basic information on America's largest business sectors/ industries be added. I've located all the information I was referring to in the Census Bureau's Statistical Abstract of the United States 2007. You can check it out online--here's the link for the business section: http://www.census.gov/prod/2006pubs/07statab/business.pdf.
Anyway here are the stats that strike me as most significant--they could be added to the opening part of the Economy section of the article or, perhaps, to the section's infobox. I know there are concerns about the length of the article, so I wanted to raise these items here and see if people agree that some or all belong in this article or only in the Economy of the United States article. Here goes (with the most recent available figures):
Largest business sectors (2003),
by gross business receipts: Wholesale and retail trade ($6,384 billion)
by net income: Finance and insurance ($425 billion)
by employment: Health care and social assistance: (15.47 million people)
Leading manufacturing field (2005), by contribution to GDP: Chemical products ($186 billion)
Leading international trade commodities (2005), by export value: Electrical machinery ($74.29 million) by import value: Vehicles ($195.93 million)
I'd be very interested to hear what people think.DocKino 20:01, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
- It wouldn't hurt to make one (or maybe two) sentences of prose out of the above and insert it, but what seems more important at present is shoring up the split Econ, History, Culture, and Politics articles to let this article consist of stronger, more compact summaries of quality articles. Is the topic covered in Economy of the United States? MrZaiustalk 21:45, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
- My initial thought is that, yes, this info is worthy and basic enough to be in this main article--except I'm not sure how informative the dollar figures are in this context. I'd save those for the full Economy article. But yes, biggest business sectors, biggest "industry," and biggest trade items seems reasonable. As one or two people have noted, we already do have biggest cash crop.—DCGeist 01:15, 25 August 2007 (UTC)
"Defeated Britain?
Before I say anything, it should be noted that I'm American (from Massachusetts). Even in what people consider the "yankee" states of New England, it's generally taught that the colonies pretty much lucked out. If it had been just a simple deal of Britain vs. Colonies with no outside complications, the colonies wouldn't have stood a chance. So do we really want to use the word "defeated" to describe the outcome of the American Revolutionary War? 75.69.110.227 21:29, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree with your point on how we won the was (without Spain, Netherlands, and France we might not have) but do you have a better term to use? New England Review Me!/Go Red Sox! 21:39, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
- While your case is not unreasonable, I'd say this in response: The British were inarguably defeated at Yorktown. It is generally recognized that this defeat led to Britain's withdrawal from combat with the colonials and their eventual ceding of their claims to what is now U.S. territory.—DCGeist 21:42, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
- The word defeated just means Britain lost. True, Britain wouldn't have been defeated w/o French, etc... support of the colonies. Discussing why and how Britain was defeated, however, goes beyond simply stating whether or not Britain was defeated. Signaturebrendel 22:36, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
Article Layout
I recently improved the layout and picture selection of the article only to find it being reverted for reasons of "restore consensus image selection and layout". Firstly is there really a consensus on picture selection and article layout? And if so this "consensus" is between who exactly? I find it very hard to believe there would be an exact consensus between all those who have ever edited this article on picture selection and article layout. Besides my improvements were only minor and anyone with any commonsense would realize these improvements improve the article as a whole and would have no need to undo them. I hope other editors can respect the improvements I have made and see them for what they are. Signsolid 10:03, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- They were not improvements, I'm afraid. They reduced the quality of the article. (And if the changes were only "minor," as you say, you shouldn't feel particularly protective of them, right?) Let's take them in turn:
- (1) The picture of the Model T assembly line substituting for the image of immigrants arriving at Ellis Island. This is the closest call. The innovation of the assembly line was undoubtedly of great importance, but the wave of immigration illustrated by the previous image had an even broader impact. I'd be interested to hear your argument to the contrary.
- (2) The picture of the Empire State Building substituting for the picture of the Dust Bowl. An inferior substitution for several reasons. The image is present-day, not historical like the Dust Bowl image (this is the History section, after all). It is, obviously, less illustrative of what it purports to illustrate--the Dust Bowl image actually shows the physical nature of the Dust Bowl; the glory shot of the ESB only gives "testimony" to something else. And the weight of the relevant section (and of historiography in general) properly leans toward the Depression and its elements and not the post-WWI boom.
- (3) Added B-2 Stealth bomber photo. Now excessive number of images in section. We have an image of U.S. military planes above (in History). We have an illustration of superpowerful and expensive U.S. military hardware directly above: the Ronald Reagan aircraft carrier.
- (4) The added images of Wall Street and the John Hancock Center are not terribly informative and don't really fit in with the structure and content of the Economy section. They are also redundant of each other. There is a point that the first three subsections of the Economy infobox do belong in the Income subsection, but the final two definitely belong in the lede of the Economy section. The Wall Street image might conceivably fit in there as well, if the stock market was discussed. You might suggest how it could be here on the Talk page.
- (5) Added space shuttle photo. Exceesive in section; conceptually redundant.
- Finally, regarding your comment about your "hard work" in the edit summary. That's an understandable sentiment, but please keep in mind that many people put in very hard work over an extended period to produce the article you saw and now see again before you.—DCGeist 15:15, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- Putting in my two bits as a third party to this dispute: I have reviewed Signsolid's version and compared it against the current version. I agree that Signsolid's version is inferior to the status quo and I concur with DCGeist's revert of Signsolid's edits. --Coolcaesar 18:46, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- IMHO, the Model-T picture should stay since the section its in is called "Civil War and industrialization". I also like the B2 picture with the layout SignSolid chose (3 pics on the right). I wouldn't mind having the Wall Street picture in the economy section either, since there are none right now, and I believe it is the only section without a picture. With the Aldrin picture there already, we don't need the space shuttle one (and it gets bumped down to the wrong section), and the dust bowl picture should stay. And on another note, the Pro Bowl pic under sports should be replaced (no one actually watches the pro bowl). New England Review Me!/Go Red Sox! 19:18, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- In turn:
- (1) In addition to the point I made above, Ford's assembly line innovation is not discussed in the History subsection where SignSolid wanted to substitute it for the immigration image. It is discussed in Science, technology, and transportation. Placing that image in the History subsec is thus quite awkward form.
- (2) I suspect most involved editors will agree that for most appropriate size, emphasis, and style, Foreign affairs and military should take two images and that they should alternate sides. The B-2 picture is fine, but (a) given our picture of Air Force jets in History, the aircraft carrier picture gives us greater variety and (b) to date, aircraft carriers have been far more central to the prosecution of U.S. military force than has the B-2.
- (3) No problem with including Wall St. picture, provided we (a) split the Economy infobox as I described above and (b) include a sentence on the stock market in the relevant text.
- (4) Agreed on Pro Bowl picture. I've always been charmed that someone thought of this to represent U.S. sports, but we probably should replace it with a free image of (a) the World Series, (b) the Super Bowl, or (c) America's most famous and successful sports team, the g@*#&!n f%&?#@g Yankees.—DCGeist 20:21, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- Okay I understand your point about the B2. I also find it weird that "Civil war and industrialization" doesn't mention industrialization at all, and perhaps that should be renamed to "Civil War and Expansion", but the Model T shouldn't be there as currently written. The Model T picture could be added to the Science/Tech/Transport section, but that might clutter the section. If there is consensus to do so, I think we can easily fit a brief description of the Stock Market into the Econ section, and split the infobox appropriately. As for the sports pic, I'd go with something from the Super Bowl (preferably a recent one) since that is the most-watched sporting event in the US. New England Review Me!/Go Red Sox! 20:44, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
Well I did try to improve this article but it's become clear that a few will resist any change to the article including any improvements that could be made. I'm not sure whether this resisting of changes and improvements is down to certain editors who feel their say over this article is more important than all others and so are exercising a dominance over the article or whether it's just plain arrogance seeking an argument with others for the sake of it or perhaps a general anti-US sentiment which presents itself in the form of trying to stifle the article.
Either way the fact that as soon as the changes and improvements were made they were instantly swept away without any consideration as to whether the changes or some of the changes actually improved the article only goes to demonstrate how this article maybe be being stifled for any one of these reasons.
It's a shame that improving this article has now become as difficult as it is and it's the article which really loses out from a lack of improvements. There also seems to be a slight anti-US slant on this article which is a shame in itself and is a disgrace really when considering most of the editors of this article are themselves American. Signsolid 21:13, 29 August 2007 (UTC)
- Well, if you engaged and refuted other editors' arguments on the merits before resorting to clumsy ad hominem attacks, you might actually get somewhere. None of your three paragraphs above responds directly to any of the critiques raised by myself, DCGeist, or New England. Your use of irrelevant tangents in turn supports the reasonable inference that you did so because you have no legitimate direct response or refutation to offer. And in turn, that inference supports the conclusion that your edits were just plain bad to begin with. So you need to learn to engage arguments on the merits if you're going to get anything done on Wikipedia. --Coolcaesar 03:29, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
Rankings
What do you all think of adding an international rankings section/table such as the one in the Canada article? Please discuss this possibility. I know that there are different ranking references throughout the article, but adding a table would provide a quick overview of where the US stands in comparison. Here is what the Canada table looks like:
Organization | Survey | Ranking |
---|---|---|
United Nations Development Programme | Human Development Index | 6 out of 177 |
A.T. Kearney/Foreign Policy Magazine | Globalization Index 2005 | 6 out of 111 |
IMD International | World Competitiveness Yearbook 2007 | 10 out of 60 |
The Economist | The World in 2005 - Worldwide quality-of-life index, 2005 | 14 out of 111 |
Yale University/Columbia University | Environmental Sustainability Index, 2005 (pdf) | 6 out of 146 |
Reporters Without Borders World-wide | Press Freedom Index 2006 | 16 out of 168 |
Transparency International | Corruption Perceptions Index 2005 | 14 out of 159 |
Heritage Foundation/The Wall Street Journal | Index of Economic Freedom, 2007 | 10 out of 161 |
The Economist | Global Peace Index | 8 out of 121 |
Fund for Peace/ForeignPolicy.com | Failed States Index, 2007 | 168 out of 177[1] |
Notes
- ^ larger number indicates sustainability
Thanks for considering!!! Modelun88
- I'm of mixed mind on this at the moment. One thing I'd note: We've long included the World Bank's Ease of Doing Business rating (not listed above), as well as the UNDP's HDI ranking in the lede infobox. I recently added the Reporters w/o Borders' Press Freedom ranking as well as UNICEF's Child Well-Being in Rich Countries (not listed above). If we have a rankings section/table, would we then eliminate all such references in the main text to avoid duplication? Or is it more like our lede infobox, which contains data that is repeated below? (like, for instance, the HDI, probably the most widely recognized such ranking).—DCGeist 04:39, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- I wouldn't mind repeating rankings already stated. The purpose for a rankings table would be to summarize. Is a rankings table used in other major countries? we should look if they include one, and if not then maybe we shouldn't. I'll check on that in the next couple of days and see what's up with other countries.
Edit warring over 'lead'
How much longer is this war gonna last? Are we gonna follow the guidelines at Wikipedia: Lead, or not? Will someone block the disruptor, before the article gets 'protected'. GoodDay 21:57, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
The article won't be protected before the user is blocked.He's been reported for his 10 reverts in 24 hrs at WP:AN3. We just have to wait 'till an admin looks at the case, which, I think, should be pretty open and shut. --G2bambino 22:05, 11 September 2007 (UTC)
Apologies ... I got a little carried away. Abtract 16:25, 13 September 2007 (UTC)
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