Talk:Entomotoxicology

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This is a fascinating subject! The body of the article as it stands right now, however, is in three large chunks. For readability, you might want to break them up into smaller subsections. Good luck on the assignment! – Clockwork Soul 02:16, 26 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I was really intrigued by the topic of the article. It has been well-written. However, I feel that it could use some breaking down into smaller more compact sections. For instace, under the section about famous cases involving entomotoxicology, you could include subheadings or titles for every case. It would make it more organized. garza_j_e (talk) —Preceding comment was added at 18:15, 1 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This subject is intriguing. You have done a really good job. I just wanted to recommend that you add some external links at the end for readers to find out more information on your topic. --Amandamartinez06 (talk) 07:17, 8 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The material is interesting, and obviously, you guys have done your research. Just a couple of suggestions. Under 'Cases employing entomotoxicology,' you open with 'Beyer and partners' - with no previous mention of Beyer, I have no idea who he/she is. Perhaps give more background information about Beyer - or simply a first name. Also, some pictures would be a nice touch! Good luck! --Gdespejo (talk) 04:01, 9 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Good job on your page; it might be a little easier for other readers to understand the subject however, if less complicated words were used. Also, as the above comment stated, some pictures would be nice- maybe comparing the sizes of instars after they have fed on tissues contaminated with various drugs.. just an idea. Csb14 (talk) 15:06, 9 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]