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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Jk54 (talk | contribs) at 19:56, 5 July 2008 (Question). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Thanks

Thanks for the barnstar! J.delanoygabsadds 19:48, 17 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Same here thanks for the barnstar. BTW, it made my day. Really appreciate it. Cheers, LAX 01:50, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you

Thanks for the award, much appreciated. Simply south (talk) 16:46, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Herbal Detox

I'm new to Wiki, and I understand if my writing style wasn't up to par. I do however believe that defining Herbal detoxification would be of some value. Currently there is you page that vaguely explains detoxing, and there is a page for Diet detoxing. However there is no page for the most common form, Herbal detoxing. Mind you that the Diet detoxing page makes no real reference to Herbal detoxing, and the UK study debunking Diet detoxing has no bearing on Herbal detoxing, because that one informal study made no mention to the use of herbal supplements.

I hope to do better in the future, with creating, and editing. Could you please better explain what the page was lacking?


Fashionpolicex (talk) 20:19, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

First off, I would like you to read this, and reread this.
What I was worried about most was not only was it unneutral, but it also read like an persuasive essay. This isn't approriate for Wikipedia. For the most part, Wikipedia is not a respository for essays. In an ideal situation in a perfect world, when you create an Wikipedia article, you need to pretend you are submitting something to Brittanica. You probably won't end up writing something of the quality of something that you would read in Brittanica, sure, but you wouldn't write something in an essay-like manner, either.
Maybe you can add a section to the detox page talking about herbal detox, and have it talk about the pros and cons of it? Add studies that both support and debunk it? Then maybe create a whole article about it. Remember, you can always be bold, but sometimes in life you just need to ease in. --Kannie | talk 22:08, 19 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kawaii Noir

I stated my reasons that the article shouldn't be deleted on its talkpage: Talk:Kawaii_Noir I am also new at creating articles, so any help is appreciated. --Grrrlriot (talk) 03:43, 21 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Charles W. Harkness

What's your specific argument against Harkness so I might dissect it? Looking forward to a speedy and researched response,SLY111 (talk) 16:25, 28 January 2008 (UTC)SLY111.[reply]

Temple Hayes

Please help. I have edited this page and verified facts (specifically verified the baseball fact with Carlton Benton at ASA - The National Governing Body of Softball.) I changed the tone of first paragraph and deleted a sentence per the notes on the page and the email you left me. I have tried to adhere closely to AP style. Is there anything else I need to verify and/or is questionable to you. Please respond. Jane Kennedy (talk) 16:04, 29 January 2008 (UTC)Jane Kennedy[reply]

Hello! I have no idea what's going on! I've never edited Wikipedia in my life, and don't have an account or anything. Yet I've been accused of multiple vandalisms. I'm on my school's network. Is it possible that my computer selected an IP address that someone else used to vandalize the pages? 216.79.147.192 (talk) 23:47, 29 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Hi The Quilliam Foundation edits have excluded weasel words - it's unclear why you have removed them. I have reverted as the edit appears fine and improves the article by stripping it of weasel words (eg critics say...). Let me know if not, and for my own benefit, why not. Thanks in advance.