Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Joseph Maxwell
I am nominating this article to be reviewed for A-Class as I believe it meets the criteria. I have made substantial improvements to the article over the past few weeks and it has been recently passed as a GA. I am willing to made further edits for improvement. Any and all comments and suggestions welcome. Thanks, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 15:32, 4 October 2008 (UTC)
Support with comments,
- The link to the Spring Offensive can be considered an Easter Egg (this has actually come up for me before), and so I would suggest having the text of the link read: Throughout the spring of 1918, the 18th Battalion was involved in operations to repel the German spring offensive. (Or something similar, which you believe fits better.)
- That's how I was originally going to write it, however the repitition of "spring" didn't sound right. I'll leave it the way it is at the moment and see what others think. Thanks mate, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 03:02, 5 October 2008 (UTC)
Otherwise, I can't really comment. The lead can probably use an expansion, if it's possible, but perhaps others would disagree with me. It looks good, so I am happy to support. Good luck! JonCatalán(Talk) 02:55, 5 October 2008 (UTC)