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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Roke (talk | contribs) at 08:37, 18 November 2005 ([[Indigenous Australians]]). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

While Adam and other have done a great job rewriting and reorganizing this article, it has no references (a requirement for an FA), and there are numerous summary sections with no content- like culture and Tasmanian aborigines. The lead is also too short and should be expanded to 2 - 3 paragraphs that summarise the article. I think it'd be a good idead to do away with the promient people section to and where possible work those names into the text. --nixie 05:21, 18 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
Could some of the existing links be turned into references? I've added to the summary sections that had previously no content, it looks a little better now Astrokey44 08:37, 18 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]
I'm impressed by this article.-gadfium 08:03, 18 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]