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Reviewer: liquidluck✽talk 23:01, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good overall, mostly minor grammar concerns. Feel free to argue with me over my suggestions:

"...a dynamic passively shown in American animated programming during the series' broadcast run." I'm not sure what this sentence is trying to say.
- It was barely used in cartoons in America when the series was around. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  - New Where is it referenced in the body? liquidluck✽talk 18:05, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - The whole first paragraph in "Reception." The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 22:37, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      - New I'm not sure why I missed that! Just add the years the program ran, and I'll wrap up here. liquidluck✽talk 22:46, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
        Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 00:15, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Change "overwhelmingly popular" to "positive" and delete "incredible" and "highly" per WP:WEASEL. Change Conversely to However,
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Rewrite all caps reference titles in standard casing.
- Assuming you mean ref 1, Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"and parents to" -> "and parents of"
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"respected parents" -> "respective parents"
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Boris and Minka have orchestrated at their humble abode" -> hosted by Boris and Minka
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"is the story" -> in the story
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"A Rugrats Chanukah," originally aired" -> "which originally aired"
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"in the Rugrats franchise" -> "in other aspects of the Rugrats franchise"
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"as the script did not portray her in a way that she could work with" What does this mean? Stereotypically?
- The script gave very non-Jewish things for Chartoff to say which didn't exactly portray Minka's personality in a workable way. In her words, "The creators might have been Jews, but the writers clearly weren't." The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

New. Try replacing it with a quote- any quote. liquidluck✽talk 18:57, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Done. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 22:37, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

...when he was penning the teleplay" Did he convert because of the script, or shortly before?
- Shortly before. The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Grandparents to anti-Semitic" -> "the characterizations of Boris and Minka were anti-Semeitic"
- Done The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Result

~~Putting the article on hold until April 12, 2010.~~ Nice work! liquidluck✽talk 23:02, 7 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! :D The Flash ^{I am Jack's complete lack of surprise} 17:56, 8 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Pass. liquidluck✽talk 03:22, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]