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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Software-surprise/Screenshot_marketing

- This is a new article I'd like to publish. Please provide feedback including whether it is ready to be published as is. Thanks.

P.S. I just added another External link resource.

~~Software-surprise (talk) 02:44, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Software-surprise. I took a look at your article about Screenshot Marketing. While the subject could be notable, the article as it stands now does not prove Notability one reason being that there are no references for any asserted facts. You'll also need to study Citing sources for ideas on how to improve the inline-citation aspect of this article.

Hope that helps! Shearonink (talk) 03:37, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Software-surprise/Screenshot_marketing

Please review for publication. I edited it and added a citation (thanks Shearonink).

Thanks.

~~Software-surprise (talk) 05:00, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NS0000032/Lawrence_Susskind

I would welcome any constructive feedback on this piece I've drafted. Thanks for your time.

~~NS0000032 (talk) 06:25, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brian_Whittingham

Thank you Pianotech for your advice, however when I try to add citations the article repeats the number ref [1] example taht is already listed against another, and then it just links to the Wikipedia page of the article rather than the website with reliable sources.

I have tried several times, am I missing something out? What I did- Beside the first text that I want reference (link) Look under Works- Bunnets and Bowlers

I added ^[1] and when I saved change
it repeats ref [1] which just links to the article page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brian_Whittingham

This is my first article for Wikipedia and I am keen to get a grip on how to produce good articles.

~~ScotlandLiteraryLady (talk) 09:28, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/London_2012_Games_Makers

Discription of the Games Makers, the volunteers for the London 2012 Olympics. This article contain info about previous Olympic Volunteers, and what makes Games Makers different. The Article links to various Olympic related sites. All the information is credible, and in line with the London Organising Commitee of the Olypmic Games discriptions of the role.

~~GamesMaker (talk) 10:09, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Betta_enisae

I have Already completed the review request and move the article from used space to main space but still getting not review message

~~regards deepak (talk) 10:57, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chris_Sanders_(musician)

I have now "published" this from draft (I asked for review 3 days ago). So, if it needs comments, please do so)

~~VancoD (talk) 12:37, 23 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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