Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 August 11
Thanks for any feedback on this entry - my first.
The format needs adjusting. THe photo needs to be on the right side, with text down the left, for example. You also need to have some simple biographical data (born, died, where from, etc.) under the photo that matches the format of similar articles elsewhere.
- Robertsullivan1973 (talk) 06:36, 11 August 2010 (UTC)RobertSullivan1973
This is a new article by a first-time creator. Please review so the "new article" template at the top of the article can be removed. Thanks!
This looks pretty good. Do you have a headshot of the man you can put on the right side? Under the headshop, you need to stick in some basic biographical data (born, educatated, married, etc.) to make it match most of the other bios.
- Robertsullivan1973 (talk) 06:40, 11 August 2010 (UTC)RobertSullivan1973
Thanks for looking. I am working out the licensing issues with the head shot, and at that time I will create a sidebar with all of the appropriate biographical data. Shanemham (talk) 07:25, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Hello. I am Robert Sullivan, an American Peace Corps volunteer working with the Bulgarka Nature Park office. This is my first article for wikipedia and I welcome (and need) useful comments about it. I expect to revise and expand the article in the future. I have references but I need to master the references format. Thank you.
Would somebody review this draft please as I had another one deleted because it sounded as an advert. Thank You!
- The article doesn't meet the notability criteria of WP:CORP. -Reconsider! 12:18, 11 August 2010 (UTC)
Hi,
this is my first english entry to Widipedia and wish to have your feedbacks about it, so that I can improve next.
This is my first time adding a person to Wikipedia, and the original few drafts were considered too promotional. User Fastily advised me to get feedback on this latest draft to see how it might be ready for Wikipedia inclusion. On the sources, some articles are over 20 years old and not available from the original publishers online, so we have posted scanned copies of reprints. Please advise any changes needed or if we need any additional documentation. Thank you!
Please provide feedback. Thanks.