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I am not used to all of what wikipedia does, but I have noticed that this article is sort of below standards. It looks like it started out as a college paper, and has redundancy. I would not know how to go about fixing this, but I thought I could at least bring this up for someone who knows. --68.61.250.127 (talk) 23:55, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
