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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by CJ3370 (talk | contribs) at 14:05, 9 April 2011 (User:MrGVaughan/Grant Humes: comments ~~~~). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

I've written a full article on the Family Compact where there was a stub. Because this is an important topic in Canadian history, I'd really like some feedback. I've tried to incorporate the original stub text into the article, but I've had to change the 'written voice' to make it all sound the same. Some thoughts on that would be good. thanks in advance


CJ_WeißSchäfer (talk) 11:29, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'm a new user and would like to take this page live, I've had it reviewed and I think its ready to go. Would someone please have a second look and move it so that it is published live please. ty

MrGVaughan (talk) 12:35, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]


Hi there, I'm not an editor, so I cannot help you go live, but I do have a couple thoughts. Pretty good article. You might want to add an infobox, such as Template:Election box candidate with party link and change the UK stuff to Canadian; or use another infobox of your choice. A picture is always good if you have one that the candidate will release copyright to; then upload to the Commons so you can add it to the infobox.

CJ_WeißSchäfer (talk) 14:05, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]