Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 April 9
I've written a full article on the Family Compact where there was a stub. Because this is an important topic in Canadian history, I'd really like some feedback. I've tried to incorporate the original stub text into the article, but I've had to change the 'written voice' to make it all sound the same. Some thoughts on that would be good. thanks in advance
CJ_WeißSchäfer (talk) 11:29, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
I'm a new user and would like to take this page live, I've had it reviewed and I think its ready to go. Would someone please have a second look and move it so that it is published live please. ty
MrGVaughan (talk) 12:35, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
Hi there, I'm not an editor, so I cannot help you go live, but I do have a couple thoughts. Pretty good article. You might want to add an infobox, such as Template:Election box candidate with party link and change the UK stuff to Canadian; or use another infobox of your choice. A picture is always good if you have one that the candidate will release copyright to; then upload to the Commons so you can add it to the infobox.
CJ_WeißSchäfer (talk) 14:05, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
Summary Telepreneurship offers measures in terms of roles for the practical application and tradeoffs between strategizing and corporate entrepreneurship within the telecommunication sector. The theory display five major entrepreneurial orientation roles in which each role is defined and explained to measure the interaction between the roles that result in Telepreneurship.By using the Telepreneurship role enactment qualities, organizations could better identify the corporate entrepreneurship activities in the telecommunication industry. This is describe as “Strategic bliss.”
Telepreneurship exist out of 5 roles namely: Environment, Champion, Sponsor, Pioneer and the Marketer
Pierre erasmussa (talk) 14:40, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
First article on Wikipedia. Any comments or suggested improvements would be welcome.
Dje1945 (talk) 16:15, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
First article on Wikipedia. Any comments or suggested improvements would be welcome.
Dje1945 (talk) 16:18, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
As NASA's shuttle program comes to an end LSP (Launch Services Program) will become more important. Could you please review my article and make it a offically part of Wikipedia.
Thank you!
Tazandsim (talk) 16:41, 9 April 2011 (UTC)