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Jorg Janke

Resolved
 – Were reviewed multiple times... mabdul 12:28, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi ChzzBot IV

I have updated the article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Jorg_Janke, please review and reply me

Thanks, Winningindians — Preceding unsigned comment added by Winningindians (talk • contribs) 02:05, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Patrick E. McGovern

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 – Article already accepted. mabdul 12:32, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Dear ChzzBot IV,

I received your message that I need inline references in the "Patrick E. McGovern" article. But the original submission included numerous inline refs., which now have been deleted. How do I get back to the original version?

Best, William Pepper — Preceding unsigned comment added by Drwilliampepper (talk • contribs) 14:45, 27 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Nail

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Nail (edit | project page | history | links | watch | logs)

Hi, this is Dodobird1982. You told me I need references but what if you learn something through a personal experience. In this case, I watched Dragon Ball Z, and that is how I know about the character Nail. Please respond as soon as you can! Thanks! Dodobird1982 (talk) 20:36, 20 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Dodobird1982,
this is not how Wikipedia works. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia and thus your submission falls likely in the category which is not covered by Wikipedia. Please read WP:NOT and consider searching at Wikia for the Dragon Ball wiki. Regards, mabdul 12:38, 24 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A kitten for you!

Thank you very much chzzbot for the review of my article and your guidance to improve it.

Kunalkulpati (talk) 22:04, 29 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

About <The Flavor of corn> article

Hello,

Here I wanna discuss some questions about article <The Flavor of corn>. Here it's link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/The_Flavor_of_Corn

So, in this article (which was denied by you as unverified)I added all improtant information, including supported by reliable sources. 3 times I was tried to make this article affirmed, but even after I added reliable and verifed sources, it's still was denied to be article. Is this homophoby or what?? And if my sources are not verifed, which you can call verifed sourses then??

Please respond me here, thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 46.70.15.114 (talk) 17:01, 4 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The High Quality Transport Refrigeration Parts

Hi, Recently i had purchased transport refrigeration parts from a site www.thermoenginesupply.com.The thermo king parts are of high quality and at affordable price. THERMO ENGINE SUPPLY is a leader in quality replacement parts for Thermo King transport refrigeration units. High-quality replacement parts for Thermo King transport refrigeration units and equipment.

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we can purchase thermo king compressors,thermo king alternators,thermo king pumps and thermo king belts also. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Thermoenginesupply (talk • contribs) 13:28, 11 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Just in case you ever restart this

User:ChzzBot IV/AFC unreferenced is wrong. You need to completely re-code this if you ever try to run it again. The use of <ref> tags is absolutely not required, and you should not be telling users that their AFC submissions don't include WP:Inline citations merely because they don't use ref tags. WhatamIdoing (talk) 15:54, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Reference Links have been updated in the Article. And Links are made with proper attention. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ravinder3790 (talk • contribs) 10:47, 2 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Mail

Dear Chzz, I just resubmitted my request for an update to the "Muhammad Ali" section again as you suggested. I hope the change can be made. I believe I've now done everything you've asked. Thank you very much for your assistance. Please do let me know if there is anything else that would need to be done.

Best, Creed81

Hi. Sorry I have not responded; I've not been actively editing. If you need advice, I suggest you try the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, Chzz. Please check your email; you've got mail!
It may take a few minutes from the time the email is sent for it to show up in your inbox. You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{You've got mail}} or {{ygm}} template.

Update: new user warning test results available

Hi WP:UWTEST member, we wanted to share a quick update on the status of the project. Here's the skinny:

  1. We're happy to say we have a new round of testing results available! Since there are tests on several Wikipedias, we're collecting all results at the project page on Meta. We've also now got some help from Wikimedia Foundation data analyst Ryan Faulkner, and should have more test results in the coming weeks.
  2. Last but not least, check out the four tests currently running at the documentation page.

Thanks for your interest, and don't hesitate to drop by the talk page if you have a suggestion or question. Maryana (WMF) (talk) 19:22, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]


thanks Yizoubi (talk) 14:00, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

amir of bheemunipatnam family tree

i have document by visakha museum which is run by indian government as a reference. 

my user name is altaf shaik. you can communicate with me in that user name  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Altaf shaik (talk • contribs) 12:41, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Hi. Sorry I have not responded; I've not been actively editing. If you need advice, I suggest you try the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Judgement day: The true story of Ellie Nesler

I was told my submission had no inline references, what does this mean and how do I fix it. Also how do I make my submission better so that it will be accepted?4.225.90.119 (talk) 07:40, 24 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Please see WP:REFB for help with that. If you need advice, I suggest you try the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Adapting your sandbox-cleaning bot for Commons?

Hi, per this discussion, would it be feasible for you to set up your bot to clean the Commons sandbox? Thanks! It Is Me Here t / c 17:55, 24 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I've responded over there. Cheers,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article for creation

Thanks for the response last month on the two pages I created about TV writer/producers. The credits come from IMDB. What else do I need to do for verifiability? I've seen other TV writer/producer pages and want to make mine like theirs. Thank you. Julie Hurwitz (talk) 23:05, 25 January 2012 (UTC)Julie[reply]

Hi. Sorry I have not responded; I've not been actively editing. If you need advice, I suggest you try the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Jonathan Clour

The article about Jonathan Clour now contains sources and is ready for review/acceptance.3816buster (talk) 00:45, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. Sorry I have not responded; I've not been actively editing. If you need advice, I suggest you try the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  14:05, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Fæ

A request for comments has been opened on administrator User:Fæ. You are being notified due to your prior participation in ANI, RfA, or RfC discussions regarding this user. Thank you, MadmanBot (talk) 19:45, 28 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

inserting references

When I try to insert a reference using the dropdown box, the <ref...> is placed at the top of the page instead of at the cursor location. Can you help me with this? Serena SerenaLaVine (talk) 00:00, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I suggest you ask on the help desk. Please tell them which browser you are using (internet explorer, firefox, safari) and if the problem is the same whether logged in or logged out. Best of luck.  Chzz  ►  12:51, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Something tasty for you!

Something tasty for you!
"Ear of sow and gut of boar,

All the stuff which fell on t'floor,
Snout of gilt, and one black rat
Which drowned on falling in the vat,
Butcher's thumb untimely chop'd
And down into the mincer drop'd,
Piglet's hide and youngling's pizzle
In the sausage spit and sizzle.

Pizzle, fizzle, spit and sizzle
Barbie, if it doesn't drizzle!"

Ketchup, anyone?

[exit stage left, cackling] Pesky (talk …stalk!) 10:23, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I made these on MF's page a little while ago, and thought you'd like to share in the enchantment, given your penchant for the product ;P Pesky (talk …stalk!) 10:25, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds great; it's good to use everything but the squeak. But yes...like most things on Wikipedia, they'd definitely need more sourcessauces. Thanks!  Chzz  ►  12:22, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Photos

Hi,

Thanks for your helpful reference recommendations and links to useful pages [i.e. Cheatsheet].

Next, we would like to add photos, but want to wait, so as not to lose our place in line for the approval process.

How many photos would you recommend? Which link best describes how to add photos?

Best regards, ccjjproCcjjpro (talk) 14:48, 30 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'm worried by your saying "we" - and by your user name, because company / group names are not permitted. As described there, you should almost certainly stop using the name "Ccjjpro" and get a new user name.
  • You would not "lose your place" - you can freely edit the draft at any time; it will not affect the time it takes for review. And if you change your username, you can still edit it. It's at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Craig Curtis.
  • There is no specific limit on number of pictures, but of course they should not be excessive, and should add real value to encyclopaedic understanding. Any number of pictures could be stored on Commons, and linked to from the article.
  • The important thing about pictures is, they should be appropriately licenced for anyone to use them.
  • Probably the best link explaining it is Wikipedia:Uploading images
  • Please also read our business FAQ

-As I am not currently very active, if you have further questions, I suggest you ask on the help desk. Best of luck,  Chzz  ►  12:30, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome back

Good to see your sig at the help desk!! I understand about "taking a break," but it's good to know you're still checking in occasionally. 

           69.171.178.16 (talk) 02:28, 31 January 2012 (UTC), the user formerly known as the Ragityman[reply]
will check Trash files: should have thought of that myself. I'm afraid, though, that I changed my designated mailbox, but never responded to the "verify" email. If true, though, wouldn't the old email address still be in place? I'll check, and get back to you.
R69.171.187.86 (talk) 21:27, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The Signpost: 30 January 2012

SerenaLaVine--Article on Amateur Classical Musicians Association

The proposed articla on the Amateur Classical Musicians Association has been updated with proper references. Please see the updated article in User:SerenaLaVine/sandbox.

Thank you. Serena SerenaLaVine (talk) 16:16, 31 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. It wasn't submitted it for review, so I've done so [1].
I'm not very active on Wikipedia at the moment, so if you have questions, please use the help desk. Best,  Chzz  ►  12:36, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Heads up

Watch out for these sorts of things when you're moving articles. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 20:33, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Mmm, I missed the name of that one. Just trying to rush a bit too much, trying to get through some. Ta.  Chzz  ►  20:36, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Also, if you could at least add project classes, that would be swell. Kevin Rutherford (talk) 21:59, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Seichim

Hi I just saw that my article was declined. Is there anything specific that is not in a neutral tone that I can fix.

I have done a few revisions and even had some help with it in re-writting it to take out much of the non neutral tone words.

If you give me some examples or part that are a problem it will be a big help.

Thanks PatrickSeichim (talk) 20:43, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Much of the tone makes the article appear to be "original research" - ie opinion, not facts-with-references.
For example, The main difference between Sekhem and other energies is that Sekhem has a very strong connection to many of the Gods and Goddesses of Egypt. - according to who? It is also used as a suffix to many names of people in a position of power in ancient Egypt. - according to who? (where can this be verified?)
Because the original Seichim was taught without a manual, the classes all followed the oral tradition of teaching. - reference? Consequently, each teacher taught in their own way. - reference?
In "origins", the wording makes it sound as though it is the opinion of Wikipedia. For example, He was able to learn more about the vibrating energy he felt in his hands and began to share this energy with others. - he might indeed think or believe that, but I doubt very much that it is actual hard-fact.
I hope that gives some ideas. See also WP:TONE, and maybe look at some featured articles or good articles on similar topics. Best,  Chzz  ►  20:52, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

CHEN

Hello Chzz, I am the author of the article entitled "Council for Higher Education in Newark". I am a novice at this so bear with me. I understand my article has been accepted, which is great, but the article is still identified as having a "close paraphrasing" issue. Will paraphrasing box disappear at some point or does it mean that I need to do more re-writing? Thanks Wrrsimone (talk) 22:01, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I can't see a 'close paraphrasing' tag on Council for Higher Education in Newark, (CHEN)?  Chzz  ►  22:02, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Teens for Jeans

Hi Chzz,

I was hoping you could give me a little more detail about why my article was not approved. What sorts of things would show the importance of the subject / encyclopedic worthiness? Is there something more specific I should include, like a paragraph dedicated to arguing its importance? Or should I include more links showing its large media coverage? I'm just wary of being declined for seeming biased about the subject if I argue to strongly for its importance.

Thanks! 50.74.11.221 (talk) 22:14, 1 February 2012 (UTC)Allison[reply]

Several independent reliable sources - such as, some newspaper articles which are substantially about the organization. Not blogs, not listings of events, not PR. It may also help to read the business FAQ.  Chzz  ►  22:27, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dave McGillivray, Race Director

Hi Chzz - I am not sure why Dave McGillivray's bio was declined. He is an author and the race director for the Boston Marathon since 1980s - and he made history when he ran across the US in 1978. He has been profiled in the Boston Globe, the Boston Herald, and countless other bpulications if you Google him, which I cited a few. Can you explain why the bio we submitted was turned down? I followed the guideliness so any advice would be good. Thanks so much.

BARwolfe - Beryl Wolfe, owner of Wolfe News Wire and Wolfe PR (I have worked with Dave McGillivray and Olympic Gold Medalist Joan Benoit Samuelson on the TD Bank Beach to Beacon 10K since the year 2000.) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Barwolfe (talk • contribs) 22:08, 1 February 2012 (UTC) Beryl Wolfe[reply]

Hi again - I took out the Wiki references - someone had told me to cross link him so you see he is mentioned on the Boston Marathon page but I took that ot now - there are tons more articles about him out there since he ran across the US - twice - and has organized so many road races - I can add probably 25 more articles about him, if you want. But hopefully the wiki ones are gone now and that will help? thanks so much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Barwolfe (talk • contribs) 22:33, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It needs direct, inline references so that we can see where the facts can be checked. For example, it says, In 1978, McGillivray ran across the U.S. from Medford, Oregon to his hometown of Medford, Mass., covering a total distance of 3,452 miles and ending to a standing ovation - where could I make sure that is correct?
Please see WP:REFB for help with it. Cheers,  Chzz  ►  00:42, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Blackburner

Hello Chzz, I'm a bit confused. What is the issue that prevents this from being submitted for review? Thanks Fanoflife27 (talk) 22:59, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

As it says, "This suggestion doesn't sufficiently explain the importance or significance of the subject. See the speedy deletion criteria A7 and/or guidelines on music-related topics. Please provide more information on why this musical artist or musical recording is worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. Thank you." - and it refers to Wikipedia:Notability (music).
Listings at "lastfm" and "allmusic" and similar are not appropriate to show that 'notability'. Nor is iTunes, where it is sold. The others don't seem to be reliable sources, and/or son't show "significant coverage". It would require, for example, several newspaper/magazine articles that are about the band. See also WP:VRS, WP:IRS.  Chzz  ►  23:05, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]


Not a problem. I'm still learning. I guess selling 50,000 downloaded songs isn't worthy. Neilsen Soundscan is not reliable source nor the fact every band Skyla Talon has been in..not to mention the man himself is recognized & consider worthy musician. But to suggest to delete that which is already alive and breathing and recognized is confusing. So if I get that Spin Magazine review would that make this a worthy enough for you to judge it? How many is sufficient for you? Which by there are thousand of artist who only have myspace pages. How did they get included. One can guess Thank you but I had three other volunteers from the chat help. I asked in this was good enough. If you wont help me Chzz I'll go back to the HELP chat & find someone not so judgmental to not let their baise opinion what music is or not. Fanoflife27 (talk) 23:37, 1 February 2012 (UTC)23:26, 1 February 2012 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Fanoflife27 (talk • contribs) [reply]

OK, sure; best of luck with it.  Chzz  ►  00:42, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Zeyn paradox

i do think this article of importance, it provides a new insight into economics — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.54.29.40 (talk) 23:39, 1 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All articles need references; please see WP:FIRST.  Chzz  ►  00:43, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/The Tea Club (Band)

hi

so besides "remarkable drummer" is that the only issue? -Jon Jpyarger (talk) 00:31, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

No; my main concern was the referencing. The neutrality is a side-issue, really. As I said, "=Please remove anything that cannot be verified in reliable sources. All the facts should be referenced - and in particular, when it's about living people.".
For example, it says, The band consists of Patrick McGowan (Guitars & Vocals), Dan McGowan (Guitars & Vocals), Becky Osenenko (Keyboards), Charles Batdorf (Bass), and Joe Rizzolo (Drums). - are those names published in a reliable source? Are they well-known? See WP:NPF / WP:BLPNAME.
It says, They are known for writing songs of an epic nature - according to who?
The information needs to be verifiable. For help with the formatting, please see WP:REFB. Cheers,  Chzz  ►  00:46, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Copyediting

I posted this on the AFC discussion page, but since most of my concerns are from your accepts, I'll put it here.

A bit of a concern here. If you accept a submission, at least make sure that it complies with the WP:MOS and doesn't have some common errors. Many of these fixes are trivial- I've fixed quite a few.

  1. Bold the title the first time it appears in text.
  2. Correct the headline hierarchy. (2 equal signs, then 3, etc.)
  3. Make sure headlines are not double-bolded.
  4. etc.

Would help everybody out a lot! A412 (Talk * C) 00:36, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I know. However, over the past few hours, I have personally reduced the AFC backlog from around 650 to around 150; thus, I did not have the time to do all the editing I'd like. I'd like to add categories, to assess the article, to format and add details to references, and many other things; however, if I had been doing so, I would have been unable to clear the backlog. Fixing poor formatting is easy enough, and usually does happen as natural editing - so to be honest, I'd rather work through the huge backlog that is clogging up the system, and not worry too much about formatting. But sure, thanks for letting me know; I do know all the formatting stuff; I've worked on lots of GA/FA articles too.  Chzz  ►  00:40, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, was just letting you know. :) A412 (Talk * C) 00:46, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Renal Denervation

Hello - thank you for the comments on the submission. Please forgive me also - I am not a regular submittor of materials. Some advice please: Renal devervation is predicted by some thought leaders in the cardiovascular medicine world to be possibley the single fastest growing surgical procedure in medicine in the coming decade - more prevalent that heart bypass or even drug eluding stents. Considering the many billions spent by healthcare each year on hypertension drugs, the emergence of this simple procedure to lower blood pressure could mean a great deal to both patients and the healthcare system - savings in the $billions each year and growing with the aging of society. Would it be helpful to cite some of these things at the outset of the article. Thanks for the advice 98.189.10.100 (talk) 00:49, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'm sure it has the potential to become significant, but at the moment I don't believe the article shows "significant coverage" - that's the issue. Wikipedia, as an encyclopaedia, does not provide innovative information; we only publish articles about things that others have already written about (reasonably extensively) - we don't permit original research or any kind of speculation. If/when there are several articles that are specifically about "Renal denervation" then we could accommodate an article about it.  Chzz  ►  01:04, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Gateway Arts District

Good evening, this article is written in a neutral point of view, providing the facts as they are to this community. Please provide suggestions so I may improve this listing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Crazyartsyguy (talk • contribs) 01:49, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

It is not neutral; for example, safe, vital, and attractive mixed-use environment that celebrates the diversity of art, well-known businesses.
Please check the over-use of the word "several"; see also WP:TONE.
Stick to facts, supported by appropriate reliable sources.
It says it is a focal point for art activities of all types - according to who? Ditto for This growing region is known for socializing, entertaining, dining, shopping, arts, crafts and safe, vital, and attractive.
Hope that helps,  Chzz  ►  01:59, 2 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Your review at Wikipedia:Articles for creation/Bob Mirams

Hi there, thanks for your help.

I'm new to wikipedia but couldn't believe there was no article about Bob Mirams. Now that I've tried to start one, I can see why - there is very little information available about him online.

Not sure what else I can do to have this article accepted - I can add some of his art (with his signature)

Thats about it. Suggestions?

regards theescapegoat

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