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Reviewer: Ankitbhatt (talk · contribs) 17:10, 21 April 2012 (UTC)
Minor points
I'm not going to do a very in-depth analysis of the article yet. However, a single look at the article throws up a few points.
- Lead requires expansion.
- Too many one or two-line sentences classified as separate paragraphs. I suggest merging them with other paragraphs.
- Even in other sub-sections, there is awkward paragraph splitting. I suggest the main contributors to either collect more information and expand small paragraphs, or do some re-arranging and tweaks and collapse certain section to a smaller number of bigger paragraphs.
- References should be checked for internal consistency. Additionally, it would be preferable if all reference titles use sentence case.
- Try to get rid of red links. It disrupts reading flow. Either create the necessary articles or simply remove the [[]] part.
More to come. ~*~AnkitBhatt~*~ 17:10, 21 April 2012 (UTC)