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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Status (talk | contribs) at 20:32, 15 July 2012 (review, on hold). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 20:25, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Taylor was named to the New South Wales team --> Named? Appointed, maybe? I see this type of wording throughout the article as well, so try to fix it in other places as well.
  • Personal --> Personal life
  • A few paragraphs are way too small, and should be bonded together.
  • Other than that, I have found no issues with the article. Great work!
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