User talk:Sachdhanjal

Hi everyone Paivajen (talk) 19:14, 10 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! (Amdwarka (talk) 23:18, 10 August 2012 (UTC))[reply]

HelloKimeun (talk) 02:13, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hey everyone. Today in class we divided up our parts and found the research we need. There were only 3/5 of us in class today, so we had decided upon three topics. We are going to add to the history section that is currently on the Wikipedia page and also add two sections. One on Awards and one on Community Involvement. Sach, Amrita and I have decided on those three topics. The three of us are doing Community Involvement and an addition to the History section. For Navaneetha and Melany, please look for research regarding the awards the company has won. If you have any other ideas, please suggest them. However, we haven't had a chance to meet up with you guys yet to discuss the research we had found for our part, that's why we had created a new section for the two of you to work on. Just a reminder, all editing is to be done in the sandbox. Paivajen (talk) 21:36, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Cheesecake Factory has a lot of community involvement. On their official site, it said they partnered up with "Feeding America"- the organization. It also says they donated over 43 thousand pounds. this would be a good thing to add to the Charitable involvement part Paivajen (talk) 21:55, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Another fact i just read: "Feeding America supplies food to more than 25 million Americans each year" They also partnered up with Salvation Army and supplied meals for individuals at Salvation Army centres in 13 different cities. This is also another important point to add.

For Navaneetha and Melany, i found some information about awards they have recently won. This year they won Nation’s Restaurant News MenuMasters Award and last year they won Best Practices Award. This is taken directly from the official site - there is a lot more. Apart from the information available there if you search the awards, you will end up with much more information.Paivajen (talk) 22:10, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

For Amrita- i just noticed this, there are facts on the side of the screen when looking at the charitable givings. I think we should consider them when editing our section. Paivajen (talk) 22:17, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Also, for Sach, i think i found the same article you were looking at in class, and it has a lot more information on the history than the official site has. Most of what is on the official site is mentioned on the Wikipedia page already- not a bad place to start though. Paivajen (talk) 22:26, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Jennifer, sounds good I will take a look at additional research which can help us with the charitable work/community involvement as well as the facts which you mentioned. Sach, you are editing the history part, correct? Amdwarka (talk) 23:23, 14 August 2012 (UTC) Jennifer and I decided we could edit the charitable work/community involvement together, however if anyone has any other suggestions please let us know! Amdwarka (talk) 23:23, 14 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hey guys- before I say anything, again, I'm sorry if I caused any troubles and thank you all for your understanding. I'm starting to doing some research on the awards they've won, and as Jen has mentioned, I'm on their official websites. They have won many awards and it seems like their official website is a good source to begin with, however, my only concern for this is that I'm not sure how I can get "more" out of this. Any ideas?Kimeun (talk) 02:12, 15 August 2012 (UTC) Sorry, Jen, I missed the part where you suggested about doing research on awards. Kimeun (talk) 02:20, 15 August 2012 (UTC) And for Navaneetha, as Jennifer has mentioned, I think we should split the work in half to do research on each awards they have won. Kimeun (talk) 02:27, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

For Navaneetha, there are 17 awards they have won in total, so I will do further research on 8 of them (or 9, if you'd like) starting from the very first award they've won. Kimeun (talk) 02:45, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hello everyone, sorry for the delayed response! Amrita, I'm going to add as much as I can to the history section. Jennifer, I found that article on fundinguniverse.com very useful. There's a gold mine of history related information there, so I will use that as one of my major sources, but I will continue to look for other sources of information. Navaneetha and Melany, we missed you both in class today! I hope we all know what we're working on, so let's finish this by tomorrow night. Good luck everyone :-) Sachdhanjal (talk) 04:19, 15 August 2012 (UTC) Sach[reply]

Sach- don't forget, we need screen shots of the before and after. :) Also, has anyone heard from Navaneetha? I don't see her talking on here so i'm just wondering if she has read this talk page. Paivajen (talk) 17:11, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

@Jennifer, I took screenshots of the before page yesterday. Other than the before and after screen shots, what else are we meant to e-mail to our TA? Sachdhanjal (talk) 17:25, 15 August 2012 (UTC) Sach[reply]

Ok, so yesterday we were wondering where Sach's sandbox was for us to make the edits. If you go to the CCT110 Wikipedia page where our names and topic is listed, the link to his sandbox is right there! I'm just mentioning it in case you guys didn't realize yet. I guess we have to copy and paste everything that is currently on the Wikipedia page for The Cheesecake Factory into the sandbox and make our edits there! Jennifer, I informed Navneetha to look at the talk page, however I'm not sure if she did yet. Sach, here is what you need to email the TA: According to the instructions it says "Students will hand in to their tutorial leader electronic copies of screenshots of the state of the chosen article "before" and "after" the edits, highlighted or otherwise annotated to clearly show the changes that were made, as well as a copy of the sandbox and relevant talk pages (i.e. the talk page for the sandbox and the chosen article). Only one group member, the "designated spokesperson", should make this submission, and a cover page should be attached that indicates: the group name, the tutorial section, the topic, each group member's username, and each group member's real name and student number." I believe that's all, if I am missing anything we need to email please post what else would need to be emailed! Amdwarka (talk) 17:35, 15 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]