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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Calum Smith (talk | contribs) at 11:45, 1 May 2006. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

I wrote this article partly from various regional websites for Rhee Taekwon-Do, and partly from my own experience in the school BryanJones

This looks like an advertisement for the school. Could someone with expertise in TKD fix it? ZacharyS 03:39, 31 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I would say because it doesnt give a link to a school it isnt really an advertisement for a single school but a history of one master and the changes he has made to the art thoughout his life. I am very tempted to write something similar for several other masters of this art. Mels0n 17:45, 16 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

You're right, it does seem like an advertisement. I study Rhee Taekwon-Do (have for 3 years), and one of the things that gets me about this is the constant reference to Master Rhee by his super long title. Now, that's acceptable in the grading hall when we address him with full respect, but I think for the purposes of this article it is unnescessary clutter, so I'm going to remove it. Everything else is true, even if it might slightly overstep the boundary of Neutrality in terms of POV, it's nothing serious really... Calum Smith 11:45, 1 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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