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Jacob G. 2nd Review

  • Good introduction that outlines the idea, purpose, and importance of the page. I don't think it matters that it's not on a basic level of understanding because that content is inside.
  • One or two areas where I got tripped up on wording.
  • Great formatting of the article and use of figures.
  • Great second figure, just wish the text was bigger on the second figure.

Overall, I think this is the best wiki page I've read from our class. It is to the point but says a lot. It's smooth in delivery and the figures benefit the reading. I don't know how to judge if it's on the same level that we are supposed to write it to because it doesn't seem like it can be simplified. I think you could make a good argument for this current draft being the best way to present this information.