Talk:Driverless tractor

Driverless tractor is currently an Agriculture, food and drink good article nominee. Nominated by Eems.p (talk) at 14:52, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

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Please don't delete this page! It is for a class project and will be further filled out and worked on. However, help editing or adding information is always welcome! Thanks! --Eems.p (talk) 23:54, 4 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Critiques

You need to include some pictures of the driverless tractor. --Youngpenn (talk) 15:48, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

If you're having a hard time finding images, you might be able to get photos from John Deere. You could try contacting their media relations people (link here) to get photos and permission to use them on Wikipedia.--Brodmont (talk) 15:53, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

In your notes section number 7 lacks a proper citation. I do not recall the proper form for a website like that one but you should reference the Template:Citation page. --Youngpenn (talk) 16:06, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

History Section

The phrase "In the years proceeding" is probably correct technically, but it might be better to use language like "in subsequent years" or "as time went on" or "later" -- just to be a little clearer about your meaning.--Brodmont (talk) 16:00, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]