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Hi, would you mind reviewing my edits for behavior modification on my wiki page? Cgchapman (talk) 00:37, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Christina, I guess you mean User:Cgchapman/sandbox? The first paragraph is fine, but the part starting with "A classic program of behavior modification was developed at Emery Air Freight," is not quite. It is not very interesting to read about the problems at this company. What would be much more relevant is the question if this really works. To find out, what you need is a review, someone who has read several studies about the use of positive reinforcement in organizations. Also, you need to change the title of the section, because a section called Behavior modification in an article called Behavior modification is not such a good idea. With friendly regards, Lova Falk talk 07:35, 7 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]