User talk:PatriciaAnnMora
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Message added 02:16, 11 June 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.
Charmlet (talk) 02:16, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
I realize that there are not references cited. They were stripped out from the document when I cut and pasted it from Word into Wiki. I found this odd and was simply trying to get this done quickly. Thanks!
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Message added 03:32, 11 June 2013 (UTC). You can remove this notice at any time by removing the {{Talkback}} or {{Tb}} template.
Charmlet (talk) 03:32, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
Your AfC submission
Hi Patricia. I took a quick look at your submission and made some minor tweaks. Though I don't do articles for creation reviewing, I wanted to drop some notes here to help you along, since you've got the makings of an article, with some very specific identifiable problems. Number one is the lack of sourcing; everything else is a side note and not even worth mentioning until you tackle that issue. I think you should take a tour through the Wikipedia:Tutorial to get an overview on editing, our markup, what we expect, etc. Then head on over to Help:Referencing for beginners. The article will not be accepted because it lacks citations to reliable sources. We generally expect such referencing to be done through inline citations, and because the article contains many quotes, you need to know that each and every one needs to be cited using one (see the verifiability policy). Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 12:33, 11 June 2013 (UTC)